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"The wasp species Ropalidia romandi is known to have a particularly dangerous sting.<refQueensland Museum (2011). "Paper Wasps: Fact Sheet" (PDF). Queensland Government.</ref>"

I do not see in this text that they cause more anaphylaxis? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:45, 10 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The source is about three genera: Polista, Romalidia and Vespula. The source mentions anaphylaxis, but not particularly with one species/genus. In any case, the source is about paper wasps, not anaphylaxis. Therefore the source should not be used for this article; it would be undue weight. Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:57, 10 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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-"The wasp species ''[[Ropalidia romandi]]'' is known to have a particularly dangerous sting.<ref{{Cite news|url = |title = Paper Wasps: Fact Sheet|last = Queensland Museum|first = |date = 2011|work = |accessdate = |publisher = Queensland Government|url=http://www.qm.qld.gov.au/Learning+Resources/~/media/Documents/Learning%20resources/QM/Resources/Fact%20Sheets/fact-sheet-paper-wasps.pdf}}</ref>"
+"The wasp species ''[[Ropalidia romandi]]'' is known to have a particularly dangerous sting.<ref{{Cite news|title = Paper Wasps: Fact Sheet|last = Queensland Museum|first = |date = 2011|work = |accessdate = |publisher = Queensland Government|url=http://www.qm.qld.gov.au/Learning+Resources/~/media/Documents/Learning%20resources/QM/Resources/Fact%20Sheets/fact-sheet-paper-wasps.pdf}}</ref>"
 I do not see in this text that they cause more anaphylaxis? [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 05:45, 10 November 2014 (UTC)