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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Wfoj3 (talk | contribs) at 13:51, 9 June 2024 (confusing sentance: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

confusing sentance

"album examines Evans' strained relationship with her father following his divorce from her mother, and how this informed her relationship to Barker." seems awkward wording to me. Recommend revision. My wild guess - simple - remove "Informed" replace with "Affected". There is probably even a better rewrite than my suggestion. Wfoj3 (talk) 13:51, 9 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]