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16:0416:04, 17 September 2024 diff hist +12 Talk:Alcoholics Anonymous →Race of early members
16:0316:03, 17 September 2024 diff hist +312 Talk:Alcoholics Anonymous →Race of early members: Reply Tag: Reply
04:3804:38, 17 September 2024 diff hist +22 Alcoholics Anonymous source is in the body Tag: Visual edit

14:4814:48, 16 September 2024 diff hist −4 Alcoholics Anonymous rm conjuction Tag: Visual edit
14:4714:47, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0 Alcoholics Anonymous sp, punctuation Tag: Visual edit
02:5202:52, 16 September 2024 diff hist +18 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit

18:5818:58, 15 September 2024 diff hist −1 Alcoholics Anonymous Short prepositional phrases do not require a comma unless the comma would prevent confusion. Tag: Visual edit

04:0704:07, 14 September 2024 diff hist −1 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit
04:0504:05, 14 September 2024 diff hist −20 Alcoholics Anonymous Redundant Tag: Visual edit

15:3015:30, 13 September 2024 diff hist −58 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit

05:2705:27, 12 September 2024 diff hist −15 Shōgun (novel) removed dupe Wiki link Tag: Visual edit
05:2305:23, 12 September 2024 diff hist +1 Alcoholics Anonymous sp Tag: Visual edit
04:4404:44, 12 September 2024 diff hist −26 Shōgun (novel) “historical fiction novel” is redundant. ‘inspired by” suggests fantasia, “these [sic] novel concerns eras” is bloated writing Tag: Visual edit
04:2804:28, 12 September 2024 diff hist +1 Alcoholics Anonymous comma Tag: Visual edit
04:2004:20, 12 September 2024 diff hist +36 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit

05:3505:35, 11 September 2024 diff hist −2 Alcoholics Anonymous no need for commas sentence flows fine wo them Tag: Visual edit
03:1803:18, 11 September 2024 diff hist +2 Alcoholics Anonymous beginnings is the better description, there was no intent to form a new fellowship in ‘35 Tag: Visual edit
03:1503:15, 11 September 2024 diff hist +14 Alcoholics Anonymous specified new fellowship to clarify that not Bill or Bob were the publishers Tag: Visual edit
03:1003:10, 11 September 2024 diff hist −647 Alcoholics Anonymous AA was not founded June 10th, it did not exist until they bolted the Oxford Group. Years later beginning is dated it’s beginning the ‘35. The demographics are best addressed in this paragraph. Tag: Visual edit

19:1219:12, 8 September 2024 diff hist +20 User talk:Jumplike23 No edit summary
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19:0419:04, 8 September 2024 diff hist +5 Alcoholics Anonymous fix Tag: Visual edit
18:5518:55, 8 September 2024 diff hist +2 Alcoholics Anonymous fix and copy Tag: Visual edit
18:5418:54, 8 September 2024 diff hist −20 Alcoholics Anonymous Short 2 word prepositional phrases at the start of a sentence need in commas in almost all cases. Worldwide is redundant Tag: Visual edit
18:5018:50, 8 September 2024 diff hist +52 Alcoholics Anonymous ‘operates according to” is redundant since the the traditions as described are operational and only operation. Rewrote traditions summary. Usually when more than 3 adjectives are listed for a subject, the stylistic choice and add “and to the third adjective and another conjunctive phrase (I believe that’s the correct term). “principles” is too vague and open to interpretation. Country of origin is perhaps the most determinative facet of a AA’s trajectory Tag: Visual edit
04:2204:22, 8 September 2024 diff hist −5 Alcoholics Anonymous must doesn’t comport w a “suggestive only program”, also, correction to prev note the 12 steps were acknowledged by other editor Tag: Visual edit
04:1304:13, 8 September 2024 diff hist −1,453 Alcoholics Anonymous Dupe copy Tag: Visual edit
04:1104:11, 8 September 2024 diff hist +3,087 Alcoholics Anonymous New omits that AA as an international movement and off what size and makeup it is. makes no mention of the 12th steps, or the critical mutual aid foundation of AA the 12th traditions in the first paragraph has simply bad writing like “aimed at promoting”. The editor has a poor understanding of AA ‘s roots and basis, Massive rewrites should be discussed on the Talk page Tag: Visual edit