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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 September 2020 and 22 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Rui Shen 11. Peer reviewers: Alicialuo, Yile5, Kukukukiki0.

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theres a picture at http://www.wooster.edu/chinese/Chinese/courses/chinese_youth/writer/yu_ta_fu.html but i dont know about the copyright.

The lead section

I added more information about the lead section because there is no clear explanation of the article's major sections. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 11:12, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about the lead section because this section is not comprehensive enough. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 11:22, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I checked the grammar and spelling.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 11:53, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Added more information

I added more information about Yu Dafu's work "Sinking" because I found that the work "Sinking" was mentioned on the current page, but there is not much information about it. Among Yu Dafu's representative literary works, "Sinking" is the most widely known, so I want people to learn more about his works. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 03:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added a new section named Writing style because I think the most important thing for a writer is that his character is reflected in his writing style. Thus, the best way to understand a writer is to read his works and understand his writing style. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 03:32, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more specific information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I think the more details, the more complete the article is, making the readers better understand Yu Dafu's writing style. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 03:44, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's main themes because one of his themes is well displayed in "Sinking", I think it is necessary to add in this section. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 04:10, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because there is a new change in his writing style. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 03:14, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more specific information about Yu Dafu's writing style because there is a good example that can reflect his writing style has changed. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 03:21, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's main themes because I want to make the contextual connection more natural. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 10:19, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because this section is missing a general opening paragraph. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 10:40, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I want to add a general opening paragraph's content. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 10:50, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I want to improve the general opening paragraph's content. This was copied from my sandbox User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 11:01, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Grammar and spelling

I checked Yu Dafu's early years section grammar and spelling.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 12:12, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I checked the Second Sino-Japanese War section grammar and spelling.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 12:26, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I checked Yu Dafu's writing style section grammar and spelling.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 12:42, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I checked Yu Dafu's main themes section grammar and spelling.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 12:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

I deleted the reference that does not work, and it shows 404 Not Found.--Rui Shen 11 (talk) 13:06, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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+==Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment==
+[[File:Sciences humaines.svg|40px]] This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between <span class="mw-formatted-date" title="2020-09-01">1 September 2020</span> and <span class="mw-formatted-date" title="2020-12-22">22 December 2020</span>. Further details are available [[Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Alberta/EASIA_236_(Fall_2020)|on the course page]]. Student editor(s): [[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]]. Peer reviewers: [[User:Alicialuo|Alicialuo]], [[User:Yile5|Yile5]], [[User:Kukukukiki0|Kukukukiki0]].
+{{small|Above undated message substituted from [[Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment]] by [[User:PrimeBOT|PrimeBOT]] ([[User talk:PrimeBOT|talk]]) 05:23, 18 January 2022 (UTC)}}
 ==Untitled==
-theres a picture at [http://www.wooster.edu/chinese/Chinese/courses/chinese_youth/writer/yu_ta_fu.html http://www.wooster.edu/chinese/Chinese/courses/chinese_youth/writer/yu_ta_fu.html] but i dont know about the copywright.
+theres a picture at [http://www.wooster.edu/chinese/Chinese/courses/chinese_youth/writer/yu_ta_fu.html http://www.wooster.edu/chinese/Chinese/courses/chinese_youth/writer/yu_ta_fu.html] but i dont know about the copyright.
+==The lead section==
+I added more information about the lead section because there is no clear explanation of the article's major sections. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 11:12, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about the lead section because this section is not comprehensive enough. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 11:22, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I checked the grammar and spelling.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 11:53, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+==Added more information==
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's work "Sinking" because I found that the work "Sinking" was mentioned on the current page, but there is not much information about it. Among Yu Dafu's representative literary works, "Sinking" is the most widely known, so I want people to learn more about his works. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 03:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
+I added a new section named Writing style because I think the most important thing for a writer is that his character is reflected in his writing style. Thus, the best way to understand a writer is to read his works and understand his writing style. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 03:32, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
+I added more specific information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I think the more details, the more complete the article is, making the readers better understand Yu Dafu's writing style. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 03:44, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's main themes because one of his themes is well displayed in "Sinking", I think it is necessary to add in this section. This was copied from my sandbox which can be found here: [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 04:10, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because there is a new change in his writing style. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 03:14, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more specific information about Yu Dafu's writing style because there is a good example that can reflect his writing style has changed. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 03:21, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's main themes because I want to make the contextual connection more natural. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 10:19, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because this section is missing a general opening paragraph. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 10:40, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I want to add a general opening paragraph's content. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 10:50, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I added more information about Yu Dafu's writing style because I want to improve the general opening paragraph's content. This was copied from my sandbox [[User:Rui Shen 11/Yu Dafu]]--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 11:01, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+==Grammar and spelling==
+I checked Yu Dafu's early years section grammar and spelling.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 12:12, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I checked the Second Sino-Japanese War section grammar and spelling.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 12:26, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I checked Yu Dafu's writing style section grammar and spelling.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 12:42, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+I checked Yu Dafu's main themes section grammar and spelling.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 12:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
+==References==
+I deleted the reference that does not work, and it shows 404 Not Found.--[[User:Rui Shen 11|Rui Shen 11]] ([[User talk:Rui Shen 11|talk]]) 13:06, 17 December 2020 (UTC)