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17 October 2013

• 16:1416:14, 17 October 2013 diff hist 0 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Unexplained edit. Warning comments ignored. No discussion added on talk page. Maybe flagged edits are needed again. Undid revision 577587871 by 92.28.208.70 (talk)
• 16:1116:11, 17 October 2013 diff hist +127 Finding Nemo currently. WP:RELTIME fail. give number of reviews used for score for context. Move chunk from Reception into enviromental consequences. makes section very repetitive though.
• 16:0216:02, 17 October 2013 diff hist −68 Finding Nemo Enough to include in the reference where he said it, not even slightly relevant that he said it on Twitter.
• 15:5715:57, 17 October 2013 diff hist −3 The Ten Commandments (1956 film) expert, adjective, an expert, noun. different. correct to wording founding in source.
• 15:5515:55, 17 October 2013 diff hist +6 The Ten Commandments (1956 film) ce verbiage. (remove "currently" as it was a useless WP:RELTIME fail.) Rotten Tomatoes, retrospectively collected, based on a small sample of only 32 reviews. important context. comment out commentary, is not plot.
• 15:4915:49, 17 October 2013 diff hist −297 Resident Evil (film series) avoid site specific jargon. say score not metascore, say rating not "rotten" rating. remove URL junk. fix citation accessdates and other overzealous failed spellcheck. Copyedit, remove false implication of duality between choice of Romero and Anderson.
• 15:4815:48, 17 October 2013 diff hist +260 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film Colums, most articles are quickly fixed to use the better markup mentioned
• 15:3115:31, 17 October 2013 diff hist −44 Resident Evil (film series) In the beginning, "in conclusion", in the middle, .... overly prescriptive writing. Avoid, especially when trying for brevity.
• 15:2115:21, 17 October 2013 diff hist +9 Resident Evil (film series) WP:MOSFILM not "Foreign" but "International" (and strictly speaking "domestic" is North American, including US and Canada)
• 15:1915:19, 17 October 2013 diff hist −10 Resident Evil (film series) redundant verbiage. no need to say currently when the date 2014 is already clearly specified. Also saying "currently" is a big fat WP:RELTIME fail in an encyclopedia
• 14:5614:56, 17 October 2013 diff hist +635 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones managing expectations == marketing. some context needed. try to shift other to sequel section. Partially undid revision 577107657
• 14:3414:34, 17 October 2013 diff hist +2,100 Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Box office mojo still sucks. BoxOffice.com not great either.
• 14:3114:31, 17 October 2013 diff hist +930 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Problem with dividing columns in Cast sections
• 14:0214:02, 17 October 2013 diff hist +20 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones It is good to have more than one source. Revert remove of named reference. Warnings recommend using The Numbers change was not discussed. Undid revision 577086727
• 13:5913:59, 17 October 2013 diff hist −16 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Revert unexplained edit. Named reference is called "Mojo" but was changed to link other than Box Office Mojo. Undid revision 577290984 by 172.243.192.117