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Title case

The original article title (Campus Carbon Neutrality) appeared to violate WP:LOWERCASE because the second and third words would not ordinarily have their first letters capitalized if the phrase appeared in a sentence. Therefore I moved it to Campus carbon neutrality. --Teratornis (talk) 09:13, 20 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Outdated Carbon Goals

Many points in the article state carbon neutrality goals set in the early 2000's with end-dates that have passed. For example, the section on the University of Malaga speaks about plans for lines ending in 2012, and the University of the West of England set an emissions goal for 2012. I suggest that these sections are updated to reflect whether those goals were met, any progress since then, and the present goals of all of the universities that have the information available. Sarahrvh (talk) 03:27, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Clean Air-Cool Planet

This article has an entire section about CA-CP, although the organization merged with the University of New Hampshire's Sustainability Institute in 2014. The hyperlinks in this section lead to error pages because the webpages no longer exist. I believe this section should contain a summary of what it currently covers, but add in UNH Sustainability Institute and what has occurred since the merge. Sarahrvh (talk) 03:38, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

United States Bias

This article reads like it was written in the United States, especially in the opening of the "International legislation and agreements" section. I think this opening could be taken out, with each country getting its own section. Also, the sub-sections with a focus on carbon neutrality, but not necessarily campuses, do not belong in this article without any references to universities. Perhaps some more general Wikipedia articles could be added to a "See Also" section at the end to replace these paragraphs.Sarahrvh (talk) 03:45, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]