User contributions for Lissajous

1 December 2011

• 09:3309:33, 1 December 2011 diff hist +20 m Lake Eyre add south australia for clarity in opening

7 August 2011

• 08:4408:44, 7 August 2011 diff hist −10 m France →Health: copyedit.
• 01:1701:17, 7 August 2011 diff hist −20 Apollo program How's this - preserves the use of 'space-flight', while avoiding a contorted first sentence.
• 01:0101:01, 7 August 2011 diff hist −192 Apollo program Tighten up the lede, copyediting to improve readability. In particular, made the opening sentence stand on its own as a clear summary. Also reworked timeline issue in line with talk page.

2 August 2011

• 11:2611:26, 2 August 2011 diff hist +18 m User:Lissajous No edit summary current

25 February 2011

• 06:5406:54, 25 February 2011 diff hist +3 m Titanic →Lifeboats launched: Copyedit.
• 06:1706:17, 25 February 2011 diff hist +31 m User:SuggestBot/Requests →I want to try personalized SuggestBot suggestions for articles to edit

31 January 2011

• 06:2206:22, 31 January 2011 diff hist −44 m Irma (supermarket) copyedit

28 December 2010

• 12:5712:57, 28 December 2010 diff hist −1 m The Polyphonic Spree →History: an -> a

27 May 2010

• 13:1613:16, 27 May 2010 diff hist −7 m Führer Copyedit, cleaned up "exclusively" and "usually" at cross purposes.

9 May 2010

• 07:0607:06, 9 May 2010 diff hist −19 m Kessler syndrome Mostly copyedit. Some minor corrections to match reference.
• 02:1702:17, 9 May 2010 diff hist −81 m Lisa Randall →External links: rm dead link ("warped passages")

27 April 2010

• 11:2911:29, 27 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Apollo program Tiny edit - move "first" into the wiki linked "humans" pointing to list of apollo astronauts (so it's "first humans" that's linked).

10 April 2010

• 07:0207:02, 10 April 2010 diff hist −3 m IPad →Audio and output: copyedit
• 07:0007:00, 10 April 2010 diff hist −165 m IPad →Hardware: copyedit
• 06:5606:56, 10 April 2010 diff hist −31 m IPad →Hardware: The plastic might or might not improve cellular reception, but no references exist to say one way or the other.

6 April 2010

• 11:4211:42, 6 April 2010 diff hist −22 m Military history of Australia during the Vietnam War Lede - wordsmithing.
• 11:0811:08, 6 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Albert Speer →Early years: copyedit - rework sentence to remove two 'his' with different subjects,
• 09:5909:59, 6 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Ghost stations of the Paris Métro Copyedit - "conferring ... over Parisians" -> "acquiring ... among Parisians"
• 09:1509:15, 6 April 2010 diff hist 0 m De Havilland Canada DHC-4 Caribou Leading letter should be a capital at start of sentence. Undid revision 354269196 by 81.105.172.241 (talk)

4 April 2010

• 13:0713:07, 4 April 2010 diff hist −44 m Copenhagen →Cuisine: minor copyedit, +cut some unneded wikilinks.
• 12:2612:26, 4 April 2010 diff hist +32 Apollo Guidance Computer Add reference for
• 12:1012:10, 4 April 2010 diff hist −313 m Apollo Guidance Computer →Design: Strike irrelevant info (that Minuteman used Texas Instruments parts), some copyediting.
• 11:5411:54, 4 April 2010 diff hist +15 m Apollo Guidance Computer →Design: "gate" -> "IC" (technically, 2 gates per IC for the Block-II)
• 11:4911:49, 4 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Apollo Guidance Computer →{{anchor|DSKY}} DSKY interface: decapitalisation of FDAI.
• 11:0111:01, 4 April 2010 diff hist −104 m RAF Elsham Wolds Copyedit - various.
• 10:5210:52, 4 April 2010 diff hist +13 m Apollo Guidance Computer Lede: wikilink IC -> integrated circuit, minor copyediting.
• 10:2010:20, 4 April 2010 diff hist −62 m Apollo Guidance Computer →{{anchor|DSKY}} DSKY interface: Minot copyedit to sentence on internal use of metric units.
• 10:1510:15, 4 April 2010 diff hist +5 m DSKY Make redirect point directly to DSKY entry in AGC. current
• 10:1410:14, 4 April 2010 diff hist +18 m Apollo Guidance Computer →DSKY interface: Added "DSKY" anchor - for use in redirect from DSKY.

30 March 2010

• 08:4008:40, 30 March 2010 diff hist −3 m Apollo 11 Reverted edits by 218.248.9.1 (talk) to last version by Rjwilmsi
• 07:2807:28, 30 March 2010 diff hist −133 m Apollo program Copyedit lead - mostly cutting words.

28 March 2010

• 19:3719:37, 28 March 2010 diff hist −24 m No. 77 Squadron RAAF →History: minor copyedit
• 11:1311:13, 28 March 2010 diff hist −182 m Hybrid electric vehicle →Terminology: copyediting
• 11:0011:00, 28 March 2010 diff hist 0 m Hybrid electric vehicle →Legislation and incentives: typo
• 10:5810:58, 28 March 2010 diff hist −26 m Hybrid electric vehicle →Legislation and incentives: copyedit, cleanup, change tense for events in the past.
• 10:4910:49, 28 March 2010 diff hist −8 m Hybrid electric vehicle →Raw materials shortage: Fix position of period v reference, minor copyedit.

19 March 2010

• 20:3520:35, 19 March 2010 diff hist +585 User talk:207.230.209.90 →January 2010: Another vandalism warning.
• 20:2220:22, 19 March 2010 diff hist −29 m Apollo (spacecraft) Reverted edits by 207.230.209.90 (talk) to last version by RadioBroadcast

4 March 2010

• 07:3507:35, 4 March 2010 diff hist +33 m Apollo 13 CST wikilink

3 March 2010

• 16:0416:04, 3 March 2010 diff hist −21 m Final Solution Reverted edits by Dominic Pelchat (talk) to last version by Burdenj

1 March 2010

• 16:0716:07, 1 March 2010 diff hist +189 m User talk:Lissajous →Deleting userpages: ack

25 February 2010

• 10:2810:28, 25 February 2010 diff hist −23 m Transistor →Bipolar junction transistor: Copyedit - rearrange sentences for clarity and scan.

22 February 2010

• 10:5210:52, 22 February 2010 diff hist −18 m Apollo 13 →Mission highlights: Copyedit.
• 10:3910:39, 22 February 2010 diff hist −7 m Apollo 13 Copyedit - don't need that 'crewed'.
• 10:3810:38, 22 February 2010 diff hist −19 m Apollo 13 Copyedit
• 10:3110:31, 22 February 2010 diff hist 0 m Apollo 11 Copyedit - sub 'land' for walk - already had 'land' a sentence or so earlier, so mix it up.

20 February 2010

• 21:3521:35, 20 February 2010 diff hist +1 m Lunar Roving Vehicle That space was needed. Undid revision 345239325 by 78.147.44.220 (talk)

19 February 2010

• 10:3610:36, 19 February 2010 diff hist 0 m Self-aligned gate Copyedit.

18 February 2010

• 08:4708:47, 18 February 2010 diff hist +326 m Apollo Guidance Computer Reverted edits by 76.213.227.102 (talk) to last version by Lissajous