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06:2606:26, 7 November 2024 diff hist +9 2024 United States presidential election I guess we do need this bit to explain why there's two concessions mentioned. Perhaps in a week, this can be described in just a few words.
06:2306:23, 7 November 2024 diff hist −53 2024 United States presidential election Still too much detail for the lead, even for a very recent event. That past level of detail can be in a later paragraph if there's consensus for that.
06:2106:21, 7 November 2024 diff hist −10 2024 United States presidential election I get that recency is the reason for this, but it's far too specific for the intro paragraph. This is the next level less specific, and as time goes on, the description will probably be truncated further.

06:2006:20, 2 November 2024 diff hist −294 Elko Regional Airport →Airline and destination: This is more confusing than useful for people who aren't deep into aircraft types, which aren't normally mentioned in A&D sections of airport articles. Whether it's last years RJ200s or this years RJ550s, the point is the route still operates. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

18:5018:50, 20 October 2024 diff hist +4 m An American Family →Critical response current
18:4918:49, 20 October 2024 diff hist −3 An American Family →Production and story
18:4818:48, 20 October 2024 diff hist +13 An American Family →Production and story: There absolutely was narration, introducing every episode and sometimes for scene breaks
18:4718:47, 20 October 2024 diff hist −4 An American Family →Production and story: "luxurious" overstates it and is WP:NPOV.
05:3605:36, 20 October 2024 diff hist −24 The Serial →Analysis: I actually don't believe there's any cocaine use in the novel, certainly not objectively frequent as the relationships described. current
05:3005:30, 20 October 2024 diff hist +30 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: Enough of this section's writing is WP:OR that I think a template is warranted. I'm assuming good faith, and hope there are links for the called-out assertions.

22:3922:39, 19 October 2024 diff hist +4 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: Why would you not link his article too?
22:3422:34, 19 October 2024 diff hist +26 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: As this is inside quotation marks, surely there's a direct cite you can add?
22:3322:33, 19 October 2024 diff hist 0 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present
22:3222:32, 19 October 2024 diff hist +26 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: Again, uncited, overdramatic, WP:OWN writing. Which general trend occurred where man people were "making their millions" in the 1970s and moving to Mill Valley? Information in Wikipedia needs to be cited, or it will be deleted.
22:2922:29, 19 October 2024 diff hist +4 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: Seriously? Do you not think any women at all were in the workforce in the 1950s?
22:2822:28, 19 October 2024 diff hist +26 Mill Valley, California →1950s to present: This seems extremely overdramatic and potentially WP:NPOV, especially for a city where only half the year sees any rain potential. Cite it if you think it's an objective description.