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318 pages, Paperback
First published March 6, 2012
The barn was only a small distance behind the house, down a rough-worn path. The mist had not dissipated; it curled around my ankles and calves as I walked, and I was glad I had kept on my coat and hat against the chill. There was no sound but the scratch of my footsteps and the dripping of water from the trees. I longed to hear even a single birdsong, but none came.
*
Abruptly, the thumping stopped. A low sound cane from the window, the echo of an angry groan, deepened by a muffling gurgle. It could have been a voice, but was no voice any human had ever emitted. It gurgled wetly for a long moment, hissed, and was silent.
I began to shake. My giddiness was gone, and I was feeling the fear now, the fear of truly-without any sort of doubt-being in the presence of an undead soul. My God, she is actually here, actually listening to me.
There was a trickle of icy air on the back of my neck. I felt the hairs stand up like tiny pins, painful on my skin; a swift unearthly inhalation, choking and clogged.
And then she grabbed me.
The imperative need to unravel the past surrounding Maddy's sad and short life made for a fast read and entertaining ghost story. Well done debut!