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Your article submission Landlord Links

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Vonhempton (talk) 12:48, 3 December 2013 (UTC)Thank you. I will try to fix within next few days. VonHempton Vonhempton (talk) 12:48, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed deletion of David padilla

The article David padilla has been proposed for deletion because it appears to have no references. Under Wikipedia policy, this newly created biography of a living person will be deleted unless it has at least one reference to a reliable source that directly supports material in the article.

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December 2013

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  • systems in some of the most well known clubs such as [[The Mix]] and others such as [[Cameo]] (which he co-designed and built with [[Louis Puig]].

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Warsaw Ballroom

Hello, Vonhempton, and thank you for your contributions!

I wanted to let you know it seems an article you worked on, Warsaw Ballroom, is copied from another Wikipedia page, Warsaw ballroom. It's fine to do this as long as you provide the following information in the edit summary:

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Thanks again for helping build the free encyclopedia!Template:Z126 MadmanBot (talk) 11:51, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestions

Hi Vonhempton, I think the guidelines at WP:NPOV, WP:PEACOCK and WP:RELIABLE will be helpful. A lot of what you've added reads as blatantly promotional in tone, and won't stick in its present form. Thank you, JNW (talk) 21:42, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The images are the least concern here. I think it's likely that WP:COI is an issue, too. I've cut a lot of unsourced and melodramatic text, much of which had little to do with Mr. Padilla, but was essentially a hyperbolic remembrance of the club and its nightlife. Likewise, unsourced details about his personal life and medical condition, and copious namedropping don't belong in an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines I've suggested above. Thank you, JNW (talk) 01:36, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Please do not continue to restore inadequately sourced content, or link to unacceptable sources--see WP:RELIABLE, as suggested above. Thank you, JNW (talk) 16:36, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi JNW, how do I insert information on the CDs which are of value in his musical history? I posted 2 sources for each of the cds. How is this not enough or not adequate? Please explain. Thank you. -VonHempton

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