User:HitroMilanese/Archive16

Thanks for your support! Hey Hitro, I am not nominating Green Supplier Limited for deletion, I am just unsure of how to remove that box! Any assistance would be very much appreciated. I have to apologise I am new here :) Thanks, GA — Preceding unsigned comment added by Greenadvice (talk • contribs) 11:40, 14 October 2020 (UTC) @Greenadvice:, Hello there, I have moved the article to draft space. Here you can fix the article and when it is ready, you can submit it for review. Your article was deleted because of promotional tone previously. So fix the tone of the article and submit it for review after clicking the submit button. You can check WP:YFA and WP:NPOV for more information. You may also want to see WP:NCORP, this page lists the acceptance criteria for the articles related to companies. Regards. Hitro talk 11:54, 14 October 2020 (UTC) ________________________ Hello Hitro, I have made amendments to the article and submitted it for review - thanks again for your guideance. Best regards, Josh — Preceding unsigned comment added by Greenadvice (talk • contribs) 09:02, 16 October 2020 (UTC) Agathangjel Çamçe I added some prime sources and sent the draft for re-review. I thought dropping a line on your TP. Edion Petriti (talk) 16:01, 14 October 2020 (UTC) Bishop Agathangjel I've done some cleanup on Draft:Agathangjel Çamçe. The editor shouldn't be using facebook as a source, but they may not be entirely familiar with WP:RS. Nonetheless, the subject is a very notable Albanian Orthodox cleric and it's probably better to move it to article space.--Maleschreiber (talk) 00:15, 15 October 2020 (UTC) @Edion Petriti:, @Maleschreiber:, Thank you for your contribution. The draft is in a good shape. I have accepted it. Regards. Hitro talk 06:53, 15 October 2020 (UTC) Reply:G4 Tagging Hi HitroMilanese, i understand, i'll be more careful. Regards Valdemar2018 (talk) 06:38, 18 October 2020 (UTC) Jackie Hollywood Hello HitroMilanese! I wanted to tell you that I am very new to this and I have tried to create the article for this girl Jackie Hollywood youtuber / rapper (in principle) the best I could. I have used the biographical structure that Wikipedia normally gives singers of any musical style. I think that the girl already has a certain relevance, in fact when you look for her you already get enough images of her on Google, in addition to the fact that Google's own algorithm already gives us the musical genre that "Hip-hop / Rap" does so which evidently gives us clues that she is a rapper singer. The article created has several good references "in my opinion", but some are from YouTube and Instagram, we must not forget that she is also a youtuber, and besides being a radio interviewer and is dedicated to the world of modeling, the greatest fame he has been getting it now in recent years, given his songs on the channel. The rest of the sources speak of her biography, origin, childhood, career, studies, career in radio and music ... And I also have this page that I do not have in the article but that I think I should add, I would say that it is also good, since it indicates that she has been a model. https://www.modelmayhem.com/JackieHollywood111 Then this is "as a curiosity" I have seen that the guitarist of Escape The Fate TJ Bell has Wikipedia, with his information and such, but the funny thing is that the Wikipedia that he has is in Spanish and also does not have any only source in the article that can credit it "unless I see" TJ Bell is not too famous "in my opinion" although I like him a lot as the current guitarist of the band. But it cannot be denied, that in the Hispanic world it has little relevance, something different is already Anglo-Saxon countries, since being an American it can have more. I'm not saying Jackie Hollywood should have and TJ Bell shouldn't. I just find it curious that Jackie has more sources and possibly more famous since TJ, it costs so much to give the go-ahead in English wikipedia (her native language as well) and with TJ that it is not very relevant in the Hispanic world "it seems be "there was no problem. I hope you read and respond to me, greetings :) Paul Polimero (talk) 10:07, 18 October 2020 (UTC) Clarify one thing, I mean TJ Bell the guitarist. Not the pilot. Paul Polimero (talk) 10:10, 18 October 2020 (UTC) Hello HitroMilanese! I wanted to tell you that I am very new to this and I have tried to create the article for this girl Jackie Hollywood youtuber / rapper (in principle) the best I could. I have used the biographical structure that Wikipedia normally gives singers of any musical style. I think that the girl already has a certain relevance, in fact when you look for her you already get enough images of her on Google, in addition to the fact that Google's own algorithm already gives us the musical genre that "Hip-hop / Rap" does so which evidently gives us clues that she is a rapper singer. The article created has several good references "in my opinion", but some are from YouTube and Instagram, we must not forget that she is also a youtuber, and besides being a radio interviewer and is dedicated to the world of modeling, the greatest fame he has been getting it now in recent years, given his songs on the channel. The rest of the sources speak of her biography, origin, childhood, career, studies, career in radio and music ... And I also have this page that I do not have in the article but that I think I should add, I would say that it is also good, since it indicates that she has been a model. https://www.modelmayhem.com/JackieHollywood111 Then this is "as a curiosity" I have seen that the guitarist of Escape The Fate TJ Bell has Wikipedia, with his information and such, but the funny thing is that the Wikipedia that he has is in Spanish and also does not have any only source in the article that can credit it "unless I see" TJ Bell is not too famous "in my opinion" although I like him a lot as the current guitarist of the band. But it cannot be denied, that in the Hispanic world it has little relevance, something different is already Anglo-Saxon countries, since being an American it can have more. I'm not saying Jackie Hollywood should have and TJ Bell shouldn't. I just find it curious that Jackie has more sources and possibly more famous since TJ, it costs so much to give the go-ahead in English wikipedia (her native language as well) and with TJ that it is not very relevant in the Hispanic world "it seems be "there was no problem. I hope you read and respond to me, greetings :) It appears that all the text was not copied. Paul Polimero (talk) 10:15, 18 October 2020 (UTC) @Paul Polimero:, Hello there, thank you for your message. I see that everything has been explained by Dom kraus at the article deletion discussion page. I only want to add that that the articles at Wikipedia are accepted only when the topic satisfies certain guidelines. For Jackie Hollywood, WP:GNG, WP:ENT and WP:MUSICBIO apply. But it did not appear that she is meeting any of those notability guidelines. If you can demonstrate that she meets any of these guidelines then I may withdraw my nomination. Regards. Hitro talk 06:39, 21 October 2020 (UTC) Draft:Green Supplier Limited Hey Hitro, Would you mind checking Draft:Green Supplier Limited for me please? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Greenadvice (talk • contribs) 22:42, 18 October 2020 (UTC) Draft Hi Hitro If you have the time, take a look at draft. Is it suitable for publication?5.125.2.4 (talk) 01:36, 20 October 2020 (UTC) Hi there, I have a suspicion that this draft has been created by a banned editor so I will avoid reviewing it for now. Regards. Hitro talk 06:46, 21 October 2020 (UTC) AloPeyk I tried to fix the problems that you mentioned. In fact, it was rewritten. Can I ask you to review the draft?ThanksHispring (talk) 07:28, 22 October 2020 (UTC) Hello there, the draft has been reviewed and declined by another reviewer. Regards. Hitro talk 06:30, 24 October 2020 (UTC) Yes, right. I fixed the issues again and resubmitted the article. I wonder if you take look at it? thanks a lot!Hispring (talk) 16:17, 10 November 2020 (UTC) As per my understanding, the topic is still not meeting notability guidelines. I will leave it for another reviewer. Regards. Hitro talk 17:58, 14 November 2020 (UTC) Draft:Sanjay Chouhan hi Hitro I have written an article, in which you tell me some corrections, I do not understand what to correct, please explain to me by doing and how can this correction be my problem.I am sending the article link to you, if you will help me https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sanjay_Chouhan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chouhan777 (talk • contribs) 08:48, 1 November 2020 (UTC) Hello there, presented sources are not enough to demonstrate notability. Please introduce references where the topic has received significant coverage. Passing mentions and routine coverage are not going to help the cause. Regards. Hitro talk 05:58, 6 November 2020 (UTC) Draft:Naira_Seyidova @HitroMilanese:, Hi. I deleted the references from YouTube and other online video streaming websites you mentioned, and added the references from the website and news sites. I think this time I made an adjustment according to the rules. Thanks. Xəyal Haşımov (talk) 15:05, 5 November 2020 (UTC) @Xəyal Haşımov:, Hello there, the article is now at AfD so I will recommend you to make your case at the discussion. Regards. Hitro talk 05:52, 6 November 2020 (UTC) Thank you for reviewing! Hi Hitro- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Work_%26_Co — Preceding unsigned comment added by Detectivevondata (talk • contribs) 17:39, 6 November 2020 (UTC) Thank you for reviewing the Work & Co article. Can you clarify how it appears as advertising? Everything on the page is strictly factual. The sources are reliable and unbiased. The company website was sourced just for it's list of past and current clients. There is no call-to-action or promotion of the company. Any advice you can share would be greatly appreciated. This is my first wikipedia entry. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Detectivevondata (talk • contribs) 17:37, 6 November 2020 (UTC) @Detectivevondat: Hello there, please see WP:NCORP. This page lists the criteria based on which the drafts are accepted or rejected at Wikipedia. The topic of the draft must receive significant coverage in independent and reliable sources. The current sources are not enough to demonstrate notability. Passing mentions, routine coverage or directory listings are not considered noteworthy. Instead of demonstrating notability, the draft only explains about the company's services and their clientele, this is a form of advertisement which is suitable for company's website not for an encyclopedic entry. I noticed that you have resubmitted the draft, I will leave it for another reviewer. Regards. Hitro talk 07:55, 7 November 2020 (UTC) The Months of African Cinema Contest Continues in November! Greetings, Thank you very much for participating in the Months of African Cinema global contest/edit-a-thon, and thank you for your contributions so far. It is already the middle of the contest and a lot have been achieved already! We have been able to get over 1,500 articles created in over fifteen (15) languages! This would not have been possible without your support and we want to thank you. If you have not yet listed your name as a participant in the contest page please do so. Please make sure to list the articles you have created or improved in the article achievements' section of the contest page, so that they can be easily tracked. To be able to claim prizes, please also ensure to list your articles on the users by articles page. We would be awarding prizes to different categories of winners: Overall winner 1st - $500 2nd - $200 3rd - $100 Diversity winner - $100 Gender-gap filler - $100 Language Winners - up to $100* We are very excited about what has been achieved so far, but your contributions are still needed to further exceed all expectations! Let’s create more articles before the end of this contest, which is this November!!! Thank you once again for being part of this global event! --Jamie Tubers (talk) 10:30, 06 November 2020 (UTC) You can opt-out of this annual reminder from The Afrocine Project by removing your username from this list Draft:Dmitry Borisovich Volkov Hello. Please see the article. I cleaned the advertising style as much as possible and brought the criteria of significance. Thank you very much! 95.153.130.99 (talk) 07:51, 9 November 2020 (UTC) Draft: Uada Hello! I am new, so forgive me. I added more history for notability reasons. Please take another look and tell me what you think. Thanks Hitro for the guidance! I removed the external links from the body of the Robdoesitall draft page. 1989-90 Norwich City F.C. season Thank you for passing this and letting me know. It only ended up having to be submitted for approval because another user deemed the first draft not up to standard and moved it out of the main space, so I'm glad we got there in the end! Skteosk (talk) 15:32, 23 November 2020 (UTC) ArbCom 2020 Elections voter message Hello! Voting in the 2020 Arbitration Committee elections is now open until 23:59 (UTC) on Monday, 7 December 2020. All eligible users are allowed to vote. Users with alternate accounts may only vote once. The Arbitration Committee is the panel of editors responsible for conducting the Wikipedia arbitration process. It has the authority to impose binding solutions to disputes between editors, primarily for serious conduct disputes the community has been unable to resolve. 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Kindly assist with content I need to modify or delete, if any, to make this article publishable. Many Thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magdaluyom1 (talk • contribs) 17:48, 26 November 2020 (UTC) @Magdaluyom1:, Hello there, Please see Wikipedia:Offline sources. You may add offline sources to the draft in order to verify the claims. It is better than leaving the claims unsourced. You may also want to see Wikipedia:Citing sources. Regards. Hitro talk 07:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC) Draft:BOX8 Hello, Thank you for reviewing the Draft: BOX8. I realize that your feedback and comment is very constructive and helpful. I will work and improve on the notability part and independent mentions before resubmitting. Thanks again! Regards, PalB09 (talk) 12:36, 30 November 2020 (UTC) Draft:Kristián Mensa hello Hitro, I have made adjustment to the tone of the draft. Also added references. Please see [1]. I dont know where to go from here. Can you look into this? Thank you very much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uponmidas (talk • contribs) 18:04, 1 December 2020 (UTC) Hello there, please make sure to submit the drafts for review before asking for help. Drafts are reviewed only after submission. Regards. Hitro talk 05:55, 2 December 2020 (UTC) request for guidance It looks like a recent article I submitted was rejected because the sources aren't "reliable." As i read the instructions, the publications I am listing are legitimate and verifiable publications that cover music and the music business. I am writing a history on the Seattle music scene of the 90s and have access to original copies of these publications, as well as other third party sources that reference these publications (novels, biographies other histories, etc) Can you help me with guidance on other types of sources that would be considered reliable? Delvechhiomethod (talk) 18:57, 3 December 2020 (UTC) @Delvechhiomethod:, Hello there, among the presented sources YouTube and the official website of the subject are not reliable. Guitar World is reliable but claims made within the draft are not verifiable. We do not have any clear consensus on the reliability of other sources so we can not deem them reliable. Are there no other online sources? Regards. Hitro talk 06:53, 4 December 2020 (UTC) You rejected page for Akanksha Khatri Hello, You rejected page for Akanksha Khatri stating that Standalone notability has not been demonstrated. However We have attached multiple reference links that is her work and contribution beyond Masterchef. I have also added few more links. Can you please help me to resolve this and help to get it approved. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pjjikar (talk • contribs) 10:39, 4 December 2020 (UTC) @Pjjikar:, Hello there, to be honest, I still do not see that WP:GNG has been met. You may submit the draft for review. I will leave it for a new set of eyes. Regards. Hitro talk 10:43, 4 December 2020 (UTC) Can you have a look at this link? https://www.akankshakhatri.com/media — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pjjikar (talk • contribs) 11:10, 4 December 2020 (UTC) I suggest you to add these sources to the draft (if you haven't) and wait for the review. In the course of reviewing the draft, I came across these references and felt that they are not enough for demonstrating notability. It would be better if another reviewer reviews it. Regards. Hitro talk 11:15, 4 December 2020 (UTC) About NGC 1001 I didn't mean to submit the page to be official, I just wanted it saved somewhere so I could keep editting, sorry if it caused any inconvinience — Preceding unsigned comment added by Orion64WasTaken (talk • contribs) 19:15, 4 December 2020 (UTC) @Orion64WasTaken: Hello there, the article is at the draft space now. You may improve and submit it when ready. Regards. Hitro talk 07:13, 6 December 2020 (UTC) Thank you for your review Thanks for reviewing the page, Draft:Scott McGlynn. I appreciate it. Can you clarify what did you exactly mean by "Some of the presented sources do not appear notable"? Which of those sources are not reliable? thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 20:26, 4 December 2020 (UTC) @Blosmccoy:, Hello there, I meant "reliable sources" not "notable sources". I've fixed my comment. Please see WP:GNG, you are required to introduce sources where the topic has received significant coverage. This is just a passing mention and this does not appear reliable. Regards. Hitro talk 07:19, 6 December 2020 (UTC) Thanks for explaining this. can you please check these sources? are they in accordance with wp:gng? MSN SW Argus BBC Huff post There are many other sources. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 14:20, 7 December 2020 (UTC) @Blosmccoy:, Hello there, BBC and MSN article appear good. Please add them to the draft and demonstrate notability per WP:GNG. Please see WP:PROVEIT, the burden to demonstrate notability lies with the draft creator. Make sure to use encyclopedic and neutral tone as you are a paid editor. Regards. Hitro talk 08:38, 8 December 2020 (UTC) @HitroMilanese:, Thank you for your valuable feedback. I understand these guidelines and the burden to demonstrate notability. I'll revise the draft accordingly in a neutral encyclopedic tone. I'll let you know when done. Best Regards Hi Hitro, I've revised the draft with additional references and tried to be as neutral as possible. Please review it and give your valuable feedback. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 09:10, 9 December 2020 (UTC) Thank you for your guidance and reviewing the draft. I really appreciate it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 10:56, 9 December 2020 (UTC) Ready for submission https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:South_Indian_Derby Since this draft was rejected due to poor presenatation, I have made necessary arrangements so that it cab be resubmitted for AFC. Please see this https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shahoodu/sandbox#Chennaiyin_FC_v_Kerala_Blasters which is the present structure of article that I am going to submit. Please tell your feedback regarding this. Please note one more section is missing ( Chennaiyin vs Bengaluru) which Im currently working on Shahoodu (talk) 11:20, 6 December 2020 (UTC) Hello there, I guess you have already created this article on the mainspace. It looks in a better shape. Regards. Hitro talk 06:53, 7 December 2020 (UTC) Article on OVO-TECH - new sources added So, I have added a new, credible link which is not just passing mentions however is in Polish - I am not sure if it is a problem though. Could you please re-verify? :) The article link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:OVO-TECH , and the new source which has an in depth article on our company link is: https://echodnia.eu/swietokrzyskie/maszyny-od-malej-firmy-ze-starachowic-kupuje-tysiace-przedsiebiorstw-na-calym-swiecie-ich-produkty-trafiaja-do-setek-milionow/ar/c15-15061950 It is a public publisher and it is not a sponsored article. They decided to do an article on us because we were coming out with new UV disinfection lamps during COVID times, and I think it is the most in-depth article covering our company so far. Cheers, McG — Preceding unsigned comment added by McG4evah (talk • contribs) 11:32, 7 December 2020 (UTC) @McG4evah:, Hello there, the link that you provided is not working. However, a reviewer has already rejected the submission. I suggest you to see WP:NCOMPANY, and if you believe that you can establish notability as per the guidelines then recreate this draft. Unless the notability is established, the draft will not be accepted. Regards. Hitro talk 08:47, 8 December 2020 (UTC) New sources added for OVO-TECH Hello there, I am not sure why the link doesn't work for you, it works perfectly fine for me. The source is totally independent from us, as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by McG4evah (talk • contribs) 10:03, 8 December 2020 (UTC) @McG4evah:, Hello there, In order to demonstrate notability you are required to introduce multiple sources where the topic has received significant coverage. This is the core of the notability guideline. Regards. Hitro talk 07:43, 9 December 2020 (UTC) Req Hi @Hitro as there was no article on this man Raybak Abdesselem as he was the winner of the Karate championship in 2019, can you help me to fix the info box if possible and patrol the page? As I have not added enough data to the info box. --CGOV (talk) 13:21, 9 December 2020 (UTC) @CGOV:, Hello there, I will look into this later. What sort of help do you require in fixing the infobox? It looks fine to me. Regards. Hitro talk 13:27, 9 December 2020 (UTC) @HitroMilanese:, Hi thank you for responding, is it necessary to add awards to the info box or team names, years of performance, coach etc.? --CGOV (talk) 13:33, 9 December 2020 (UTC) @CGOV: No, it is not necessary to add. Apart from that, I am not sure about the notability guidelines for karate. Gymnasts are deemed notable if they win an individual medal at Youth Olympic Games. But I am not sure about karateka. See WP:GYMNAST. I will leave it for another reviewer to review. Regards. Hitro talk 13:41, 9 December 2020 (UTC) @HitroMilanese:, Hi thanks for letting me know about info box, and yes passing notability of Gymnastics. Passing junior gymnastic notability as well as artistics. according to the france karateka and WKF website. --CGOV (talk) 13:48, 9 December 2020 (UTC) Draft: High Atlas Foundation Hi. On "Draft: High Atlas Foundation," the inline citations follow the WP guidelines. Please explain your comment. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by EllenH63 (talk • contribs) 17:18, 9 December 2020 (UTC) @EllenH63:, Hello there, You should fix the URL of the references so that the reader may click them to access the website. Currently, all the references are plain text instead of hyperlinks. Regards. Hitro talk 07:06, 10 December 2020 (UTC) Radium Carbonate Thanks for reviewing my draft and making it an article! -322UbnBr2 (Talk | Contributions | Actions) 18:02, 10 December 2020 (UTC) New Page Patrol December Newsletter Hello HitroMilanese, Year in review It has been a productive year for New Page Patrol as we've roughly cut the size of the New Page Patrol queue in half this year. We have been fortunate to have a lot of great work done by Rosguill who was the reviewer of the most pages and redirects this past year. Thanks and credit go to JTtheOG and Onel5969 who join Rosguill in repeating in the top 10 from last year. Thanks to John B123, Hughesdarren, and Mccapra who all got the NPR permission this year and joined the top 10. 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