Talk:Colin Powell (economist)/GA1
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 12:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 12:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]General
[edit]- Missing comma in the "
In 2013 Powell was awarded...
" sentence. → In 2013, Powell was awarded... - Would prefer the "
Economic advisor
" section to be turned into a heading. - The rest of the text is solid, its prose is clear and it complies with the manual of style.
- It is neutral and stable.
Images
[edit]- None but I also wasn't able to find any that we could add.
Sources
[edit]- All are alright.
@No Swan So Fine: Good job, I'm promoting this. It passes the criteria. --Vacant0 (talk) 13:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)