Talk:Senkaku Islands dispute

Proposed section and table

Just after the introduction and before the dispute discussion begins, would it be helpful to add a "Geography" section with the following table? Note that Chinese names come first in this table.

Geography

Table of of disputed Islands, Chinese first

Table of of disputed Islands Chinese name Japanese name coordinates Area(km2) Highest elevation(m) Diaoyu Dao (釣魚島) Uotsuri Jima (魚釣島) 25°46′N 123°31′E 4.32 383 Huangwei Yu (黃尾嶼) Kuba Jima (久場島) 25°56′N 123°41′E 1.08 117 Chiwei Yu (赤尾嶼) Taishō Jima (大正島) 25°55′N 124°34′E 0.0609 75 Nan Xiaodao(南小島) Minami Kojima (南小島) 25°45′N 123°36′E 0.4592 149 Bei Xiaodao(北小島) Kita Kojima (北小島) 25°45′N 123°36′E 0.3267 135 Da Bei Xiaodao(大北小島/北岩) Okino Kitaiwa(沖ノ北岩) 25°49′N 123°36′E 0.0183 nominal Da Nan Xiaodao (大南小島/南岩) Okino Minami-iwa(沖ノ南岩) 25°47′N 123°37′E 0.0048 nominal Fei Jiao Yan (飛礁岩/飛岩) Tobise (飛瀬) 25°45′N 123°33′E 0.0008 nominal

Three lines indicate the express POV of Japan, the PRC and the ROC ... and "feasible region" is the intersection of disparate data sets which are undisputed in our article about the Senkaku Islands?

Maybe this is not the way to handle this. Could this be a consructive step? --Tenmei (talk) 23:10, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Some of the disputed aspects of this section are mirrored at Talk:Senkaku Islands#Dual-name usage in text, captions and table. --Tenmei (talk) 17:27, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Geography section intro sentences

The previous sentence said that a dispute about the names is a proxy for a larger dispute. Unless there is a reliable source making this claim, then it's original research and cannot be included. Furthermore, I don't even think it's true--it makes it sound like the main public debate is about the names, and that that debate is hiding the deeper territorial debate. But in every bit of research I've done for this and the main article, the actual issue is always portrayed as a territorial dispute, with the name dispute being secondary. That is, this debate is not the same as the Sea of Japan naming dispute. China does not go to international conferences, diplomatic settings, or news reports and argue "These islands should be called Diaoyu!" Instead, they go to these settings and say "These islands belong to China!" Thus, there's no "proxying" going on here. If someone has a reliable source that uses that terminology, then I suppose we can consider including that, although it probably belongs in a section other than Geography. Qwyrxian (talk) 23:54, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

I also raised this point in the Tenmei's thread in Talk:Senkaku Islands. As you said, the naming is only a dispute amongst we editors and is not actual matter of dispute between China and Japan. Bobthefish2 (talk) 08:09, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Re-formatted inline note

Perhaps this format will make it easier to discuss a disputed article in a reliable source? In this format, the MOFA web page is the core of the supporting citation; and redundant clarity or emphasis is provided by: restatement + and see + compare. --Tenmei (talk) 23:27, 29 January 2011 (UTC)

The noun concatenation may help to describe this parsed format. --Tenmei (talk) 23:39, 29 January 2011 (UTC)

People's Daily (8 Jan 1953): disputed sentence + inline citation support

Disputed sentence: The People's Daily, a daily newspaper, which is the organ of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China (CPC), had written that Senkaku islands is the part of Japanese territory in 1953. Inline citation note: Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan, Q&A, Senkaku Islands, Q4/A4.3; retrieved 29 Jan 2011; restatement Representative Office of Japan to PNA, Newsletter #2, November 2010; see Item 3; excerpt, "... an article in the People’s Daily dated January 8, 1953, under the title of “Battle of people in the Ryukyu Islands against the U.S. occupation”, made clear that the Ryukyu Islands consist of 7 groups of islands including the Senkaku Islands"; accord Embassy of Japan in Israel, Newsletter #2, October 2010; see Item 4; and see Suganuma, Unryu (2001). Sovereign Rights and Territorial Space in Sino-Japanese Relations: Irredentism and the Diaoyu/Senkaku Islands. University of Hawaii Press. p. 127. ISBN 0824824938. To make matters worse, when on January 8, 1953, Renmin Ribao [People's Daily], the official propaganda organ for the Communist Party, criticized the occupation of Rukyu Islands(or Okinawa Prefecture) by the United States, it stated that "the Ryukyu Islands are located northeast of our Taiwan Islands...including Senkaku Shoto. According to this statement, the PRC recognized that the Diaoyu (J:Senkaku) Islands were a part of Liuqiu Islands (or Okinawa Prefecture). In other words, the Diaoyu Islands belonged neither to Taiwan nor to mainland China, but to Japan. compare "Why Japan claims the Senkaku Islands". Asahi shimbun. 2010-09-25.; excerpt, "In his book "Gendai Chugoku Nenpyo" (Timeline on modern China), Masashi Ando referred to a People's Daily article dated Jan. 8, 1953, which makes reference to the "Senkaku Islands in Okinawa"; Ando, Masashi (2010). (in Japanese). Iwanami shoten. p. 88. ISBN 978-4-00-022778-0. 「人民日報」が米軍軍政下の沖縄の尖閣諸島(当時の中国の呼び方のまま. 現在中国は「釣魚島」という)で日本人民の米軍の軍事演習に反対する闘争が行われていると報道. 「琉球諸島はわが国台湾の東北および日本九州島の西南の間の海上に散在し、尖閣諸島、先島諸島、大東諸島、沖縄諸島、大島諸島、吐噶喇諸島、大隅諸島など7つの島嶼からなっている」と紹介(新華月報：1953-7) {{cite book}}: Missing or empty |title= (help); Unknown parameter |trans_title= ignored (|trans-title= suggested) (help); read Google Chinese-English translation</ref>

Tenmei, there is no "dispute". The translation is totally wrong and the claims based on that translation are also wrong. Yes, there were many Japanese sources that believed it, but so did many American Republican media believed Obama to be a Muslim.

The matter was beyond settled (and you were there when we discussed it) but it appeared User:Oda Mari and User:John Smith's loved the false information so much that they'd do anything to present it as truth.

If you would like to convince me of your good faith and editorial integrity, you can start by removing all contents and references associated with that Remin Ribao article. Bobthefish2 (talk) 03:37, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Parsing argument content — acknowledging categories of constructive comments:
* Refuting the Central Point
* Refutation
* Counterargument
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Identifying remarks which are unhelpful:
* Contradiction
* Responding to Tone
* Ad Hominem

Bobthefish2 -- This may a good time to remind you of something you already know. The first paragraph at WP:V explains:

"The threshold for inclusion in Wikipedia is verifiability, not truth-— that is, whether readers are able to check that material added to Wikipedia has already been published by a reliable source, not whether we think it is true."

WP:AGF is drained of meaning by WP:POKING — which is a wiki-speak way of echoing what John Smith's meant when he suggested "put the spade down and stop digging" here.

Perhaps you might consider alternative approaches:

• No — these words are poking

• Oda Mari and John Smith's "loved the false information so much that they'd do anything to present it as truth"
• Tenmei ... "to convince me of your good faith and editorial integrity, you can start by removing"

• Better — these words encourage collaborative editing

• Reliable source citations which contradict or rebut the explicit and verifiable support for one sentence about a January 8, 1953 article in People's Daily include ....

Bobthefish2 -- your recent edits and your future choices are paired with unsurprising consequences. --Tenmei (talk) 07:21, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Tenmei, I don't like your "concatenated" form of citation because (1) it makes unable to reuse the citation for other part as you experienced this time. (2) it decrease the readability. However if you accept my modification to the citation, I accept your format only in this case. ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 10:06, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

The concatenated citation format was removed here. --Tenmei (talk) 17:50, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Revert

This edit here restored text that Bobthefish2 blanked out. Bobthefish2 -- Please "stop digging".Bobthefish2 -- Please re-think your confrontational strategy; and please reconsider how your recent edits and your future choices are paired with unsurprising consequences. --Tenmei 17:52, 30 January 2011

Next step towards agreement

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• Avoid posting the same thread in multiple forums. This fragments discussion of the idea. Instead, start the discussion in one location, and, if needed, advertise that in other locations using a link. If you find a fragmented discussion, it may be desirable to move all posts to one location, and linking to it. Make sure you state clearly in edit summaries and on talk pages what you have done and why.

It is probably best to leave our archives undisturbed; and instead, relevant excerpts are consolidated in a collapsed format below:

Talk:Senkaku Islands dispute/Archive 1 — 7-Dubious addition

Talk:Senkaku Islands dispute/Archive 1#Dubious addition As for the Ryukyu and Okinawa issue, please see the source. "To make matters worse, when on January 8, 1953, Renmin Ribao [People's Daily], the official propaganda organ for the Communist Party, criticized the occupation of Rukyu Islands(or Okinawa Prefecture) by the United States, it stated that "the Ryukyu Islands are located northeast of our Taiwan Islands...including Senkaku Shoto. According to this statement, the PRC recognized that the Diaoyu (J:Senkaku) Islands were a part of Liuqiu Islands (or Okinawa Prefecture). In other words, the Diaoyu Islands belonged neither to Taiwan nor to mainland China, but to Japan." It unambiguously states Rukyu Islands(or Okinawa Prefecture) twice. Please refrain from insisting the original research. Even if Ryukyu Islands include a part of Kagoshima, it depends on the context of the story. ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 00:55, 13 October 2010 (UTC) These events are relevant to this dispute because they constitute the reaction of certain population groups towards the dispute at one point. If they portray the Japanese in a negative way, then it is not intended, as the sources I cited are legitimate and were simply reporting observations. Again, if you have any concerns about their reliability, then that's a different matter and I would expect some good research to be done to defend such allegations. Your other point ties directly to one of the reverts you've done in which you've failed to justify. To reiterate, the Japanese source cited is definitely mis-interpreting the Remin Ribao article because this is what the Remin Ribao article said: "琉球群岛散布在我国台湾东北和日本九洲岛西南之间的海面上，包括尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛等七组岛屿，每组都有许多大小岛." which translates to: "Ryukyu Islands are distributed between our nation's Taiwan's northeast and Japan's southwest, including 尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛 (Okinawa Islands)、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛." For the rest of the article, Okinawa was only mentioned as Okinawa Islands (which is different to Okinawa Prefecture). Since you are Japanese and thus are familiar with Chinese characters, I trust you can validate that yourself. If not, then you can ask Chinese editors like Winstonlighter or San9663 to confirm. In the future, I'd appreciate it if you would get to know the context of an argument before butting your head in. Bobthefish2 (talk) 02:02, 13 October 2010 (UTC) I can confirm the literal translation is correct. To be more precise, literally, it reads, ""Ryukyu Islands are scattered on the sea between our nation's Taiwan's northeast and Japan's Kyushu's southwest, including 尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛 (Okinawa Islands)、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛."". To reach a compromise, maybe one solution is to quote the exact lines printed and let the readers to interpret? San9663 (talk) 03:54, 13 October 2010 (UTC) I think two of those islands are not even a part of Okinawa. The paper, if you've seen the complete, original edition, was referring to the United States Civil Administration of the Ryukyu Islands and why the native population (formerly the Ryuku Kingdom, which also spans more than Okinawa) was protesting against U.S. military operations. We probably have an academic author who couldn't read his primary source and didn't check with English sources either. Sigh.99.99.146.104 (talk) 06:24, 13 October 2010 (UTC)

Talk:Senkaku Islands dispute/Archive 1 — 16 Wrapping up some old issues

Talk:Senkaku Islands dispute/Archive 1#Wrapping up some old issues Here are some unresolved issues from this thread. It will be great if we can resolve them once and for all. Bobthefish2 (talk) 01:02, 27 October 2010 (UTC) Still under construction. Will finish the rest bit by bit over the next few days. Bobthefish2 (talk) 20:03, 23 October 2010 (UTC) Issue Supporting Argument Opposing Argument Proposed Action Whether or not Remin Ribao article has said Senkaku Islands belong to Okinawa. This is related to an edit that removes a reference to Okinawa in the figure caption of the article. "... Okinawa is is considered a synonym of Ryukyu. See Ryukyu Islands." -- Oda Mari (talk) 09:49, 12 October 2010 (UTC) "... please see the [secondary] source. "To make matters worse, when on January 8, 1953, Renmin Ribao [People's Daily], the official propaganda organ for the Communist Party, criticized the occupation of Rukyu Islands(or Okinawa Prefecture) by the United States, it stated that "the Ryukyu Islands are located northeast of our Taiwan Islands...including Senkaku Shoto. According to this statement, the PRC recognized that the Diaoyu (J:Senkaku) Islands were a part of Liuqiu Islands (or Okinawa Prefecture). In other words, the Diaoyu Islands belonged neither to Taiwan nor to mainland China, but to Japan." It unambiguously states Rukyu Islands(or Okinawa Prefecture) twice. Please refrain from insisting the original research. Even if Ryukyu Islands include a part of Kagoshima, it depends on the context of the story." ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) "This article is not a textbook of mathematics and the sentence is not a mathematical equation. An author has a privilege to insert his/her own interpretation in the parenthesis. If Okinawa is important in the context (actually it is) and Kagoshima is not, then the author will ignore Kagoshima and insert Okinawa inside the parenthesis. See all these books using "Ryukyu Islands (Okinawa)". [1][2][3][4][5][6]" ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 21:54, 14 October 2010 (UTC) "Japanese [secondary] source cited is definitely mis-interpreting the Remin Ribao article because this is what the Remin Ribao article said: "琉球群岛散布在我国台湾东北和日本九洲岛西南之间的海面上，包括尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛等七组岛屿，每组都有许多大小岛." which translates to: "Ryukyu Islands are distributed between our nation's Taiwan's northeast and Japan's southwest, including 尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛 (Okinawa Islands)、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛." For the rest of the article, Okinawa was only mentioned as Okinawa Islands (which is different to Okinawa Prefecture)" --Bobthefish2 (talk) 02:02, 13 October 2010 (UTC) "Remin Ribao figure said the disputed land was part of Ryukyu islands Remin Ribao figure did not say the disputed land was part of Okinawa islands Ryukyu islands != Okinawa Prefecture" -- Bobthefish2 (talk) 00:35, 15 October 2010 (UTC) "... whatever [a secondary source] said would not change the contents of the Remin Ribao article ...". -- Bobthefish2 (talk) 00:35, 15 October 2010 (UTC) Restore the edit since Ryukyu Islands is not the same as Okinawa and the article only said Senkaku Islands is a constituent of Ryukyu Islands and not the Japanese province of Okinawa. Note: unrelated rows of this table have been omitted -- see archived table here .... Bobthefish2 (talk) 20:03, 23 October 2010 (UTC) I don't believe I've commented on any of the above before, so pardon while I weigh in my opinions: 1) I have no opinon about the Remin Ribao article and its translation--there seems to be no solution to me. Basically, what I see is the supporting side quoting a reliable source about the translation of the Chinese document, and the opposing side saying that the reliable source got the translation wrong. In general, I usually prefer going with the reliable source, but when we're talking about a translation issue, I'm somehow more hesitant...an ideal would be if we had an English language reliable source that said the opposite of the Japanese secondary source; then we could include both interpretations of the Remin Ribao article. Without such a source, I really don't know what to do .... Qwyrxian (talk) 01:40, 27 October 2010 (UTC) Note: unrelated diffs have been omitted -- see archived thread here ....Here's my translation of the three Chinese paragraphs I listed. They are all texts located within the Remin Ribao article: Chinese Text: 琉球群岛散布在我国台湾东北和日本九洲岛西南之间的海面上，包括尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛等七组岛屿，每组都有许多大小岛屿，总计共有五十个以上有名称的岛屿和四百多个无名小岛，全部陆地面积为四千六百七十平方公里。群岛中最大的岛是冲绳诸岛中的冲绳岛（即大琉球岛" English Translation (except for some of the location names): Ryukyu Islands are scattered at a region that is north east to our nation's Taiwan and south west to Japan's 九洲岛. They are seven island groups composed of Senkaku Islands, 先岛诸岛, 大东诸岛, Okinawa Islands, 大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛. Each group of islands have lots of large and small islands. There are more than 50 islands with names and around 400 small islands without names. The total land surface area is 4670 square kilometers. The largest island of all islands is Okinawa Island's Okinawa Island (which is the Large Ryukyu Island). Chinese Text: 美国在一九四五年六月占领了琉球群岛后，就着手在该岛建筑军事基地。 English Translation: After annexing the Ryukyu Islands on June 1945, America has built military base on the islands. Chinese Text: 美国侵略者竟不顾“开罗宣言”、“波茨坦公告”等各项国际协议中都没有规定托管琉球群岛的决定，也不顾苏联政府和中华人民共和国政府的一再声明，更不顾一百万琉球人民的坚决反对，竟勾结日本吉田政府，擅自在它片面制订的对日“和约”中规定：“日本对于美国向联合国提出将北纬二十九度以南的琉球群岛……置于联合国托管制度之下，而以美国为唯一管理当局的任何提议，将予同意。 English Translation: America the invader disregarded Potsdam declaration and associated international treaties which did not decide on governorship of Ryukyu Islands. They also did not care about the words of the People's Republic of China or the opposition of a million Ryukyu natives. Instead, they conspired with the Japanese government and decided by themselves to insert their own rule in the Japanese peace treaty: "Japan will agree to America's suggestion to the U.N. regarding to have the Ryukyu Islands located 29 degrees south of the north latitude.... transfer to U.N. supervision where America is the sole controller." .... Bobthefish2 (talk) 18:48, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

The "Good practices" sub-section at Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines suggests

• Keep discussions focused: Discussions naturally should finalize by agreement, not by exhaustion.

No agreement about an article in the People's Daily has been achieved — see above.

The Wikisource text helps us move beyond this exhausting distraction.

• Chinese Wikisource: 琉球群岛人民反对美国占领的斗争
• Japanese Wikisource: 琉球群島人民による反米闘争
• English Wikisource: Senkaku Islands 1953

Wikisource: 包括尖閣諸島 ... is translated "including the Senkaku Islands"

In the text below, the key phrase 包括尖閣諸島 is recognizable in the middle of the second line. Chinese 琉球群島人民反對美國佔領的鬥爭 　琉球群島散佈在我國台灣東北和日本九洲島西南 之間的海面上，包括尖閣諸島、先島諸島、大東諸 島、冲繩諸島、大島諸島、土噶喇諸島，大隈諸島 等七組島嶼，毎組都有許多大小島嶼、總計共有五 十個以上有名稱的島嶼和四百多個無名小島，全部 陸地面積爲四千六百七十平方公里。群島中最大的 島是冲繩諸島中的冲繩島（即大琉球島），面積一 千二百十一平方公里；其次是大島諸島中的奄美大 島，面積七百三十平方公里。琉球群島綿互遠一千 公里，它的内側是我國東海，外側就是太平洋公 海。 　美國在一九四五年六月佔領了琉球群島後，就著 手在該島建築軍事基地。隨著美國在亞洲大陸上侵 略計劃的破產，琉球基地的建築工程也就更趨積極 起來。遠在美國發動侵略朝鮮戰爭前，美國在琉球 群島的軍事工程就已佔用了琉球三分之一的土地， 用作建造基地的費用超過了兩億美元。其後，琉球 基地的建造計劃一再擴大，而且以更大的速度進行 着。一九五一年六月二十二日「美國新聞與世界報 道」雜誌曾透露齣美國侵略者的野心：「美國在冲 繩島的目標是用空軍獨霸亞洲，要使它成爲太平洋 的最大基地。由冲繩島起飛，Ｂ二十九型轟炸機能達 到亞洲大部分內陸地區，轟炸半徑可能包括中國全 部和西伯利亞大部地區――包括西伯利亞大鐵路。 Ｂ三十六型轟炸機則可達到更遠的距離。」去年九月 八日，冲繩島的美國官員竟公然宣佈：「用來將冲 繩島改變成「太平洋的直佈羅陀」的全部經費將近 四億八千萬美元。建築工作正在按計劃進行，防颱 風的公路、飛機場、兵營、司令部以及其他軍事設 備，將遍佈全島。」另一方面，據不久前日本的報紙 消息稱：美國在冲繩島那霸港入口處的浮島神社 下，已脩建了具有八萬噸容量的三個地下油庫，冲 繩島週圍各島都散佈着基地，共修建有二十幾個大 型飛機場，並且在奄美大島、宮古島、冲之永良部 島等島嶼上都裝置了雷達。許多島上都建成了兼作 飛機跑道用的軍用公路。而美國通訊社也早經不止 一次地承認：「美國Ｂ二十九型轟炸機，每天都從 冲繩島起飛去襲擊北朝鮮」。 　與建築及使用琉球軍事基地同時，美國侵略者積 極陰謀永久霸佔琉球群島。美國佔領琉球後不久， 就獨攬了琉球的一切政權。去年以來，美國侵略者 竟不顧「開羅宣言」、「波茨坦公告」等各項國際 協議中都沒有規定託管琉球群島的決定，也不顧蘇 聯政府和中華人民共和國政府的一再聲明，更不顧 一百萬琉球人民的堅決反對，竟勾結日本吉田政府， 擅自在它片面製訂的對日「和約」中規定：「日本 對於美國嚮聯合國提出將北緯二十九度以南的琉球 群島……置於聯合國託管製度之下，而以美國爲唯 一管理當局的任何提議，將予同意。在提出此種建 議，並對此種建議採取肯定措施以前，美國將有權 對此等島嶼之領土及其居民，包括其領水，行使一 切及任何行政、立法與司法權力。」美國以這樣卑 鄙的手段擅自爲其無限期霸佔琉球群島的侵略行爲 披上「合法」的外衣後，並於去年四月一日在島上 建立了以比嘉秀平爲首的琉球傀儡政府。 　七年多以來，美國侵略者用極其野蠻橫暴的手段， 把琉球群島變成了美國的軍事基地；一百萬琉球人 民在美國的奴役與剝削下，已陷在水深火熱中，過著 極爲悲慘的生活。凡是被美軍圈定爲構築軍事目標 的土地，全部居民便被趕出自己的鄉土，現在僅冲 繩島就有三分之二的土地被徵作軍用。琉球人民不 僅土地被強佔，而且有勞動力的年青人大部被強迫 去參加建築美國軍事基地的奴隸勞動。美國侵略者 用槍刺殘酷地逼迫琉球人民自己去毀滅賴以爲生的 和平家園與漁村，以致全島農田荒蕪、食糧缺乏、 漁業不振，戰前頗具規模的糖業也迄未恢復。同 時，美軍用恐怖的警察統治壓製琉球人民的反抗。 從一九四七年起，美軍就藉口保守軍事機密，禁止 居民旅行全島。美國憲兵及其走狗琉球警察（都是 過去充當過日本軍閥的爪牙現在被美軍起用的當地 流氓）佈滿全島。村落和村落之間佈有鐵絲網，兩 村的村民來往必須先向警察報告並獲得允許，否則 就要以「偷越界綫」治罪，公路旁也佈有鐵絲網， 有的甚至通有電流。因而，琉球人民對外貿易被禁 止，交通被阻撓，耕種和捕魚被限制，一切的自由 權利全被美軍剝奪。而且，戰爭中砲火損毀了全島 房屋的百分之九十，迄今絕大部分琉球人民無處棲 身。去年琉球北部一帶遭受飢荒時，災民竟被迫吃 蜥蜴、蛇等以延續生命。在美軍中做工的琉球工人， 工資只及美國工人的九十分之一，受僱在美軍酒吧 間、飯館及機關中的琉球婦女，每月工資最多只有 四塊美元。荒淫無恥的美軍，也給琉球帶來了大批的 「吉普女郎」，駐在琉球群島的美軍野蠻地凌辱琉球 婦女。美軍隨便槍殺琉球人民的暴行也屢見不鮮。 　琉球群島曾經是美國和日本激戰地區，當地居民 死亡慘重，戰爭創傷深深烙印在琉球人民心中。琉 球人民痛惡戰爭，熱烈要求和平。戰後美國侵略者 變琉球爲基地和奴役剝削的軍事殖民地政策，逼得 琉球人民不得不挺身起來用各種方式展開反對美國 佔領者的鬥爭。最初，爲飢餓所迫的琉球人民，開 始奪取美軍物資，後來逐漸發展爲公開襲擊美軍並 大量奪取軍用物資。據日本報紙消息：前年一月冲 繩島嘉手納機場航空隊的太巴斯（譯音）兵營就被 奪去了九十七件軍火物資。去年一月二十一日，嘉 手納機場航空隊第十八號火藥庫又丟失了火藥七噸 半。島上美軍的軍火倉庫，經常「無故」爆炸。例 如一九四八年八月，在冲繩島附近的一個小島上， 美軍的軍火庫就爆炸了一天一夜，把美軍儲藏在該 島的軍火全部炸毀。去年從台灣傳出的美國新聞電 訊中，曾透露琉球人民遊擊隊和美國佔領軍展開了 激烈鬥爭，琉球人民且曾潛入冲繩島的卡台那（譯 音）機場中將機場破壞。 　被迫爲美軍工作的琉球工人不斷地進行罷工、怠 工以反抗美軍的奴役。去年六月，冲繩島建築美國 軍事工程的琉球工人，不顧美軍的禁令，舉行了要 求提高工資的鬥爭，得到了全島工人的支持。七 月，島上松村包工組的工人舉行反對解僱的罷工， 全島各地都舉行了支持罷工的示威。琉球人民反對 美國佔領的鬥爭已和反對戰爭、保衞和平的運動結 合起來，並正在更有力地向前發展着。去年的五一 節，冲繩島的工人、職員和市民，在琉球人民黨的 號召下，不顧美軍的鎭壓，舉行了保障生活權利大 會和示威大遊行。最近，冲繩島人民又廣泛地展開 了反對琉球傀儡政府爲日本吉田政府徵兵的運動。 　琉球人民反對美國變琉球爲軍事基地、反對美國 奴役統治爭取自由解放與和平的鬥爭不是孤立的， 它是和日本人民爭取獨立、民主與和平的鬥爭分不 開，也是和亞洲及太平洋區域人民以及全世界各國 人民保衞和平的鬥爭分不開的，因而，雖然美國佔 領者對琉球人民實行野蠻鎭壓，但最後勝利必定是 屬於琉球人民的。 — 《人民日報》1953年1月8日 English (Google translation) Ryukyu Islands, the struggle of peoples against U.S. occupation The Ryukyu Islands are scattered in the sea northeast of Taiwan and southwest of the island of Kyushu (Japan), consisting of seven groups including the Senkaku Islands, the Sakishima Islands, the Daito Islands, the Okinawa islands, Oshima Islands, the Tokara islands abd the Osumi islands. Each group has many small islands, a total of more than a total of fifty four hundred names unnamed islands and islets, the total land area of four thousand six hundred and seventy square kilometers. The largest island in the Ryukyu Islands, Okinawa, has an area of 1211 square kilometers. The second largest island is Amami Oshima with an area of seven hundred and thirty square kilometers. The Ryukyu Islands are within the East China Sea at the edge of the Pacific Ocean .... Raw text     Ryukyu Islands scattered in the country northeast of Taiwan and Japan, Kyushu Island, southwest between the sea, including the Senkaku Islands, the first island Islands, Daito Islands, Okinawa Islands, Big Island Islands, earth Karma La islands, Okuma islands, the seven group of islands, Each group has many small islands, a total of more than a total of fifty four hundred names unnamed islands and islets, the total land area of four thousand six hundred and seventy square kilometers. Islands, the largest island in the Okinawa Islands Okinawa Island (Ryukyu Big Island), an area of 1211 square kilometers; followed by the Big Island Islands of Amami Oshima, an area of seven hundred and thirty square kilometers. Ryukyu Islands, a thousand kilometers far from each cotton, it is the inside of the East China Sea, the high seas outside the Pacific Ocean ....

Image of page in January 8, 1953 edition of the People's Daily.

External links

• 《人民日报》1953年、台湾《联合报》1968年关于钓鱼岛的报道（簡体字）
• 琉球群島人民反對美國佔領的鬥爭 《人民日報》1953年1月8日4頁（繁体字）

This "new" information confirms the verified reliable source citations which are already incorporated in the article text.

In the absence of credible support for refutation or counterargument, no reasonable cause for continued disagreement exists. --Tenmei (talk) 17:46, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

Overload! Look, I fully accept that Bobthefish2 thinks the translation is wrong. Heck, I even believe that it's very likely that it's wrong. I believe him (and another editor, I think San9663?) about six and a half thousand times more than I believe Google Translate. In fact, Google translate is essentially useless for anything other than a very broad picture, and we're dealing here with the exact translation of a few very specific words. There's a reason why human translators still make a lot of money despite the existence of (terrible) free translation software and (slightly better than terrible) non-free translation software. So your addition there doesn't help settle the issue (btw, could you collapse the Chinese text and translations? They don't really help us understand the right way forward).

The problem is, (as Bobthefish2 and I have been discussing on his talk page, is that we have reliable sources that say otherwise. The biggest problem is that one of those reliable sources is from a University Press, which is near the top tier of Wikipedia sources. We can "dismiss" the Japanese sources, as they're obviously partisan--at best, they tell us what the Japanese government thinks the article meant. However, I do have a question about the book--does anyone have a copy or can anyone get a copy? That section has a citation/footnote, but it's not in the free Google download of the book. I'm interested to see if they author directly cites Remin Ribao directly, or if the author cites one of the Japanese translations (as this could effect the reliability of that claim).

The other thing is, is there anyone who has any reliable source (i.e., not another Wikipedia editor) which states that the Japanese translation is wrong? If so, I think we can easily solve the problem by saying "Some sources, such as researcher X and the Japanese government, claim that a 1953 Remin Ribao article indicated that... (ref ref ref); however, source Y says that that interpretation is a mistranslation of the original text, which actually meant...(ref)." That would perfectly contextualize the issue--the point is, we show that Japan has made a certain claim, and that that claim may be incorrect. That's kind-of the point behind having a dispute article--that we don't just include the "evidence" from the different sides that's "right", but we provide a wide selection of different evidence. We're trying to describe the "dispute", not the underlying issue of who really does "own" the islands.

Or, in other words, what I'm trying to say is that I believe Bobthefish2 that the Chinese was mistranslated, but I'm loathe to abandon WP:V just based on AGF-ing him. Qwyrxian (talk) 01:48, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

Sorry that I took long to join the discussion. I have to admit I didn't check this thread. It's so long and if I miss or misunderstand something, please point it out. Bobthefish2 wrote "The translation is totally wrong and the claims based on that translation are also wrong". Bobthefish2, would you please specify what part is wrongly translated? I mean one by one on sentence basis? I'm afraid your claim is too vague to understand/accept. I saw Phoenix7777 added a ref. to the article, I don't read it yet though. But can you accept it, Bobthefish2? Oda Mari (talk) 09:47, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

I would prefer a reliable source that backs the translation is totally wrong. Then Bobthefish2 can add that refutation in "Arguments from PRC and ROC" section without removing the well sourced contents. ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 11:15, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

This thread is too long because

Bobthefish2 argues in a way that persuades Qwyrxian. More important, it is too long because Qwyrxian is trying to foster collaborative editing by suggesting extraordinary and extreme AGF. Okay? --Tenmei (talk) 15:30, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

Getting back to the point:

Bobthefish2 -- Now is the time to put your money where your mouth is or to put up or shut up. IMO, you MUST answer Oda Mari's questions here:

Bobthefish2, would you please specify what part is wrongly translated?

In fact, this all around the mulberry bush is about

• one sentence only in Senkaku Islands dispute, okay?
• one sentence only in the People's Daily article, okay?
• one part of the first sentence in the January 1953 article, okay?
• 包括尖閣諸島 ... is translated "including the Senkaku Islands", okay?

Let's work through this and move on. If you don't answer, what are we to think? --Tenmei (talk) 15:51, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

Cumulative vs redundant reliable sources?

←I just reverted the new source Phoneix777 added, since it doesn't add any new support. That source explicitly states that its information is from the Japanese newspaper (if I understood it correctly), thus it's not really adding any new verification beyond the Japanese news articles already referenced there. Unless the source independently verified the Chinese source, I don't see any need in having yet one more. To be honest, I think that even some of the sources that are already there should be taken out (like that Q&A news article), but I didn't want to address that issue until we get a better handle on what's going on with the source overall. 11:20, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

←Qwyrxian, You don't have any privilege to remove a reliable source unless it is proved to be against WP:RS. Whether it adds any new fact isn't the reason to remove the reference. ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 11:34, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

←Um, no. If that's what you think, you badly misunderstand both WP:RS and WP:V. Policies absolutely do not state that "all reliable sources must be added to articles." That would mean that every time anyone adds any reliable source to an article, it must stay forever. That's not only wrong, it's nonsensical. Are you saying I could go the library, and find 100 citations to encyclopedias or articles that state the exact latitude and longitude of the Senkaku Islands, and that once I add them all, they all stay? In fact, WP:RS and WP:V are exclusionary, not inclusionary. That is, they exist to define what may not be in an article, not to define what must be in an article. There are dozens of reasons to remove reliable sources from articles; one of them is that we don't need to duplicate information already in the article. Now, you're welcome to disagree with my revert, but, per standard BRD, it's up to you now to get consensus here on the talk page, not re-insert. I recommend starting a new section at the end of this page to discuss whether or not that reference belongs in the article. I'm going to remove it now until you get consensus to restore it. Qwyrxian (talk) 11:51, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

←I am afraid that your action here impairs your reputation established around the wikipedia. If you actually think you have a privilege to remove a reference because it adds nothing new, please educate me with a guideline or a policy. ―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 12:16, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

←That's impossible--you're asking me to prove a negative, because there is no policy that says, "All reliably sourced info must stay." Look at the wording on WP:V and WP:OR, which are the policies to which WP:RS relates. WP:V says, "The threshold for inclusion in Wikipedia is verifiability, not truth." That is, paraphrasing, "we may only include information which is verified." It does not say, "All verifiable information must be included." Similarly, WP:OR states, "This means that all material added to articles must be attributable to a reliable published source, even if not actually attributed." It does not state, "All material which is attributable to a reliable published source must appear in an article."

Furthermore, I can find all sorts of information about situations in which it is acceptable to remove information found in a reliable source. WP:UNDUE, for instance, says that we don't include opinions from a reliable source if doing so would give them more prominence than the opinion deserves. WP:BLP restricts all sorts of reliable sources, if there is a violation of the presumption of privacy (for instance, we don't usually include the names of children of BLPs, even if we can reliably source them). We don't provide any of the myriad types of information found in WP:NOT, even if it can be reliably sourced.

Again, think of my example above: are you telling me that I can add 100 citations to all different encyclopedias about any given fact in an article, and, so long as they are all reliable? Obviously that's not our goal, so it must be plausible to cut reliable sources based on editorial judgment. Think about any article which uses news articles for sources; based on the way newspapers, particularly online ones, repeat the same based information over and over again, we could end up with several hundred citations on every fact on a historical article. Mind you, it would be wrong to cut the only source supporting something, or two sources which verify different aspects of a sentence/point, but we don't have to have all sorts of references that all say the same thing.

If you still really doubt me, we can take the question to either WP:RSN, or to the talk page of a relevant policy, like WP:V. I have seen editors far more experienced and with better "reputation" than I state essentially the same thing as I'm stating here. I would be happy to go find some if you don't believe all of my rationale here. Qwyrxian (talk) 12:40, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

←Sorry, one follow-up clarification: I said in an edit summary I'm 100% certain of my stance. I want to clarify that I'm not 100% certain that this specific RS shouldn't be in the article. What I am certain of is that the decision to keep the source is an editorial decision, that will require consensus; that is, I'm certain that is it not policy that once an RS is added to an article, it automatically gets to stay and policy says it can't be removed. All I want is for us to have a discussion about that source (obviously, I believe it doesn't belong), not just to have Phoenix7777 re-add it under the grounds that policy says I can't delete an RS. Finally, once we resolve this, I will happily collapse it (or we can just refactor it to a new section now, if Phoenix7777 agrees), since I know this isn't directly related to the topic of this seciton. Qwyrxian (talk) 12:59, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

I have not heard of any policy that states RS' cannot be removed for any reasons. After all, RS' can be wrong and can be outdated. The only thing that's special about RS is that it is easier to be trusted and will not be automatically viewed as dubious.

In contrast to what User:Phoenix7777 suggested, I don't see how User:Qwyrxian is hurting his reputation by second guessing this RS of his. After all, anyone could've done the same, including myself. Bobthefish2 (talk) 22:41, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

This sub-thread is too long because
Qwyrxian is trying to foster collaborative editing by suggesting extraordinary consideration and extreme AGF. Okay?

We are bending over backwards in the attempt to work with Qwyrxian. Multiple verified, reliable source citations are rejected by Bobthefish2 + Qwyrxian.

In other words, unsupported, non-specific allegations about mistakes in translation are hypothetically treated as if there were some valid reason for them -- extreme benefit of the doubt.

In another article, this would be insufficient. The fact that not one citation is added to support refutation or counterargument would resolve the dispute -- but not here.

Okay?

Phoenix7777 adds citations which explicitly rebuts the groundless argument which has been put forward.

In the unique context Bobthefish2 + Qwyrxian alone are responsible for creating, these citations must stay because the explicitly respond to the contrived argument about something wrong in translation. Okay? --Tenmei (talk) 15:30, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

I found the sentence I've been looking for, from WP:NOT: "In any encyclopedia, information cannot be included solely for being true or useful." Then WP:NOT lists a bunch of specifics, but also explicitly says that the list is not exhaustive. In other words, just because something is reliable, doesn't mean it goes in. No response to Tenmei here (we can tackle it in another section), because xe's missing the point of the discussion between me and Phoenix7777. P7 says that I can't delete it because it is against policy to delete RS. I dispute this, and am 100% certain he is wrong. In fact, the points you (Tenmei) raise are exactly the ones I want to discuss. But, per BRD, I want to discuss them first before Phoenix re-adds the info. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:41, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Qwyrxian , please don't bring irrelevant essay WP:NOT. It is not intended for citations but contents. For citations, WP:RS says RS should stay and unRS shouldn't. WP:V says an irrelevant source should be removed, in other words, a relevant source shouldn't be removed. If you proposing a new criteria "If the source is RS and relevant but adds no value, it should be removed", please discuss at WP talk:RS and gain consensus there. Moreover, the source I added adds value because (1) The author is not Japanese while all others are Japanese. (2) It shows the claim was published in as old as 1996, while other source published recently. (3) because this sentence is disputed over its translation or wording, So the wording (probably by author not sankei shimbun) "Senkaku Islands as one of the subgroups of islands that constituted the Ryukyu Islands" adds new value to the sentence.
I am puzzled why you oppose the inclusion of the source ignoring the existent almost duplicated sources from Japanese government.

• Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan, Q&A, Senkaku Islands, Q4/A4.3. "In addition, an article in the People's Daily dated 8 January 1953, under the title of "Battle of people in the Ryukyu Islands against the U.S. occupation", made clear that the Ryukyu Islands consist of 7 groups of islands including the Senkaku Islands."; retrieved 29 Jan 2011.
• Representative Office of Japan to PNA, Newsletter #2, November 2010; see Item 3; "... an article in the People’s Daily dated January 8, 1953, under the title of “Battle of people in the Ryukyu Islands against the U.S. occupation”, made clear that the Ryukyu Islands consist of 7 groups of islands including the Senkaku Islands"; accord Embassy of Japan in Israel, Newsletter #2, October 2010 see Item 4.

These quotes are exactly the same because they come from the official Japanese translation. If you oppose inclusion of either of the source, I would compromise to change the citation as follows.

• Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan, Q&A, Senkaku Islands, Q4/A4.3. "In addition, an article in the People's Daily dated 8 January 1953, under the title of "Battle of people in the Ryukyu Islands against the U.S. occupation", made clear that the Ryukyu Islands consist of 7 groups of islands including the Senkaku Islands."; retrieved 29 Jan 2011.
  • See also Representative Office of Japan to PNA, Newsletter #2, November 2010; see Item 3. Embassy of Japan in Israel, Newsletter #2, October 2010 see Item 4.

―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 22:38, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

My dear Phoenix7777, there appears to be something very wrong with your reasoning. In the above post, you wrote:

WP:V says an irrelevant source should be removed, in other words, a relevant source shouldn't be removed.

This is a common logical fallacy that people commit, particular those not versed in areas of science, mathematics, and logic. Basically, you confused a material conditional with a logical biconditional. To put it in simpler terms, the fates of "relevant" sources and "irrelevant sources" are not required to be polar opposites of each other (i.e. stay vs. remove). Bobthefish2 (talk) 23:50, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

NO CAUSE for locking this article

Nihonjoe wrongly locked this article in order to avert an anticipated edit war; but there was no just cause at this time. At the time the page was locked, I was preparing the table below in answer to a reasonable question asked by Oda Mari. A secondary purpose in making this table was to rebut Qwyrxian wrongful deletion of a properly cited and relevant source.

The most relevant factor is that Bobthefish2 is supported by Qwyrxian in an impossible-to-defend claim with zero citation in support.

I don't understand how zero citation support trumps WP:V+WP:RS, but I do understand that Phoenix777 posted an arguably responsive citation which specifically addressed what I presume he thought was the core issue. Summarizing: In the cited article, the Foreign Minister of Japan explicitly "translated" key phrases of the People's Daily article which Bobthefish2 insists is mistranslated.

Phoenix777 created a crystal clear choice: WP:V+WP:RS vs. mere opinion. Nihonjoe's action effectively turns things upside down.

In effect, Nihonjoe's action announces that someehow Phoenix777 was very wrong, so wrong that drastic action is needed.

In the archived threads, we see in earlier diffs posted by Bobthefish2 and San9663 that translation is a red herring; nevertheless, in the spirit of collaborative editing, Phoenix777 was bending over backwards to help us all move forward. The purpose of the added citation deserves applause, not criticism.

Bottom line: Phoenix7777 edit was consistent with WP:Five Pillars In other words, Nihonjoe's judgment was not consistent with good policy nor was it in the best interests of our collaborative editing project.

IMO, Phoenix7777 edit and the table below are constructive responses to a unique situation. Qwyrxian argued:

"... in other words, what I'm trying to say is that I believe Bobthefish2 that the Chinese was mistranslated, but I'm loathe to abandon WP:V just based on AGF-ing him. Qwyrxian (talk) 01:48, 3 February 2011

Phoenix7777's diff was a measured response to the proposed status quo Qwyrxian sought to contrive; and indeed, I join Phoenix7777 in believing that WP:V+WP:RS must trump empty words.

Translation table Bobthefish2, would you please specify what part is wrongly translated?
Original text	Translation	Translator	Comment
People's Daily article (8 Jan 1953)
琉球群岛散布在我国台湾东北和日本九洲岛西南之间的海面上，包括尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛等七组岛屿，每组都有许多大小岛           — Bobthefish2	Ryukyu Islands are distributed between our nation's Taiwan's northeast and Japan's southwest, including 尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛 (Okinawa Islands)、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛.	Bobthefish2	"...the Japanese source cited is definitely mis-interpreting the Remin Ribao article because this is what the Remin Ribao article said:" 02:02, 13 October 2010
	Ryukyu Islands are scattered on the sea between our nation's Taiwan's northeast and Japan's Kyushu's southwest, including 尖阁诸岛、先岛诸岛、大东诸岛、冲绳诸岛 (Okinawa Islands)、大岛诸岛、土噶喇诸岛、大隅诸岛]	San9663	To reach a compromise, maybe one solution is to quote the exact lines printed and let the readers to interpret?, 03:54, 13 October 2010
	Ryukyu Islands ... "dispersed between the northeastern part of our country’s Taiwan and the southwestern part of Japan’s Kyushu Island" ... consisting of "seven islands groups such as the Senkaku Islands as well as the Sakishima Islands, the Daito Islands, the Okinawa Islands, the Oshima Islands, the Tokara Islands and Osumi Islands"	Japanese Communist Party	"... thus themselves including the Senkakus as part of Japanese territory and explicitly using the Japanese appellation 'Senkaku", 4 October 2010
	Ryukyu Islands ... "dispersed between the northeastern part of our country's Taiwan and the southwestern part of Japan's Kyushu Island" ... including the Senkaku Islands ...	Seiji Maehara	Japan Times citing Foreign Minister Seiji Maehara
琉球群島散佈在我國台灣東北和日本九洲島西南之間的海面上，包括尖閣諸島、先島諸島、大東諸島、冲繩諸島、大島諸島、土噶喇諸島，大隈諸島 等七組島嶼，毎組都有許多大小島嶼、總計共有五 十個以上有名稱的島嶼和四百多個無名小島，全部 陸地面積爲四千六百七十平方公里。           — Wikisource	Ryukyu Islands scattered in the northeast of Taiwan and Japan, China southwestern Kyushu island Between the sea, including the Senkaku Islands, the islands of the first island, all Big East Island, Okinawa Islands, the islands of the Big Island, the islands of soil Karma La, Okuma Islands The seven groups of islands, Each group has many small islands, a total of five More than ten have the name of the unnamed islands and four hundred small islands, all Land area of four thousand six hundred and seventy square kilometers.	Google Translate

I am glad to witness User:Tenmei writing more and more in the form of standard English. This renders it somewhat easier to convince myself to read his comments instead of ignoring them. *Thumbs up*

Anyhow, I don't see anything wrong with what User:Nihonjoe did. User:Qwyrxian found a cause to raise skepticism towards User:Phoenix7777's additions and requested WP:BRD. But for some reason, User:Phoenix7777 decided to ignore and persisted in re-adding the reference(s) in question. Even though he didn't break the 3R rule, he was basically edit-warring in spirit (not to mention the tag-teaming you guys did when I tried to remove something that we agreed on).

As for the references involved and the translation issue, it's pretty obvious. Even User:Oda Mari himself agreed that the reference to Okinawa was a red-herring. If you even pay attention to the University of Hawaii Press article which you guys cited, the logical fallacy involved is obvious (i.e. Ryukyu Islands != Okinawa and Okinawa Prefecture did not exist in 1953). The four of you can tell whatever lies you like about it and come up with any number of references that tell the same lie, but it doesn't change anything.

Shessh, I hate repeating myself. Bobthefish2 (talk) 22:00, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

By the way, I don't see anywhere on this "translation table" of User:Tenmei's that support the notion of the Remin Ribao referring the disputed islands as part of Japan or part of the Okinawa Prefecture -> This is the meat of the dispute. In case everyone's memory fell a bit short, this is what the University of Hawaii Press article said:

To make matters worse, when on January 8, 1953, Remin Ribao [People's Daily], the official propaganda organ for the Communist Party criticized the occupation of the Ryukyu Islands or (Okinawa Prefecture) by the United States, it stated that the Ryukyu Islands are located northeast of our Taiwan Islands... including Senkaku Shoto". According to this statement, the PRC recognized Diaoyu (J: Senkaku Islands) were a part of the Liuqiu Islands (Okinawa Prefecture). In other words, the Diaoyu Islands belonged neither to Taiwan nor to mainland China, but to Japan..

Note the text I bolded. Bobthefish2

Just to be comprehensive, I've quoted the content I found to be fraudulent on Senkaku Islands dispute:

The People's Daily, a daily newspaper, which is the organ of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China (CPC), had written that Senkaku islands is the part of Japanese territory in 1953.[32][33][34][35][36][37][38] (Arguments from Japan section)

An article published by the Renmin Ribao in 1953. It listed "Senkaku Islands" as part of the (then) U.S.-occupied Ryuku Islands (Okinawa).[32] (Figure caption)

It's kind of sad that I have to spell everything out over and over again (since October 2010), but somehow I doubt this will be the last. However, I hope this will convince at least Qwyrxian that he doesn't need to AGF to believe I am right. Bobthefish2 (talk) 22:30, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

It wasn't an "anticipated" edit war, it was one that was already in progress. This is a very controversial topic and everyone involved here is well aware of that fact. Constantly reverting each other because you don't agree with each other is NOT the way to go about things here on this hot topic. Also, locking the article in a particular state does not in any way endorse that state as somehow more correct than any other state. If you read the protection policy, you'll see that clearly spelled out there. Once you can come to a consensus on what needs to be done to the article, we can discuss unprotecting it. If you can't find a way to come to that consensus, then the article will remain protected indefinitely. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WikiProject Japan! 04:37, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...I wasn't keen on this article being locked, and I actually don't think it was an edit war: it was an Addition, revert, re-add, revert, re-add... That's really just 2 reverts each side...but, I can understand Nihonjoe's thinking given the history here. No real damage is done by having the article locked. I'd ask that everyone look to my new section at the bottom, because I think our ability to discuss things here has broken down and we need mediation. Qwyrxian (talk) 04:59, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Geography Section

I propose that the table in the geography section be removed, and replace with {{Main|Senkaku Islands#Geography|Senakuku Islands geography}}, plus a 2-3 prose sentences, stating approximately where the islands are (latitude/longitude), total number, and total area. The whole point of having this (the dispute) article is that we should include all of the general information at Senkaku Islands and only the information which strictly relates to the dispute belongs here. See, for example, how Sea of Japan naming dispute has no geography section (including info only in the lead), Kuril Islands dispute includes no geographic info outside of the map, and Cyprus dispute contains no geographic information at all. In fact, now that I've looked at those examples, I'd prefer to completely removing the geography section, but would consider a "Main" template + short prose to be a not-horrible compromise. Does anyone support keeping the table? Does anyone support removing the whole section? Qwyrxian (talk) 05:13, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

The geography section should not exist due to lack of relevance. The only possible reason to keep it is if Tenmei moves the sea boundary materials to this page (which he should). Bobthefish2 (talk) 05:18, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Let's not put this in terms of what Tenmei should or should not do—that makes it sound as if xe has some sort of special right or responsibility to make changes to the two articles. If consensus says the section should be removed, then it should be removed, whether or not Tenmei agrees. Qwyrxian (talk) 05:24, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

No. Of course he doesn't have special rights, but it'd be much better if he can learn to listen and clean up after himself. After all, those changes were introduced by him. Have you realized how much time we wasted just to dispute those changes he made a while ago (i.e. making copies of tables, removing chinese columns, etc)? I'd much rather prove a point to him so that we don't have to go through this again than having to request consensus on every petulant change he makes. I am sure you'd, by now, realize how exceedingly difficult it is when it comes to getting a consensus on removing pro-Japanese or anti-Chinese contents. I really hate to refer things as anti/pro-Chinese/Japanese, but that's what they are most of the time (and this page is about a dispute between China and Japan). Bobthefish2 (talk) 05:45, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but, in this case, this table is neither pro-Japanese or pro-Chinese--it includes both, and, I think, this article should include neither (as I expressed above). As I'm a big fan of not getting these pages locked, I'm going to wait a day before removing the section, but will proceed with doing so absent a consensus to keep the section in. Qwyrxian (talk) 06:34, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

I am not a big fan of getting these pages locked either. However, I also do not like having to police these pages when I am confident that all that will come out of it is inaccurate information. I can, of course, leave this page to the wolves, but the notion of getting it locked with an admin controlling the editorial process is a good alternative to that. Bobthefish2 (talk) 06:51, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Tenmei has made changes to try to demonstrate that the names are "in dispute". I disagree with xyr interpretation of that article. The LDP (in the article) isn't opposed to the names--they're opposed to Google listing the names, which is Google's way of saying that the territories are in dispute. If you look at the actual quote from the LDP, their point is that "the Senkaku Islands are under the effective control of Japan in both history and the international law." That is, they are disputing Googles (implied) claim that the ownership of the islands is in dispute, not a claim about the names themselves. In any event, the chart is still not the right way to present this information, as demonstrated by the other dispute article I listed above. This particular historical point is already covered in the 2010 section of the dispute chronology. I say, the table (and section) should still go. Qwyrxian (talk) 08:10, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

It appears that Tenmei has not said a word yet and is still adding things. Bobthefish2 (talk) 16:36, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

I agree that it would be sensible to remove the table, instead relying on the one at the main article. Qwyrxian has made some good points above. John Smith's (talk) 10:04, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'm going to remove the table. I'm going to rename the section, "The islands," include a hatnote directing people to the Geography section in the other other article, and leave a 1-3 sentence summary here. If I can find a place, I'll move Tenmei's recent addition about what he perceives as a name dispute; if I can't find a place, I'll leave it here for future reference. Qwyrxian (talk) 23:31, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Here's what I removed: "The names of these islands and rocks have become the subject of an unresolved controversy.".

I put the first reference into the last line of the "2010" section. I replaced the reference that was previously there, because the previous reference is an opinion/analysis piece, therefore not as good a reference per WP:RS. The second reference cannot be in this article, as it is about the Spratly Islands, and including that here is a direct and obvious violation of WP:SYNTHESIS. Nothing in that article mentions the Senkaku Islands, and we are absolutely forbidden from trying to "contextualize" this issue (The SI dispute) in some sort of wider East Asian dispute unless a reliable source already does that. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:05, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Alternate approaches

Former name of this thread was "Efforts to calm the dispute" section.--Tenmei (talk) 01:30, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

What's going on with this section? It doesn't make any sense to me. I feel like we should be able to include the first reference (the Edward Miles book) elsewhere (probably at the very end of the "Beginnings" section). I don't know what the Deng Xiaoping quote is meant to do, or why it belongs anywhere in the article, but maybe it just needs a better placement and context. In any event, the section is definitely mistitled, because the Miles reference itself makes it clear that it wasn't about "calming the dispute"; rather, both sides just agreed not to talk about it. To me, in a section titled "Efforts to calm the dispute", I would expect to read about specific negotiations, conferences, bi-lateral efforts, etc., that were specifically and intentionally directed at reducing tensions about the dispute. If we don't have any examples of such efforts, then I think the section should go. However, I do think that on the Xiaoping quote, I'm missing something, so I appreciate input. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:11, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

This diff should not be archived.

• both sides just agreed not to talk about it

• I would expect to read about specific negotiations, conferences, bi-lateral efforts, etc., that were specifically and intentionally directed at reducing tensions about the dispute. If we don't have any examples of such efforts, then I think the section should go.

This thread diff needs to remain on the active talk page despite conventional archiving practices. --Tenmei (talk) 15:37, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

I also don't see the point with it. The issue seems to flare up every so often, so are leaders on both sides calming things down? Deng was speaking nearly 40 years ago. John Smith's (talk) 21:52, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Tenmei, probably you got your diffs wrong; all you linked to was the diff of me changing the section title, which I did because I thought people might think I meant "This is a new section on the talk page designed to decrease dispute on the talk page," when what I meant was "This is a new section on the talk page about the section in the article called "Efforts to end the dispute." In any event, do you have any actual comment about whether or not that section should stay? Qwyrxian (talk) 21:56, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Also, please stop adding in links to my posts. Those links have nothing to do with what I commented, I find them distracting, and it looks like I said something I didn't say. I've asked this before--please do not edit any other person's comments; if you think such an edit is necessary, you may request they do it, but you may not do it yourself, per WP:TPO. Qwyrxian (talk) 22:01, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

"Blind monks examining an elephant", an 1888 ukiyo-e print by Hanabusa Itchō.

Qwyrxian -- I am not obliged to accept the false premise of your question. Your questions are an attempt to establish and solidify a perceptual transformation and paradigm; and as such, it does not enhance our prospects for collaborative editing in the future.

This broad-stroke edit strategy is undermined by WP:Burden and by verifying inline citations which are individually and cumulatively clear, credible and persuasive.

In other words, you don't "get it." Okay.

John Smith's doesn't "get it." Okay.

You propose to throw out the baby with the bath water. Not okay.

I cannot concur. Nor do I concur that this section urgently demands our attention before addressing the other active issues which have been engaged in the threads above. --Tenmei (talk) 23:56, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Now the section is titled "Alternate approaches." Alternate to what? It can't be an "alternate approach" unless there is a "main approach." Unless you mean that the alternate to arguing is to...not argue? I can kind-of understand how the latter part (a cooperative approach) is a an alternate, but not what Xiaopeng says (which, is, basically, let's talk about it later). Also, the big fat side quote is a clear WP:MOS violation--we're an encyclopedia, not a weekly/monthly news magazine. And you want to tackle other issues? You're welcome to--we can work on things simultaneously, as long as we keep each issue in separate threads. Qwyrxian (talk) 01:38, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Not a violation of WP:MOS -- not because of the formatting. The quote template would not exist if it were violative of wiki-policy. As for the other parts of your diff, Your framing limits the range of response. Please feel free to draft a different heading for this section; but I encourage you to restrain the impulse to blank it out entirely --Tenmei (talk) 03:31, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

My first time seeing Tenmei writing anything resembling standard English. Bobthefish2 (talk) 03:44, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

WP:AGF is drained of meaning by WP:POKING -- see context here for zero tolerance. --Tenmei (talk) 04:05, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

You could've used one short sentence to communicate your protest against my compliment. Bobthefish2 (talk) 05:01, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Would you two stop, please? If either of you is too irritated with the other to respond civilly, then just stop commenting to the other. Neither backhanded compliments nor over-linking is helping the issue. Every time we stop to comment on other people's motives or style of writing, we get drawn away from improving the article. Qwyrxian (talk) 05:11, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

WP:AGF is drained of meaning by WP:POKING -- see context here for zero tolerance. --Tenmei (talk) 05:16, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

Regarding just the quotation itself, Rquote and cquote are to be used for pull quotes, and, as such, belong (per the documentation) in places like essays. Quoting from the documentation of cquote, "NOTE: This template should not be used for block quotations in article text. " For that matter, this quotations isn't even eligible for block quote, because it's not 4 or more lines long, as specified in WP:MOSQUOTE. So I'm going to convert it back into a regular quotation, while we continue to discuss what to do with this section. Qwyrxian (talk) 03:40, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

My opinion is that "efforts to calm dispute" is kind of irrelevant. We can condense it into the "Reaction of ROC/PRC" but this certainly does not deserve an unique section. Bobthefish2 (talk) 05:30, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

I'll be requesting Mediation later

We're obviously all not working together well. Half of the time someone edits, it gets reverted; then we end up with pages and pages of words, hacking out words; then often we get accusations of bad faith, incivility, tendentious editing, etc. We need outside assistance to help guide our conversations and work. I'm going to make a request at WP:MEDCAB. However, the process is voluntary (even formal mediation from WP:MEDCOMis voluntary). As such, all participants in this dispute will, after the request is filed, agree to take part in mediation. Now, "all" is somewhat subjective; for example, though User:Winstonlighter used to be active here, the last time xe edited these articles was in October, so xe doesn't have to be a party. As far as I can see by looking up at this discussion, here's the people I think would need to agree (note that anyone can participate, it's just that the core disputants need to):

• Qwyrxian
• Tenmei
• Bobthefish2
• Phoenix7777
• John Smith
• Oda Mari
• STSC

I think that San9663, Benlinsquare, could also be helpful, but they're less active recently so aren't nearly as critical. Similarly, Kusunose and HXL49 could be helpful, as they work on Senkaku Islands, but their participation isn't necessary. Even Oda Mari could decline to participate, since I know xe's often busy and doesn't participate all that much , as long as xyr future involvement in the article didn't work contrary to any progress made in mediation. If anyone is going to outright reject mediation right now, please say so, as if you are there's no real point in me making the request. Note, though, that explicitly refusing to actively work on dispute resolution could be construed as being evidence of intentionally being non-collaborative.

Finally, please understand that my request for mediation is not because I think I can "win" (if you've been "keeping score", you'll see that I'm not editing on a side), but because I honestly think we need help. This article needs work, and we seem incapable of accomplishing that work on our own. A mediator can help us do that. Note that a mediator cannot make any rulings, impose any decisions, or assess any sanctions. They're whole job is to help people talk together in a constructive way. I can't see any reason why we shouldn't proceed with such a helpful option. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:18, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the Mediation is needed. I think the current problem started at this removal. The edit summary says " Deleted a fraudulant claim + references regarding Remin Ribao article..." . Bobthefish2 wrote " Again removed fraudulent references/content based on misinformation" when he restored his removal. See [7]. I think the answer to the current problem is this. It is a hard fact the Japanese government says "...an article in the People's Daily dated 8 January 1953, under the title of "Battle of people in the Ryukyu Islands against the U.S. occupation", made clear that the Ryukyu Islands consist of 7 groups of islands including the Senkaku Islands." See [8]. Even if the Japanese argument is based on wrong translation/misinformation, the information should be included in the article because it is a fact. It is not WP editors' role to judge if it's a false/wrong argument. If Bobthefish2 thinks the claim of the Japanese government is a fraudulent claim + references regarding Remin Ribao article, all he had/has to do is add the Chinese government's refutation with RS to the article. The removal was inappropriate because Bobthefish2's claim was merely a personal thought as he has not provided any RSs supporting his claim so far. If I missed something, please point it out as I haven't been watchful on threads above. Oda Mari (talk) 05:45, 4 February 2011

Oda Mari, I am afraid you are totally confused. My advice for you is to scroll up and read the post I left below User:Tenmei's gigantic (and useless) table. If reading comprehension is not your strong suit, then you may want to ask your Japanese friends to help you with translating the text into Japanese. Bobthefish2 (talk) 20:10, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

ENDORSE summary and conclusion as presented by Oda Mari above because, as the first paragraph at WP:V explains: "The threshold for inclusion in Wikipedia is verifiability, not truth-— that is, whether readers are able to check that material added to Wikipedia has already been published by a reliable source, not whether we think it is true." This core principle is essential to our collaborative editing process. This is not optional -- not arbitrarily devalued or set aside by those who are successful at spin. --Tenmei (talk) 06:43, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

I'm not talking about the current problem. I'm talking that every single little change causes either an edit war, a near edit war, or such a massive, overwhelming talk page discussion with both sides pretty much entrenched and non-collaborative. This particular point is just an example. If we don't go into mediation, I can discuss the solution to this particular point, but I don't think anyone is going to like it, and I don't think the current tone on this page is going to allow for a serious consideration of it Qwyrxian (talk) 05:58, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

I see. Then request it. I'll join in it. Oda Mari (talk) 06:16, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

NO, the framing for the proposed "mediation" is fatally flawed. In other words, the cognitive distortion implicit in "both sides pretty much entrenched and non-collaborative" is a self-fulfilling prophesy.

Restatement: the implied cognitive bias in Qwyrxian's proposal and lessons learned the hard way exposes this diff as a likely illusion. This is barking up the wrong tree. --Tenmei (talk) 07:45, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

The comment you just made is exactly one of the reasons we need mediation. I've been patient, but the truth is I have no idea at all what you just said. I shouldn't have to follow 7 different links to understand your point. Every time anyone makes a change you don't like, you add a dozen links, tables with multiple diffs framing the discussion, and, sometimes, even graphs. These are absolutely hurting our ability to talk to you. I think we've explained it before, but the point is that while your formal style of thinking may well work in whatever field you are in (formal logic? philosophy? computer science?) but it doesn't work in an informal place like this.

You know what? It's time to stop beating around the bush. You want to hear what I think the two big problems are here and on Senkaku Islands? It's relatively simple: Tenmei produces impossible to follow talk page discussions and makes massive article changes before getting consensus, and Bobthefish2 treats the majority of issues like they're battlegrounds and assumes every piece of disagreement is a cover for POV pushing. Both of you are sometimes right: people are pushing POVs, and having concise summaries of discussions and links to policy do help. But the way the discussion goes here is so out of control that when we're arguing about the grammar of 3 words (like on Talk:Senkaku Islands#U.S. Control prior to 1972), we can't do it civilly or functionally. We need help. We need a truly neutral party to discuss not just this one point about Remin Ribao, but the overall structure of the article (it's bad), the ordering and use of the names in different languages, the infoboxes, picture captions, which claims can be including...etc., etc. Why would you reject the help of a neutral mediator? Remember, the mediator can't "rule" on claims, they can't say "Okay, then, I've decided, take out/leave in the Remin Ribao sentence." What xe can do is help us talk to each other civilly and productively. Xe can help us by saying, "Yes, but that's not what policy says." Xe can help us by structuring the discussions. Why wouldn't you want to do that? Qwyrxian (talk) 09:59, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

I'd say I am pretty much right whenever I suspect something is a cover for POV pushing. But then again, I do understand you need to somehow behave like a neutral party and thus have to find something in me to suspect or criticize.

Anyhow, I hope this mediation thing is going to do some good. If possible, please do consider inviting User:Benlisquare. Bobthefish2 (talk) 19:55, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Qwyrxian -- Paraphrasing the first two sentences of your diff above: (a) The comment you just made is exactly the reason mediation as you define it is a non-starter; and (b) I've been patient, but the truth is that you do not understand what you just said.

Repeating for emphasis: The framing for the proposed "mediation" is fatally flawed. In other words, the confirmation bias which is explicit in "both sides pretty much entrenched and non-collaborative" is a self-fulfilling prophesy.

Example: Oda Mari hits the center of the target here and my endorsement underscores her point here. In your non-responsive next diff, you do not acknowledge anything she wrote; and in this way, you trivialize her participation and contributions. Your subsequent writing ascribes no meaningful or timely relevance to her words -- nor do you value my words -- especially here. Oda Mari got it right in more ways than one.

No part of Oda Mari diff shows "entrenched and non-collaborative" editing. None of Oda Mari's archived diffs can be framed as "entrenched and non-collaborative." The skewed labeling elevates mere spin.

WP:AGF does not not require us to presume validity in broad brush complaints about Oda Mari here and here, but there we have it. Among the lessons learned the hard way is that unsupported allegations succeed in a flash to discredit and devalue the cumulative edit history Oda Mari has created at Senkaku Islands and Senkaku Islands dispute.

The evidence of attitude polarization which marginalizes Oda Mari or me or anyone else is vexing.

Qwyrxian -- The term of "mediation" is stripped of its natural meaning when broad brush complaining is conflated with hard work and specifics. This is the essence of what you propose as WP:Mediation. --Tenmei (talk) 20:18, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Tenmei, your unquenchable loyalty to your countrymen/women is unquestionable, but you still have not the courage to respond to the issues I raised. Let's hope you will realize soon enough that your essays of rhetorics and non-responses are not going to get you anywhere aside from wasting everyone's time. Bobthefish2 (talk) 22:51, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

The reason I said Oda Mari need not join (but should if xe can), is because Oda Mari often goes for stretches of a month or more without editing this page. There's nothing wrong with that--we all have countless things to do on or off Wiki. But the key is that mediation requires full participation, and someone (generally, the person requesting mediation) has to determine who those participants need to be. The point is that, for example, we can't possibly enter mediation without you, because you are too active here, which means that any agreements we came to in mediation would be useless without your input. And please don't tell me I don't understand why we're entering mediation. I understand exactly why--I know the event that triggered it, and I know the long term concerns I have had for more than a month that have lead to it. Finally, you can, of course, choose not to enter mediation. Could you, though, please explain why, specifically, without a single diff or wikilink, ideally in 4 sentences or less, why you don't think mediation will be helpful? Please explain don't explain what you think my or other people's motives are (because you're wrong), please don't worry about Remin Ribao or another other detail--please just say why, simply, you don't want to engage in this part of dispute resolution. I would appreciate that, although, again, you don't have to. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:35, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

Well, so who's agreeing to take part in this mediation? From the looks of it, the answer from User:Tenmei is probably a no. Bobthefish2 (talk) 18:19, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

Qwyrxian -- Your rhetorical question here is crafted in ways which marginalize any reply. The principal purpose of any answer is substantially frustrated. An arguably constructive response is to change a few words and the sequence of sentences which are thus far ignored:

A. The framing for the prospective "mediation" is fatally flawed.

B. In other words, your newest diff demonstrates anew that (a) mediation as you define it is a non-starter and (b) you appear not to understand what you just said.

This persisting pattern is problematic and its likely repetition in the future is noteworthy.

Parsing argument content — acknowledging categories of constructive comments:
* Refuting the Central Point
* Refutation
* Counterargument
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Identifying remarks which are unhelpful:
* Contradiction
* Responding to Tone
* Ad Hominem

Example: You mention Talk:Senkaku Islands#U.S. Control prior to 1972 in a diff above: "But the way the discussion goes here is so out of control that when we're arguing about the grammar of 3 words ..., we can't do it civilly or functionally."

Your spin marginalizes the core issue, which is that the words "by the Americans" have geo-political significance as defined by credible published work about Senkaku Islands and Senkaku Islands dispute.

CONTEXT: The meaning and intention of STSC who added "by the Americans" is underscored and amplified here and here

• FACT: John Smith's revert and edit summary was justified and explained here

SPIN: The "grammar of 3 words" marginalizes this.

• FACT: Phoenix7777's supplemental restatement was concise here

SPIN: The "grammar of 3 words" marginalizes this.

• FACT: Research is shown to have informed the diffs of Phoenix7777 and me; and this is demonstrated by verifying support from reliable sources plus embedded hyperlinks

SPIN: The "grammar of 3 words" marginalizes this.

• FACT:The contributions of John Smith's, Phoenix7777, Oda Mari and me were each moderate in tone and focused solely on refutation and counterargument

SPIN: The "grammar of 3 words" marginalizes this.

ANALYSIS: This post hoc re-framing -- that we were merely "arguing about the grammar of 3 words" -- causes harm because it trivializes edits and contributors alike; and at the same time, the re-framing validates contradiction and ad hominem as persuasive tactics. This is not simple. This thread does not show "both sides pretty much entrenched and non-collaborative". Rather, this thread does illustrate a small success of collaborative editing which was guided by core policies and values.

Qwyrxian -- The term "mediation" is stripped of its natural meaning when unsupported generalizations are construed to be indistinguishable from citation-supported specifics. The foundation for WP:Mediation is critically undermined. --Tenmei (talk) 20:40, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

Surprisingly, I actually think I understand what you're saying, although I could have done it in about 300 less words, and, in the end, you missed my point. First, let me paraphrase what you said, and make sure I've got it right. What I write now is Tenmei speaking:

"Qwyrxian, you're asking for mediation. One reason you said we need mediation is because of a dispute we had about whether or not to include "by the Americans," and you feel like the fact that just some simple grammatical issues cause us so much work is evidence that we need mediation. But, Qwyrxian, what you're not understanding is that it's not just grammar, because those words have important geo-political consequences. Thus, your reframing of the issue is fundamentally wrong and misleading. Furthermore, you say we had problems talking to each other, but if you look back at what John Smith, Phoenix7777, and Oda Mari wrote, we were always nice, polite, and just trying to refute that geo-political problem. In fact, even though Qwyrxian claims we have a problem with non-collaborative editing, in fact, some of us are being civil, while others are not, and that is the real problem. We can't go into mediation under Qwyrxian's premises, because they are wrong with regards the way this thread is working."

Is that correct? I'm pretty sure it is. Okay, if even I grant that you're right about this issue (I don't think you are, but that's not relevant), your concern fails to address the larger issue. Every single time there's a dispute, solving it is somewhere between painful and impossible. We've had this article (or the other one) locked multiple times in the last 6 months. That means we have an underlying problem in how we work. If I could combine Bobthefish2's points (that he made on Elen of the Road's and Magog the Ogre's talk page) with mine, I would say that there really are only 2 possible solutions to the ongoing problems that we have.

1. A number of editors stop editing the page, either voluntarily (out of exhaustion, most likely), or involuntarily (because someone(s) get topic banned). This is, in my opinion, a terrible solution, and ultimately unstable, because someone else will always come forward to pick up the POV torch.
2. We enter mediation. That means that when we talk to each other, we have a neutral party to help frame the discussion, focus the issues, maybe offer compromises, etc.

The reason I think these are the only solutions is that I think one or the other is inevitable. If we don't do (2), someone(s) is probably going to get topic banned. At best, the article will stay locked, on and off, indefinitely. When I gave the "grammar" discussion as an example, it was only an example. I could pick a half-dozen other examples as well. Part of the problem here is that you perceive everything that you're doing (on the article and on talk) is neutral, polite, and helpful, when, in fact, it's not. Mediation can help all of us, and, most importantly, help the article. Qwyrxian (talk) 03:43, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

P.S., at Bobthefish2: the problem is that neither MEDCAB nor MEDCOM will accept us for mediation if Tenmei doesn't join. This is because it would be pointless for the rest of us to spend lots of time and effort working out solutions, if there was a regular, active editor not participating in the process who would just ignore everything we did and edit however we want. Qwyrxian (talk) 03:43, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I am aware of WP:Mediation's requirements.

By the way, it's a shame that User:Tenmei's writing in engrish again. After all, he was just making those big steps towards writing like a normal person. Bobthefish2 (talk) 05:10, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

Now you need to stop. First, it's not engrish (which I work with every day in Japan). In fact, it's highly refined English, philosophical English...it's still very difficult to follow, but it's certainly not engrish. And, in any event, this is an example of you being uncivil--your part of the problem. My problem is most likely that I'm trying to act like a mediator without actually being one. Qwyrxian (talk) 05:14, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

You should be a bit careful about throwing terms around. As far as I know, there is no such thing as "philosophical English". However, I can comment that the domain of highly refined English likely does not encompass the entire space of idiom overuse.

Anyway, I will try to refrain from remarking about User:Tenmei for a short while. Bobthefish2 (talk) 06:41, 6 February 2011 (UTC)