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Water, Air, Earth, Fire #2
Make Me Fall
You can’t fly without falling, so close your eyes and let go.
People ask me if I’m human. If I have feelings. If I’ve ever loved anyone. I’m the lawyer who has never lost a case because I have nothing else to live for.
Until Jonah.
He’s my complete opposite: a reckless boy twelve years younger than me, made of sunshine and wicked smiles, pure and breathtaking.
It all starts with a secret. He wants to find out if he’s bi, and he begs me to teach him because we’ll never see each other again.
Until he shows up on my doorstep with nowhere else to go. I can’t draw lines faster than we blur them. He’s the unstoppable force; I’m the immovable object. When we collide, things get filthy. Complicated. More beautiful than I ever could have imagined.
He’s the only person ever to learn the truth: I’ve always been human. I’ve always had feelings. I’ve been so, so afraid to lose.
Because the moment we find enough trust to jump is the moment we realize our wings might be too broken to fly.
The books in this series take place in the same universe and have recurring characters, but each book is a standalone that can be read separately or in any order!
People ask me if I’m human. If I have feelings. If I’ve ever loved anyone. I’m the lawyer who has never lost a case because I have nothing else to live for.
Until Jonah.
He’s my complete opposite: a reckless boy twelve years younger than me, made of sunshine and wicked smiles, pure and breathtaking.
It all starts with a secret. He wants to find out if he’s bi, and he begs me to teach him because we’ll never see each other again.
Until he shows up on my doorstep with nowhere else to go. I can’t draw lines faster than we blur them. He’s the unstoppable force; I’m the immovable object. When we collide, things get filthy. Complicated. More beautiful than I ever could have imagined.
He’s the only person ever to learn the truth: I’ve always been human. I’ve always had feelings. I’ve been so, so afraid to lose.
Because the moment we find enough trust to jump is the moment we realize our wings might be too broken to fly.
The books in this series take place in the same universe and have recurring characters, but each book is a standalone that can be read separately or in any order!
308 pages, ebook
First published July 27, 2022
About the author
Riley Nash
14 books700 followersInternational bestselling author Riley Nash (he/they) is based in the rainy PNW and writes stories about broken boys who find home in each other, hurt/comfort, and mental health rep.
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August 5, 2023
— 4.5 stars ☆
the way this book has a clutch on my heart. 🥺
the first book was so angsty and almost too much, at times. but this? this impacted me so much more, bc somehow while being emotional, it also had sweet heartwarming moments that were just everything to me. and the sunshine energy Jonah radiated was so chefs kiss. i loved how positive and playfully obnoxious and sassy he was through everything. i was so in love with him from the very beginning. 😭
Gray, the way he evolved for me from being a cold lawyer to just almost breaking for Jonah, opening up for him, showing him all the cracks inside him - it was just so gorgeous and I ATE THAT UP. his past was heartbreaking and i can't imagine how someone could take advantage of him when he was just so fucking CARING. the “i need to hold you one more time”. 😭 the “i wish you never had to be afraid again”. he could be the sweetest sometimes fr. 🥺
their relationship was EVERYTHING. from the very beginning, when Gray offered to *help* Jonah out with his *problem* till the end when they finally, after everything, got together and had their happily ever after.
while i did think book 1 was darker and a whole lot angstier, this was somehow more poignant for me and gosh, the way i adored this. the writing style is just something i loved so much, and the lil notes in front of every chapter? i loved that! they have definitely come under one of my fav mm couples till date. 🥰
the way this book has a clutch on my heart. 🥺
You're alone, too. Almost as lonely as I am.
the first book was so angsty and almost too much, at times. but this? this impacted me so much more, bc somehow while being emotional, it also had sweet heartwarming moments that were just everything to me. and the sunshine energy Jonah radiated was so chefs kiss. i loved how positive and playfully obnoxious and sassy he was through everything. i was so in love with him from the very beginning. 😭
“I don't want to let anyone hurt you ever again,” I breathe. “Not even me.”
Gray, the way he evolved for me from being a cold lawyer to just almost breaking for Jonah, opening up for him, showing him all the cracks inside him - it was just so gorgeous and I ATE THAT UP. his past was heartbreaking and i can't imagine how someone could take advantage of him when he was just so fucking CARING. the “i need to hold you one more time”. 😭 the “i wish you never had to be afraid again”. he could be the sweetest sometimes fr. 🥺
their relationship was EVERYTHING. from the very beginning, when Gray offered to *help* Jonah out with his *problem* till the end when they finally, after everything, got together and had their happily ever after.
You fly, and then you fall, because you were never made to leave the earth at all.
while i did think book 1 was darker and a whole lot angstier, this was somehow more poignant for me and gosh, the way i adored this. the writing style is just something i loved so much, and the lil notes in front of every chapter? i loved that! they have definitely come under one of my fav mm couples till date. 🥰
June 18, 2023
unfortunately, sufferably, and miserably yawned my way through this well-received, highly-praised, mostly-4-and-5-star-rated book. what’s new?? 🤪
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December 18, 2023
re-read on audio August 2023
ALL MY F* LOVE FOR GRAY AND JONAH!! ♡♡♡
So, refreshed my memory on Colson (Gray's ex) and I can't wait to see how he'll fit together with Alec and their boy Benji.
note for the audio: I remember a little chat I had with Riley last year when he was telling me about the narrator who auditioned for Gray and I was really excited to “meet” him. And now I can only agree, Theo Sinclair “really is a beautiful Gray”. Both, Theo Sinclair and Michael Gallagher, are new-to-me and they did a fantastic job with narrating this audio. Riley chose them all so well!
5***** falling stars
Wow. This was so vastly different from the first book in the series but I didn’t love it any less. Where Hold Me Under was angsty and heart wrenching as hell, this was not. But if anything this book was pulling at my emotions just as much. Even without all the angst and drama.
I was buddy-reading with Tare. Well, as much as our time difference allowed us to do, anyway *lol - sharing a lot of excitement and swoon. ♡
*************
First, Jonah… one of the uniquest characters I’ve ever encountered in a book. He was like a tornado ripping through life with no one to truly able to keep up with him. And I was amazed by him, how he was able to going through life so positively and good natured while no one ever believed in him and people always telling him how dumb he is and what it is he can’t do. Always pointing at where he presumably is lacking. But what does Jonah do? He sees it as a challenge. Always wanting to prove to people they are wrong.
But he’s hurt by that nonetheless. Pulling at is sense of self-worth for years.
And then Gray. Beautiful Gray. I already liked him in the previous book but seeing him here in is own story, finding love… it was everything.
And their love story? Just wow. I have so freaking many favorite moments throughout their journey of finding their way into each other’s hearts I wouldn’t even know where to begin to quote them. But here is one anyway:
Another absolute favorite is right at the beginning. The moment they met. A total nerve wrecked Jonah suspecting he might be bi but also kind of sure he wouldn’t like being with a man and totally calm Gray offering to show him. In a lavatory on a plane. Total strangers on their way to New York. Expecting to never see each other again.
I’m sorry this review is kind of all over the place. I used a lot of words just to say "I loved it" *lmaooo -- but I'm honestly still struggling with all my thoughts and feelings about it.
**********
This goes up on my ’22 favorite’s shelf, taking seat right next to "Hold Me Under".
side note:
I saw this quote on Instagram at the beginning of 🏳️🌈 pride month a few weeks back -- totally out of context and loved it so so much. Now I’m freaking out a little because I now know it belongs to Jonah & Gray’s story. ♡♡♡
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Water, Air, Earth, Fire Series:
Book 1 - Hold Me Under - 5.0 stars
Book 2 - Make Me Fall - 5.0 stars ♡
Book 2.5 - And All Their Stars - 5.0 stars
Book 3 - Show Me Wonders - 4.5 stars
Book 4 - Teach Me to Sin - 5.0 stars
Xmas Novella Bundle - Merry and Bright - 4.5 stars
ALL MY F* LOVE FOR GRAY AND JONAH!! ♡♡♡
So, refreshed my memory on Colson (Gray's ex) and I can't wait to see how he'll fit together with Alec and their boy Benji.
note for the audio: I remember a little chat I had with Riley last year when he was telling me about the narrator who auditioned for Gray and I was really excited to “meet” him. And now I can only agree, Theo Sinclair “really is a beautiful Gray”. Both, Theo Sinclair and Michael Gallagher, are new-to-me and they did a fantastic job with narrating this audio. Riley chose them all so well!
5***** falling stars
You’re the only world where I make sense.
Wow. This was so vastly different from the first book in the series but I didn’t love it any less. Where Hold Me Under was angsty and heart wrenching as hell, this was not. But if anything this book was pulling at my emotions just as much. Even without all the angst and drama.
I was buddy-reading with Tare. Well, as much as our time difference allowed us to do, anyway *lol - sharing a lot of excitement and swoon. ♡
*************
First, Jonah… one of the uniquest characters I’ve ever encountered in a book. He was like a tornado ripping through life with no one to truly able to keep up with him. And I was amazed by him, how he was able to going through life so positively and good natured while no one ever believed in him and people always telling him how dumb he is and what it is he can’t do. Always pointing at where he presumably is lacking. But what does Jonah do? He sees it as a challenge. Always wanting to prove to people they are wrong.
But he’s hurt by that nonetheless. Pulling at is sense of self-worth for years.
I want my problems fixed, maybe more than I want to be happy or honest or anything else, because that’s all I’ve ever been—a problem.
And then Gray. Beautiful Gray. I already liked him in the previous book but seeing him here in is own story, finding love… it was everything.
He’s so fucking tactile, the starved way his skin searches for mine every second we’re together.
This man's trust has been broken down and beaten out of him so many times, but he's offering me the few precious scraps he has left.
And their love story? Just wow. I have so freaking many favorite moments throughout their journey of finding their way into each other’s hearts I wouldn’t even know where to begin to quote them. But here is one anyway:
“Don’t go on the date.”
“What?”
“Please don’t.”
“I didn’t. I canceled.”
He sighs so softly I almost don’t hear. “Good.”
Another absolute favorite is right at the beginning. The moment they met. A total nerve wrecked Jonah suspecting he might be bi but also kind of sure he wouldn’t like being with a man and totally calm Gray offering to show him. In a lavatory on a plane. Total strangers on their way to New York. Expecting to never see each other again.
I’m sorry this review is kind of all over the place. I used a lot of words just to say "I loved it" *lmaooo -- but I'm honestly still struggling with all my thoughts and feelings about it.
**********
This goes up on my ’22 favorite’s shelf, taking seat right next to "Hold Me Under".
side note:
I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin.
I saw this quote on Instagram at the beginning of 🏳️🌈 pride month a few weeks back -- totally out of context and loved it so so much. Now I’m freaking out a little because I now know it belongs to Jonah & Gray’s story. ♡♡♡
**************
Water, Air, Earth, Fire Series:
Book 1 - Hold Me Under - 5.0 stars
Book 2 - Make Me Fall - 5.0 stars ♡
Book 2.5 - And All Their Stars - 5.0 stars
Book 3 - Show Me Wonders - 4.5 stars
Book 4 - Teach Me to Sin - 5.0 stars
Xmas Novella Bundle - Merry and Bright - 4.5 stars
August 15, 2023
***5.0 rating***
"You’re his home. No one else has ever wanted him like that. You make sure he knows you’re not going anywhere."
From the moment I delved into the pages of "Hold Me Under," it was evident that Riley Nash's writing would captivate me, and my instincts did not lead me astray. "Make Me Fall", the second installment in this series, exceeded all my expectations, delivering an experience that was both familiar and exceptionally enriching. Assuredly, those of you who predicted my fondness for this novel were absolutely right! ❤️
Simply put I adored Gray and Jonah. 🥺❤️ Their connection was a thing of sheer beauty, and the serendipity that brought them together filled me with delight.
My introduction to Gray occurred in Victor's narrative, where he stood as the family attorney, cloaked in an aura of mystery and intrigue. His enigmatic nature piqued my curiosity, and when I learned that his story promised an enthralling read, my anticipation was palpable.
"Make Me Fall" ushers us onto a flight to New York, where Gray occupies a first-class seat, eagerly awaiting departure. The flight's momentum hinges on the arrival of a tardy passenger, none other than Jonah. Fated or not, Jonah finds himself seated beside Gray, much to the latter's chagrin.
Jonah, a 23-year-old hailing from a quaint Iowa town, serendipitously secures a first-class seat after selflessly giving up his own spot to assist a mother in need. His charm is instantaneous, captivating all who encounter him. His initial interaction with Gray is undeniably awkward and somewhat comical. Jonah's exploration of his own sexuality, especially his bicurious inclinations, presents an opportunity to connect with Gray. To everyone's surprise, including Gray's, the composed and enigmatic older man acquiesces. In the wake of this unexpected liaison, neither Jonah nor Gray anticipates a second encounter. A mere dalliance with a stranger was all it was meant to be.
Time marches on, and fate intervenes once more, reuniting Gray and Jonah. In an unexpected twist, Gray, the attorney, becomes involved in Jonah's life as a favor to Avery, Jonah's professor, and Gray's friend. This encounter, despite its familiarity, prompts both parties to maintain a veneer of professionalism. Jonah grapples with the unexpected reunion, having only just begun to move past his previous infatuation. He strives to conform to his parents' ideals, embracing a future of conventionality and heteronormativity, complete with a wife and children. Jonah even entertains romantic notions concerning his friend Sophie. Yet, all those plans wane as Gray re-enters the scene.
Riley Nash masterfully paints a mesmerizing portrait of Jonah, revealing his unique attributes while steering clear of defining him solely by his disabilities—a learning difference and the use of only one functioning hand. Jonah's resilience shines through; he endeavors earnestly, though not always successfully, in his pursuit of success in law school. A pivotal moment arrives when a mock interview with Gray and Avery proves more challenging than expected, leading to Jonah's sudden disappearance. Gray receives word from Elliot, Jonah's friend, about his vanishing act. Gray's concern deepens, given their shared history.
When Gray eventually locates Jonah, he takes it upon himself to provide solace and aid his recovery. Jonah's emotional breakdown, rooted in the pressures of law school and his own insecurities, comes to light. Gray, having developed a genuine care for Jonah, extends his sanctuary, offering him a place within his opulent abode. The complexities of their relationship evolve as they grow closer, reigniting the spark that first drew them together. However, the course of true romance never runs smoothly; Gray presents Jonah with the opportunity to intern for him. Though their professional entanglement casts a shadow over their romantic liaison, it becomes clear that law is not Jonah's true calling. He had pursued it out of familial obligation, a decision Gray uncovers when Jonah drops out of law school.
Despite the pain of deception, Gray and Jonah's bond perseveres. Reconciliation occurs, albeit with lingering sorrow over the cessation of their professional ties. Fate intervenes once more when Jonah reveals his intention to go on a date set up by his friend Elliot. Consumed by jealousy, Gray confesses his feelings and beseeches Jonah to reconsider. Gray's vulnerability serves as a powerful testament to his sincerity. These two souls, despite their disparities, share an undeniable connection. Jonah discloses that he never followed through with the date, reaffirming their connection and igniting a passionate revival of their relationship.
Riley Nash's prose, akin to his previous work, shines brilliantly in "Make Me Fall." The narrative unearths the depth of Gray and Jonah's loneliness, weaving a tale that tugs at the heartstrings. Gray, a solitary figure with no family and betrayed by his ex-husband, Colson, resonates with readers. Jonah's story is equally compelling, as he grapples with dyslexia and a single-functioning hand. These disparate lives intersect, resulting in a love that provides solace and healing. Gray's affection empowers Jonah to embrace his identity and pursue his true passion—mechanics. In turn, Jonah's love guides Gray toward vulnerability, self-acceptance, and the understanding that he is worthy of love.
The narrative unfolds against a backdrop of contrasts—differences that ultimately serve to enhance their union. As I reflect upon the story of Gray and Jonah, I am reminded of their profound similarities despite the disparities that initially set them apart. Their journey is a testimony to the human capacity for love, emotional growth, self-love, self-acceptance, and second chances. A heartfelt expression of gratitude is due to Riley Nash for crafting such a beautiful narrative. The profound bond between Jonah and Gray has earned them a cherished spot among my favorite fictional couples. Riley's exploration of their vulnerabilities resonates deeply, a sentiment that pervades each page and evokes an emotional response.
The decision to enshrine their epilogue in the form of a novella, aptly titled 'And All Their Stars,' was a masterstroke, enriching the narrative's resolution. This extended denouement further encapsulates the beauty of Gray and Jonah's journey, cementing their happily ever after. Riley Nash's contribution to the literary landscape is indeed noteworthy, with Gray and Jonah emerging as the quintessential embodiment of broken souls finding healing and redemption in each other's embrace.
The journey of these two remarkable men, Jonah, and Gray, is a testament to the power of love, acceptance, and self-discovery. Their shared narrative, laden with emotions, resonates deeply, forging a connection with readers that transcends the written word.
These two beautiful men😭😭 gah I love them so much.
Expect:
- Age-gap
- Opposites Attract
- Disability rep
- Mental health rep
- Hurt/Comfort
- Size difference
- Bisexual awakening
- Angst
- Steamy moments
- Loveable MCs
I have been binging Riley's books since Sunday and will be till I read Teach Me to Sin this week, which is Colson's book, and Alec from Hold Me Under. I am curious to see how the MMM story will unfold since I don't know who the third man is. Nonetheless, I am excited!
"You’re his home. No one else has ever wanted him like that. You make sure he knows you’re not going anywhere."
From the moment I delved into the pages of "Hold Me Under," it was evident that Riley Nash's writing would captivate me, and my instincts did not lead me astray. "Make Me Fall", the second installment in this series, exceeded all my expectations, delivering an experience that was both familiar and exceptionally enriching. Assuredly, those of you who predicted my fondness for this novel were absolutely right! ❤️
Simply put I adored Gray and Jonah. 🥺❤️ Their connection was a thing of sheer beauty, and the serendipity that brought them together filled me with delight.
My introduction to Gray occurred in Victor's narrative, where he stood as the family attorney, cloaked in an aura of mystery and intrigue. His enigmatic nature piqued my curiosity, and when I learned that his story promised an enthralling read, my anticipation was palpable.
"Make Me Fall" ushers us onto a flight to New York, where Gray occupies a first-class seat, eagerly awaiting departure. The flight's momentum hinges on the arrival of a tardy passenger, none other than Jonah. Fated or not, Jonah finds himself seated beside Gray, much to the latter's chagrin.
Jonah, a 23-year-old hailing from a quaint Iowa town, serendipitously secures a first-class seat after selflessly giving up his own spot to assist a mother in need. His charm is instantaneous, captivating all who encounter him. His initial interaction with Gray is undeniably awkward and somewhat comical. Jonah's exploration of his own sexuality, especially his bicurious inclinations, presents an opportunity to connect with Gray. To everyone's surprise, including Gray's, the composed and enigmatic older man acquiesces. In the wake of this unexpected liaison, neither Jonah nor Gray anticipates a second encounter. A mere dalliance with a stranger was all it was meant to be.
Time marches on, and fate intervenes once more, reuniting Gray and Jonah. In an unexpected twist, Gray, the attorney, becomes involved in Jonah's life as a favor to Avery, Jonah's professor, and Gray's friend. This encounter, despite its familiarity, prompts both parties to maintain a veneer of professionalism. Jonah grapples with the unexpected reunion, having only just begun to move past his previous infatuation. He strives to conform to his parents' ideals, embracing a future of conventionality and heteronormativity, complete with a wife and children. Jonah even entertains romantic notions concerning his friend Sophie. Yet, all those plans wane as Gray re-enters the scene.
Riley Nash masterfully paints a mesmerizing portrait of Jonah, revealing his unique attributes while steering clear of defining him solely by his disabilities—a learning difference and the use of only one functioning hand. Jonah's resilience shines through; he endeavors earnestly, though not always successfully, in his pursuit of success in law school. A pivotal moment arrives when a mock interview with Gray and Avery proves more challenging than expected, leading to Jonah's sudden disappearance. Gray receives word from Elliot, Jonah's friend, about his vanishing act. Gray's concern deepens, given their shared history.
When Gray eventually locates Jonah, he takes it upon himself to provide solace and aid his recovery. Jonah's emotional breakdown, rooted in the pressures of law school and his own insecurities, comes to light. Gray, having developed a genuine care for Jonah, extends his sanctuary, offering him a place within his opulent abode. The complexities of their relationship evolve as they grow closer, reigniting the spark that first drew them together. However, the course of true romance never runs smoothly; Gray presents Jonah with the opportunity to intern for him. Though their professional entanglement casts a shadow over their romantic liaison, it becomes clear that law is not Jonah's true calling. He had pursued it out of familial obligation, a decision Gray uncovers when Jonah drops out of law school.
Despite the pain of deception, Gray and Jonah's bond perseveres. Reconciliation occurs, albeit with lingering sorrow over the cessation of their professional ties. Fate intervenes once more when Jonah reveals his intention to go on a date set up by his friend Elliot. Consumed by jealousy, Gray confesses his feelings and beseeches Jonah to reconsider. Gray's vulnerability serves as a powerful testament to his sincerity. These two souls, despite their disparities, share an undeniable connection. Jonah discloses that he never followed through with the date, reaffirming their connection and igniting a passionate revival of their relationship.
Riley Nash's prose, akin to his previous work, shines brilliantly in "Make Me Fall." The narrative unearths the depth of Gray and Jonah's loneliness, weaving a tale that tugs at the heartstrings. Gray, a solitary figure with no family and betrayed by his ex-husband, Colson, resonates with readers. Jonah's story is equally compelling, as he grapples with dyslexia and a single-functioning hand. These disparate lives intersect, resulting in a love that provides solace and healing. Gray's affection empowers Jonah to embrace his identity and pursue his true passion—mechanics. In turn, Jonah's love guides Gray toward vulnerability, self-acceptance, and the understanding that he is worthy of love.
The narrative unfolds against a backdrop of contrasts—differences that ultimately serve to enhance their union. As I reflect upon the story of Gray and Jonah, I am reminded of their profound similarities despite the disparities that initially set them apart. Their journey is a testimony to the human capacity for love, emotional growth, self-love, self-acceptance, and second chances. A heartfelt expression of gratitude is due to Riley Nash for crafting such a beautiful narrative. The profound bond between Jonah and Gray has earned them a cherished spot among my favorite fictional couples. Riley's exploration of their vulnerabilities resonates deeply, a sentiment that pervades each page and evokes an emotional response.
The decision to enshrine their epilogue in the form of a novella, aptly titled 'And All Their Stars,' was a masterstroke, enriching the narrative's resolution. This extended denouement further encapsulates the beauty of Gray and Jonah's journey, cementing their happily ever after. Riley Nash's contribution to the literary landscape is indeed noteworthy, with Gray and Jonah emerging as the quintessential embodiment of broken souls finding healing and redemption in each other's embrace.
The journey of these two remarkable men, Jonah, and Gray, is a testament to the power of love, acceptance, and self-discovery. Their shared narrative, laden with emotions, resonates deeply, forging a connection with readers that transcends the written word.
These two beautiful men😭😭 gah I love them so much.
Expect:
- Age-gap
- Opposites Attract
- Disability rep
- Mental health rep
- Hurt/Comfort
- Size difference
- Bisexual awakening
- Angst
- Steamy moments
- Loveable MCs
I have been binging Riley's books since Sunday and will be till I read Teach Me to Sin this week, which is Colson's book, and Alec from Hold Me Under. I am curious to see how the MMM story will unfold since I don't know who the third man is. Nonetheless, I am excited!
January 11, 2023
Audio - 5 Stars ...New to me narrators Michael Gallagher & Theo Sinclair
Story - 4.5 Stars
Story - 4.5 Stars
November 28, 2022
|| 4.0 stars ||
This was a very heartwarming and slightly sad story.
The writing is comforting and nice: it manages to captivate you even during the moments when nothing much is going on.
It’s very heavy on the hurt/comfort and grumpy/sunshine tropes, but it also features an age-gap and even has an intern/boss dynamic for a little while.
Jonah was without a doubt my favourite character in this book. He is energetic, hopeful, chaotic, happy, caring and sweet.
The way he persevered even with all his setbacks in life was inspiring and beautiful. I can’t imagine ever being that strong myself.
He was an impossibly likable person, and it was absolutely unthinkable to not wish him the very best.
However, if I’m being honest, I wasn’t so sure if Gray really was “the very best” for him at first.
It took me a little while to warm up to him, but once I started to understand his pain and reservations better, I started to like him more and more.
In the end, I could definitely see how much he adored Jonah and I very much wanted them to be together.
Gray might not be perfect, but he was enough, and their love was obviously ample strong to conquer any obstacles.
All in all, I was plenty invested in this book. I think the characters had depth and lots of chemistry together. I definitely enjoyed reading this.
This was a very heartwarming and slightly sad story.
The writing is comforting and nice: it manages to captivate you even during the moments when nothing much is going on.
It’s very heavy on the hurt/comfort and grumpy/sunshine tropes, but it also features an age-gap and even has an intern/boss dynamic for a little while.
“A melancholy part of me wonders whether Gray is in my dream right now or if I’m in his. Which one of us is going to wake up and realize none of this was ever real. I hope it’s me, because sometimes I think I’m a little bit stronger than him.”
Jonah was without a doubt my favourite character in this book. He is energetic, hopeful, chaotic, happy, caring and sweet.
The way he persevered even with all his setbacks in life was inspiring and beautiful. I can’t imagine ever being that strong myself.
He was an impossibly likable person, and it was absolutely unthinkable to not wish him the very best.
However, if I’m being honest, I wasn’t so sure if Gray really was “the very best” for him at first.
It took me a little while to warm up to him, but once I started to understand his pain and reservations better, I started to like him more and more.
In the end, I could definitely see how much he adored Jonah and I very much wanted them to be together.
Gray might not be perfect, but he was enough, and their love was obviously ample strong to conquer any obstacles.
“I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin.”
All in all, I was plenty invested in this book. I think the characters had depth and lots of chemistry together. I definitely enjoyed reading this.
April 9, 2024
First read - 5.0 Stars
Second Read - 5.0 Stars
I am so glad that this book is still a 5 star read for me coz sometimes when I go back to the first books i've ever read, I always rate it lower than I did the first time.
One thing about me is I hate reading age gap romances. Especially when the younger Mc is 18 Or 19 but I loved Gray and Jonah even though they're 12 years apart. It just wasn't that weird for me coz Jonah is 24.
I love Jonah so much. He is so energetic, hopeful and sweet. I love the way he didn't let his disability or dyslexia hold him back
“I wouldn’t be able to do what you’ve done, Jonah—graduating college, passing the LSAT—under those circumstances. Not in a million years. You have more determination and strength of character at twenty-four than I’ve had in my entire life.” His voice speeds up. “It’s admirable, and I don’t want to hear whatever self-deprecating bullshit is about to come out of your mouth, so I suggest you say nothing at all.”
Gray is just the best. I love his sweet endorsements and his little smiles and how he and Jonah always took care of each other.
"I don’t understand. He’s only heard a few sentences about my past, but he knows exactly what I need to hear."
"As we walk back toward Ethan and Victor, a melancholy part of me wonders whether Gray is in my dream right now or if I’m in his. Which one of us is going to wake up and realize none of this was ever real. I hope it’s me, because sometimes I think I’m a little bit stronger than him."
"Gray always stood on my right side. He never hesitated, never second-guessed or had to switch, never once held on to my hand when I needed it to do something. I always told myself that would be the sign. Someone out there would write me into their body, know me so well that I became instinct to them."
I loved the chemistry between this couple. Gray and Jonah is one of the best couples I've ever read. (That HOTEL SCENE was so freaking HOT!!🥵)
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
Second Read - 5.0 Stars
I am so glad that this book is still a 5 star read for me coz sometimes when I go back to the first books i've ever read, I always rate it lower than I did the first time.
One thing about me is I hate reading age gap romances. Especially when the younger Mc is 18 Or 19 but I loved Gray and Jonah even though they're 12 years apart. It just wasn't that weird for me coz Jonah is 24.
I love Jonah so much. He is so energetic, hopeful and sweet. I love the way he didn't let his disability or dyslexia hold him back
“I wouldn’t be able to do what you’ve done, Jonah—graduating college, passing the LSAT—under those circumstances. Not in a million years. You have more determination and strength of character at twenty-four than I’ve had in my entire life.” His voice speeds up. “It’s admirable, and I don’t want to hear whatever self-deprecating bullshit is about to come out of your mouth, so I suggest you say nothing at all.”
Gray is just the best. I love his sweet endorsements and his little smiles and how he and Jonah always took care of each other.
"I don’t understand. He’s only heard a few sentences about my past, but he knows exactly what I need to hear."
"As we walk back toward Ethan and Victor, a melancholy part of me wonders whether Gray is in my dream right now or if I’m in his. Which one of us is going to wake up and realize none of this was ever real. I hope it’s me, because sometimes I think I’m a little bit stronger than him."
"Gray always stood on my right side. He never hesitated, never second-guessed or had to switch, never once held on to my hand when I needed it to do something. I always told myself that would be the sign. Someone out there would write me into their body, know me so well that I became instinct to them."
I loved the chemistry between this couple. Gray and Jonah is one of the best couples I've ever read. (That HOTEL SCENE was so freaking HOT!!🥵)
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
November 2, 2023
4.5/5
Such a beautiful story, I was really close to giving it a five stars rating. I love books where two different types of people somehow make it work and they turn out to be the whole world to each other. I picked this book up really randomly, it wasn't even on my tbr shelf, and I ended up loving it.
I usually hate when books start with the main couple hooking up and after a few months them meeting each other in a place when they least expected it. But this book made it work.
Jonah and Gray, if you saw them on the street, you'd probably think they were from completely different worlds, and you'd probably be right, but the two of them, after going through a lot in their lives, somehow made what they created work. It was so satisfying to read their road to that.
Jonah was a character I don't think anyone would have a problem reading about. I feel that many young people struggling to find their place in their life would totally relate with him. At least I did. Gray is actually the reason I didn’t give the book a 5 star rating, because there were some moments where I was like "Stop thinking this way", but at the end I ended liking him a lot. This man was trying to give a world to Jonah in his own way so how could I not like him? Plus he was kinky and when Jonah said that:
He was totally right, the author for sure knows how to write intimate scenes, and the dirty talk? I was melting.
I don't know why I started reading the series from the second book, although you don't have to start from the first book to understand the second and third one, but the characters from all three appear in every book and now I think I'll read them all because every book sounds pretty interesting.
Such a beautiful story, I was really close to giving it a five stars rating. I love books where two different types of people somehow make it work and they turn out to be the whole world to each other. I picked this book up really randomly, it wasn't even on my tbr shelf, and I ended up loving it.
I usually hate when books start with the main couple hooking up and after a few months them meeting each other in a place when they least expected it. But this book made it work.
Jonah and Gray, if you saw them on the street, you'd probably think they were from completely different worlds, and you'd probably be right, but the two of them, after going through a lot in their lives, somehow made what they created work. It was so satisfying to read their road to that.
"We’re going to figure it out. The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts."
"If I were taken back to the beginning again and again, if I were offered all the choices in the universe, I would always choose each and every step that led me here, no matter how much they hurt."
Jonah was a character I don't think anyone would have a problem reading about. I feel that many young people struggling to find their place in their life would totally relate with him. At least I did. Gray is actually the reason I didn’t give the book a 5 star rating, because there were some moments where I was like "Stop thinking this way", but at the end I ended liking him a lot. This man was trying to give a world to Jonah in his own way so how could I not like him? Plus he was kinky and when Jonah said that:
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
He was totally right, the author for sure knows how to write intimate scenes, and the dirty talk? I was melting.
I don't know why I started reading the series from the second book, although you don't have to start from the first book to understand the second and third one, but the characters from all three appear in every book and now I think I'll read them all because every book sounds pretty interesting.
July 26, 2024
Yo, I don’t know how to feel. I kinda hate being in the minority of haters for this one.
This was my first age-gap-ish book and like…. It felt.....weird?
I really liked both of the characters separately as humans, but Jonah was meant to be like 24???
But his character is SEVERELY AGED DOWN IMO, he acts like he's between 12-15 at best, 90% of the time. (I thought that age-gap might not be my fave, but I realise now, I have no problem with the age-gap element, my problem is when the younger mc is too child-like)
I don’t know if it’s just me, but the attraction between these two just didn’t feel realistic… Gray is posed as this hot mysterious lawyer man, always looking slick in a suit, very intelligent etc. and Jonah just felt like a LITERAL kid half the time doing and saying THE WEIRDEST SHIT?
On a side note: TO BE FAIR, the dirty talk was kinda fire 🔥🔥
But then, in some other chapter, Jonah is all “I had a staring contest with pigeons”.................................
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................................................
................................................
.................................................................................. wot?
Jonah and the pigeon be like:
….. uhhhh okay Jonah? Wtf is going on?
GRAY, PLEASE STAND UP IN FRONT OF THE CLASS AND TELL ME WHY YOU WANT TO INSERT YOURSELF INTO THIS MAN(/child)?????????
I SIMPLY CANNOT get my brain around the weird juxtaposition between "sunshine character with dick piercings and a dirty mouth" Jonah & "Chasing frogs like a 12 year old" Jonah. 💀💀💀
Shame because I really liked hold me under, and now I’m not sure if I’ll continue the series.
Also I wish people would stop putting real men on the covers of books, because the man on this cover, is giving ✨serial killer✨ and not in a hot way. 🤭
**I came to edit this review because I was having a yap about age gaps with my book bestie**
This was my first age-gap-ish book and like…. It felt.....weird?
I really liked both of the characters separately as humans, but Jonah was meant to be like 24???
But his character is SEVERELY AGED DOWN IMO, he acts like he's between 12-15 at best, 90% of the time. (I thought that age-gap might not be my fave, but I realise now, I have no problem with the age-gap element, my problem is when the younger mc is too child-like)
I don’t know if it’s just me, but the attraction between these two just didn’t feel realistic… Gray is posed as this hot mysterious lawyer man, always looking slick in a suit, very intelligent etc. and Jonah just felt like a LITERAL kid half the time doing and saying THE WEIRDEST SHIT?
On a side note: TO BE FAIR, the dirty talk was kinda fire 🔥🔥
But then, in some other chapter, Jonah is all “I had a staring contest with pigeons”.................................
................................................
................................................
................................................
.................................................................................. wot?
Jonah and the pigeon be like:
….. uhhhh okay Jonah? Wtf is going on?
GRAY, PLEASE STAND UP IN FRONT OF THE CLASS AND TELL ME WHY YOU WANT TO INSERT YOURSELF INTO THIS MAN(/child)?????????
I SIMPLY CANNOT get my brain around the weird juxtaposition between "sunshine character with dick piercings and a dirty mouth" Jonah & "Chasing frogs like a 12 year old" Jonah. 💀💀💀
Shame because I really liked hold me under, and now I’m not sure if I’ll continue the series.
Also I wish people would stop putting real men on the covers of books, because the man on this cover, is giving ✨serial killer✨ and not in a hot way. 🤭
**I came to edit this review because I was having a yap about age gaps with my book bestie**
July 27, 2022
Available now!!
Disclaimer, this review is going to be a mess but at least we know it's consistent with state in which this gem left me 😮💨 also I think I kept it as spoiler free as possible!
I'm not ashamed to admit that I actually hugged my phone and cried when this book ended. I'm still crying and it's not the tears of sadness but of elation and all the best feelings combined. I don't even have words. I'm also not ashamed that I practically assaulted you all with my consistent updates. Sorrynotsorry? Oh yeah! ALSO I'm searching for a suitable rooftop to scream the words "GO READ THIS FANTASTIC BOOK" from so if anyone has any recommendations hmu please. Thankssss
Because I'm hungry, I'm choosing a food metaphor to describe the level of angst in this book okay? So here goes: Yes, this book is vastly different from its 'predecessor' on the scoville scale of pain. If book 1 was a Carolina Reaper, I'd say this was more like a Jalapeño. Subtle notes of pain but not overwhelming or long-suffering and also very subjective depending on who you ask. I'm Nigerian sooo Jalapeños do nothing for me 😂 although I did full-on-ugly-cry once while reading... but I digress
The lack of the all-consuming kind of angst doesn't make it any less all-consuming. No no no, the mere existence of the gorgeous whirlwind that is Jonah Scott made it so that I couldn't even extricate myself from my screen once I started no matter how hard I tried. Gosh, I love him 🥺
"Evolution has conditioned the human body to fixate on its greatest threat or its greatest chance of survival. I don’t know which he’s supposed to be."
Also lightbulb moment because I'm a freaking genius but WHIRLWIND?! BOOK 2's ELEMENT IS AIR! I'll accept my trophy in the form of cash to pay off my student loans 😌 actually scratch that, I think Riley deserves that trophy lmao ... I digress again (i'mahotmess)
In the beginning Jonah felt a bit detached, confused, removed from reality or perhaps just existing in a different sphere than the rest of the world. And that's not a bad thing. Especially not in a world that misunderstands you at every turn. I loved him for all the ways he was simultaneously apologetically unapologetic. The epitome of contradictions and disorder.
And Gray. My baby Gray (don't tell him I said that 😂). I just want to hug him in a warm blanket. If I could come up with three words to describe him it'd be control, tether, and routine. He's basically a control-freak who needs his routine to tether him to reality. Yeah that's it 😭 And again, not a surprising consequence of basically carrying the world on your shoulders. Gray is the epitome of strict order.
"...[Jonah] makes me feel shitty. The absolute simplicity of his frank, unpretentious kindness."
How perfect are they for each other though?! Cause we all know what happens to order when disorders comes knocking (if it is even polite enough to knock) 🤭 That's exactly how Jonah enters Gray's world: a massive ball of disorder. Like the storm that whips through Gray's routine and upends everything in its careful construction, in a way that works to unveil all the beauty and light hidden within. And for Jonah, Gray becomes his tether, his anchor with a chain long enough to do a wonderful job of securing him to earth while allowing him the freedom to sail as far as his heart desires
"Perhaps we build shelter for each other out of the wreckage of all the things we most wanted someone to tell us."
Although this book can be technically classified as a slowburn, I could already feel the warmth from the spark existed right from their initial meet cute. Or the subtle way they cared for each other so deeply (even before they officially got together) and seemed to just fit like Yin and Yang or as Jonah said about Ethan and Victor, "Like they’re one soul in two bodies..."
I could go on and on about my favourite things but in the interest of keeping this spoiler free, I'll just say that this book made me feel like I was floating on a cloud. Cloud 9. And it reminded me so much of why I fell in love with reading. It provided that escape from reality and got me so invested in another world. A world I so badly wish I could crawl into. For that reason alone, this book gets all the stars in all the galaxies and the multiverse 💗
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
Also special shoutout to Victor and his borderline offensive honesty that we know and love. I'll take all the Ethan and Victor cameos all the damn day long 🤤
Riley Nash has such a way with words and I honestly want to sit here and dissect every single word of every single line in every single scene because they were all so meaningful. They didn't waste a damn letter. This author writes so beautifully and I will be a forever fan!
And that epilogue made me feel 60 different emotions at once. Damn. DA-YUM. UGH PLEASE READ THIS BOOK I promise you will not be disappointed!
I'm so sad that I have to wait for book 3 but also so freaking excited because it smells like forced proximity and that's one of my favourite scents 😭😭😭
P.S. I wrote 95% of this review while at 74%... I just knew
Oh and one final quote I loved so much 💜💜:
“You’re his home...no matter how far he roams, you make sure he knows that you aren’t going anywhere. If he’s like Victor, no one else has ever wanted him like that.”
Disclaimer, this review is going to be a mess but at least we know it's consistent with state in which this gem left me 😮💨 also I think I kept it as spoiler free as possible!
I'm not ashamed to admit that I actually hugged my phone and cried when this book ended. I'm still crying and it's not the tears of sadness but of elation and all the best feelings combined. I don't even have words. I'm also not ashamed that I practically assaulted you all with my consistent updates. Sorrynotsorry? Oh yeah! ALSO I'm searching for a suitable rooftop to scream the words "GO READ THIS FANTASTIC BOOK" from so if anyone has any recommendations hmu please. Thankssss
Because I'm hungry, I'm choosing a food metaphor to describe the level of angst in this book okay? So here goes: Yes, this book is vastly different from its 'predecessor' on the scoville scale of pain. If book 1 was a Carolina Reaper, I'd say this was more like a Jalapeño. Subtle notes of pain but not overwhelming or long-suffering and also very subjective depending on who you ask. I'm Nigerian sooo Jalapeños do nothing for me 😂 although I did full-on-ugly-cry once while reading... but I digress
The lack of the all-consuming kind of angst doesn't make it any less all-consuming. No no no, the mere existence of the gorgeous whirlwind that is Jonah Scott made it so that I couldn't even extricate myself from my screen once I started no matter how hard I tried. Gosh, I love him 🥺
"Evolution has conditioned the human body to fixate on its greatest threat or its greatest chance of survival. I don’t know which he’s supposed to be."
Also lightbulb moment because I'm a freaking genius but WHIRLWIND?! BOOK 2's ELEMENT IS AIR! I'll accept my trophy in the form of cash to pay off my student loans 😌 actually scratch that, I think Riley deserves that trophy lmao ... I digress again (i'mahotmess)
In the beginning Jonah felt a bit detached, confused, removed from reality or perhaps just existing in a different sphere than the rest of the world. And that's not a bad thing. Especially not in a world that misunderstands you at every turn. I loved him for all the ways he was simultaneously apologetically unapologetic. The epitome of contradictions and disorder.
And Gray. My baby Gray (don't tell him I said that 😂). I just want to hug him in a warm blanket. If I could come up with three words to describe him it'd be control, tether, and routine. He's basically a control-freak who needs his routine to tether him to reality. Yeah that's it 😭 And again, not a surprising consequence of basically carrying the world on your shoulders. Gray is the epitome of strict order.
"...[Jonah] makes me feel shitty. The absolute simplicity of his frank, unpretentious kindness."
How perfect are they for each other though?! Cause we all know what happens to order when disorders comes knocking (if it is even polite enough to knock) 🤭 That's exactly how Jonah enters Gray's world: a massive ball of disorder. Like the storm that whips through Gray's routine and upends everything in its careful construction, in a way that works to unveil all the beauty and light hidden within. And for Jonah, Gray becomes his tether, his anchor with a chain long enough to do a wonderful job of securing him to earth while allowing him the freedom to sail as far as his heart desires
"Perhaps we build shelter for each other out of the wreckage of all the things we most wanted someone to tell us."
Although this book can be technically classified as a slowburn, I could already feel the warmth from the spark existed right from their initial meet cute. Or the subtle way they cared for each other so deeply (even before they officially got together) and seemed to just fit like Yin and Yang or as Jonah said about Ethan and Victor, "Like they’re one soul in two bodies..."
I could go on and on about my favourite things but in the interest of keeping this spoiler free, I'll just say that this book made me feel like I was floating on a cloud. Cloud 9. And it reminded me so much of why I fell in love with reading. It provided that escape from reality and got me so invested in another world. A world I so badly wish I could crawl into. For that reason alone, this book gets all the stars in all the galaxies and the multiverse 💗
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
Also special shoutout to Victor and his borderline offensive honesty that we know and love. I'll take all the Ethan and Victor cameos all the damn day long 🤤
Riley Nash has such a way with words and I honestly want to sit here and dissect every single word of every single line in every single scene because they were all so meaningful. They didn't waste a damn letter. This author writes so beautifully and I will be a forever fan!
And that epilogue made me feel 60 different emotions at once. Damn. DA-YUM. UGH PLEASE READ THIS BOOK I promise you will not be disappointed!
I'm so sad that I have to wait for book 3 but also so freaking excited because it smells like forced proximity and that's one of my favourite scents 😭😭😭
P.S. I wrote 95% of this review while at 74%... I just knew
Oh and one final quote I loved so much 💜💜:
“You’re his home...no matter how far he roams, you make sure he knows that you aren’t going anywhere. If he’s like Victor, no one else has ever wanted him like that.”
September 17, 2023
4.5 “surprised-the-pants-off-me” stars, rounded up because of the massive improvement between Book 1 & Book 2 of the series.
Swoon /5 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Angst /5 🥺🥺🥺🥺
Steam /5 ♨️♨️♨️♨️♨️
Plot /5 🧐🧐🧐🧐
LOLs /5 🤭🤭🤭
This story features Gray, the taciturn family lawyer & friend of Victor from Book 1. It follows the events in Book 1, where Gray is flying to a new job in a new city. On the plane, Jonah sits beside him, a younger guy from a small Mid-West towny who is coming to the big city to study. They have an intense connection after Jonah shares a secret, that leaves them both rocked. And of course, they meet again unexpectedly…
A couple of things I really loved. The positive representation of a person with both a learning disability and limb difference isn’t something we see very often, and it was carefully & intelligently written. The casual insensitivity & ableism that Jonah deals with every day gives us important insight, and one quote in particular actually made me tear up:
“Pressure grows behind my eyes, in the back of my nose, and I try to blink it away. Even nice people go out of their way not to touch my arm, like missing limbs are contagious. I didn’t realize how much I hoped he’d be different.”
All the ways that Gray helps Jonah adapt to his differences, from changing the reading font & giving him audiobooks, to helping him learn to knot a tie with one hand, adds to the emotional connection in their relationship. My heart ached for these guys who desperately needed each other.
The other thing I was TOTALLY here for was the steam factor. Hooeeeeeee!! It all starts off with unexpected piercings, with creative s3x scenes and a filthy streak that made my screen nearly burst into flames. Yes please. More please…
The character arcs for both Gray AND Jonah were surprisingly nuanced. Jonah’s increased confidence & self esteem made my heart smile. And after some unexpectedly heavy angst that made me sob, the HEA in the epilogue is DIVINE.
Read this. Honestly. It’s something special, and these boys will hang around in your heart, like they are for me.
Check out my reviews and MM content on Instagram, Facebook, and Bookbub, all under the same name! I gratefully received an advance copy from GRR and this is my honest review.
Swoon /5 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Angst /5 🥺🥺🥺🥺
Steam /5 ♨️♨️♨️♨️♨️
Plot /5 🧐🧐🧐🧐
LOLs /5 🤭🤭🤭
This story features Gray, the taciturn family lawyer & friend of Victor from Book 1. It follows the events in Book 1, where Gray is flying to a new job in a new city. On the plane, Jonah sits beside him, a younger guy from a small Mid-West towny who is coming to the big city to study. They have an intense connection after Jonah shares a secret, that leaves them both rocked. And of course, they meet again unexpectedly…
A couple of things I really loved. The positive representation of a person with both a learning disability and limb difference isn’t something we see very often, and it was carefully & intelligently written. The casual insensitivity & ableism that Jonah deals with every day gives us important insight, and one quote in particular actually made me tear up:
“Pressure grows behind my eyes, in the back of my nose, and I try to blink it away. Even nice people go out of their way not to touch my arm, like missing limbs are contagious. I didn’t realize how much I hoped he’d be different.”
All the ways that Gray helps Jonah adapt to his differences, from changing the reading font & giving him audiobooks, to helping him learn to knot a tie with one hand, adds to the emotional connection in their relationship. My heart ached for these guys who desperately needed each other.
The other thing I was TOTALLY here for was the steam factor. Hooeeeeeee!! It all starts off with unexpected piercings, with creative s3x scenes and a filthy streak that made my screen nearly burst into flames. Yes please. More please…
The character arcs for both Gray AND Jonah were surprisingly nuanced. Jonah’s increased confidence & self esteem made my heart smile. And after some unexpectedly heavy angst that made me sob, the HEA in the epilogue is DIVINE.
Read this. Honestly. It’s something special, and these boys will hang around in your heart, like they are for me.
Check out my reviews and MM content on Instagram, Facebook, and Bookbub, all under the same name! I gratefully received an advance copy from GRR and this is my honest review.
August 23, 2022
If "Hold Me Under" was a buffet of angst, "Make Me Fall" is a fantabulous voyage about healing...
I've been a fan of Riley Nash since I read "Hold Me Under". That book was amazing. But with this one, the author has managed to carve a permanent place in my heart. "Make Me Fall" was simply everything is love. While reading this book, I felt like it has been written for ME. An achingly beautiful book about love and healing, frienship and family. I can't recommend this book enough.
I thought the disability representation was really well done. Jonah lost his left hand at the age of three. But he never let his disability stop him from doing anything. Trust me when I say this, Jonah is one of the most energetic characters I have ever come across to. He's independent, proud, impulsive and chaotic. Just like Gray said, Jonah is a force of nature. A whirlwind. Nothing can stop him. Jonah's insecure though. He has dyslexia which makes him feel unworthy. Everyone around him underestimates Jonah. Finally when Gray sees him, really sees him, Jonah finds a place where he belongs.
Gray one the other hand, is a calm and quite person. As Jonah said it, Gray feels a lot but he feels quietly. Gray is a uptight, rude, bossy grump on the outside. However underneath it all, lies vulnerability, fear and hurt. He's caring and sweet. He carries the weight of the whole world on his shoulders. But once he finds a person to share his burdens with, we get to see the cute side of him. His sweet endorsement, his little smiles and his big heart had me melted like an ice cream, basking in the warmth of sun.
I loved the chemistry between this couple. Gray and Jonah is doubtless one of the best couples I've ever meet. The romance was dynamic, soothing and heart warming. It had me in tears more than once. Some parts of their were heart breaking. But at the end, they got a hea. To be honest, the epilogue was my favourite part of the book.
“I missed you too. The world is a very peaceful place without you in it, and I guess you’ve ruined me for peaceful.”
I lean back, find his gaze. “I love you too, you know.”
I've been a fan of Riley Nash since I read "Hold Me Under". That book was amazing. But with this one, the author has managed to carve a permanent place in my heart. "Make Me Fall" was simply everything is love. While reading this book, I felt like it has been written for ME. An achingly beautiful book about love and healing, frienship and family. I can't recommend this book enough.
"I don’t think I’m ever going to kiss someone again.
But if I had, maybe it would have been right here, right now, just like this."
"When I see the look on his face, I know it’s going to be okay. We’re going to figure it out. The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts."
I thought the disability representation was really well done. Jonah lost his left hand at the age of three. But he never let his disability stop him from doing anything. Trust me when I say this, Jonah is one of the most energetic characters I have ever come across to. He's independent, proud, impulsive and chaotic. Just like Gray said, Jonah is a force of nature. A whirlwind. Nothing can stop him. Jonah's insecure though. He has dyslexia which makes him feel unworthy. Everyone around him underestimates Jonah. Finally when Gray sees him, really sees him, Jonah finds a place where he belongs.
"I search desperately for any way to tell him how he makes me feel, any language that doesn't need words. Because I've never been any good with words."
Gray one the other hand, is a calm and quite person. As Jonah said it, Gray feels a lot but he feels quietly. Gray is a uptight, rude, bossy grump on the outside. However underneath it all, lies vulnerability, fear and hurt. He's caring and sweet. He carries the weight of the whole world on his shoulders. But once he finds a person to share his burdens with, we get to see the cute side of him. His sweet endorsement, his little smiles and his big heart had me melted like an ice cream, basking in the warmth of sun.
"What is the path that leads to love? What strange nights and wrong turns and what mysteries? What is the moment you open your eyes and find your heart split into two where it was once whole."
I loved the chemistry between this couple. Gray and Jonah is doubtless one of the best couples I've ever meet. The romance was dynamic, soothing and heart warming. It had me in tears more than once. Some parts of their were heart breaking. But at the end, they got a hea. To be honest, the epilogue was my favourite part of the book.
“When they know you love them, they give you absolutely everything, all of themselves, and that’s where we get our strength.”
July 24, 2022
*** I reviewed a complimentary copy of this book.***
Make Me Fall is an endearing opposites attract grumpy/sunshine romance with Jonah being one of the kindest and most sincere character I have ever read. His unique attitude and perspective is a breath of fresh air that charms the robotic Gray into becoming completely enamored with.
This story starts with Jonah flying across the country to start his first year at law school. He is a bit of klutz without any filter, which startles his seat neighbor, Gray. Overall Gray is an utter joy as a character. I enjoyed how opposite his personality is to Jonah. Gray is detached, emotionless and clinical which complements Jonah's emotional ramblings very well. As their flight progresses Gray becomes more and more consumed at how oddly adorable Jonah is.
Gray and Jonah have an encounter, sparks fly and they both expect to never see one another again, but fate has other plans. Gray and Jonah meet again six month later, still transfixed by the other and what happens next is a slow-burn romance that is so utterly sweet and wholesome while both learn and grow together in such an earnest and beautiful way.
Overall Make Me Fall is a wonderful story that has many important topics addressed that were handled with such considerate care. Jonah and Gray are complete opposites in every way possible, which makes for their connection that much more meaningful. Such a beautiful story.
Make Me Fall is an endearing opposites attract grumpy/sunshine romance with Jonah being one of the kindest and most sincere character I have ever read. His unique attitude and perspective is a breath of fresh air that charms the robotic Gray into becoming completely enamored with.
This story starts with Jonah flying across the country to start his first year at law school. He is a bit of klutz without any filter, which startles his seat neighbor, Gray. Overall Gray is an utter joy as a character. I enjoyed how opposite his personality is to Jonah. Gray is detached, emotionless and clinical which complements Jonah's emotional ramblings very well. As their flight progresses Gray becomes more and more consumed at how oddly adorable Jonah is.
Gray and Jonah have an encounter, sparks fly and they both expect to never see one another again, but fate has other plans. Gray and Jonah meet again six month later, still transfixed by the other and what happens next is a slow-burn romance that is so utterly sweet and wholesome while both learn and grow together in such an earnest and beautiful way.
Overall Make Me Fall is a wonderful story that has many important topics addressed that were handled with such considerate care. Jonah and Gray are complete opposites in every way possible, which makes for their connection that much more meaningful. Such a beautiful story.
January 10, 2023
*audio review:
i don't know from which pocket of the woods Riley Nash found these narrators, but what stellar choices! Michael Gallagher and Theo Sinclair did a fantastic job with their respective characters and really brought the story to life. i hope they both narrate more in the mm space in the future, especially Michael (who i believe narrated Jonah's part? although with my track record, i wouldn't be surprised if i flubbed this 50/50 chance of being right 🤣 please correct me if i'm mistaken). in other words, get the audiobook!!
*story review:
SO SOFT. hurt/comfort, an emotionally eviscerating yet warm balm to the soul
[4.25] a story of opposites fated to come together (via a spontaneous mile high club encounter BUT OF COURSE) and fill in the missing pieces of each other's hearts - a tried and true way to get a romantic like me to drown in a fountain of feels :')
add in the age difference (13 years) and height difference (top of Jonah's head level with Gray's shoulder) on top of their diametrically opposed personalities, and these two are truly a study in contrasts.
i was in love with Jonah's free-spirited nature emanating solid golden retriever vibes from page one, and the urge to pat his head and tell him he did a good job was palpably strong 🥺 i really appreciated how his physical & learning disabilities were portrayed as just another facet of his person, and Gray never blinked twice.
Gray piqued my interest in Victor's book, and after seeing the aftermath of past events from his perspective—suffocating in guilt, denying pleasures in his own life as a form of self-flagellation—i can't put into words just how much he needed Jonah at this point in his life. thank goodness he’s happy now 😭
electric sparks fly the moment they get their hands on each other, but their relationship is far more than physical as is shown by the numerous ways they complement each other in a supremely sweet balance of personalities. my heart!
in terms of niggles, i'd have to point to the case side plot. i understand it mainly served as a setup for the next book, but the tepid sense of foreboding/high stakes that i thrived on in book 1 as well as some aspects of the resolution had me scratching my head. on the other hand, this could be the exact reason to recommend this installment to the portion of the audience who found book 1 to be too intense for their liking. in any case, there's bound to be a book in this series that will click with you based on the variety we've seen so far.
i have said this a bazillion times and i'll say it again: i absolutely adore Riley Nash's writing style—so many passages, sappy quotes, and wondrously banterific dialogue highlighted on my kindle—so i hope you give them a chance if you haven't already. may you enjoy their stories as much as, if not more, than me ✨
(sorry to Gloria for not spamming her like i promised... life has basically turned into the equivalent of the heat wave right now and needs to chill out already so i can go back to carefree reading *stares longingly at my tbr mountain* 😭)
Thank you to GRR and the publisher for providing an advanced copy as well as a complimentary audio copy of the book. This is my honest review :)
i don't know from which pocket of the woods Riley Nash found these narrators, but what stellar choices! Michael Gallagher and Theo Sinclair did a fantastic job with their respective characters and really brought the story to life. i hope they both narrate more in the mm space in the future, especially Michael (who i believe narrated Jonah's part? although with my track record, i wouldn't be surprised if i flubbed this 50/50 chance of being right 🤣 please correct me if i'm mistaken). in other words, get the audiobook!!
*story review:
Hot, muscled limbs wrap around me, draw me in until I'm surrounded by Jonah, his fingers stroking along my jaw. "I'm still here," he breathes.
What a mistake, to have him here when I should be lonely. To take from him when I have nothing to give back.
"You're so brave, Gray." He smooths my hair back from my face, his forehead resting against my temple. "I wish you never had to be afraid again."
SO SOFT. hurt/comfort, an emotionally eviscerating yet warm balm to the soul
[4.25] a story of opposites fated to come together (via a spontaneous mile high club encounter BUT OF COURSE) and fill in the missing pieces of each other's hearts - a tried and true way to get a romantic like me to drown in a fountain of feels :')
add in the age difference (13 years) and height difference (top of Jonah's head level with Gray's shoulder) on top of their diametrically opposed personalities, and these two are truly a study in contrasts.
i was in love with Jonah's free-spirited nature emanating solid golden retriever vibes from page one, and the urge to pat his head and tell him he did a good job was palpably strong 🥺 i really appreciated how his physical & learning disabilities were portrayed as just another facet of his person, and Gray never blinked twice.
Gray piqued my interest in Victor's book, and after seeing the aftermath of past events from his perspective—suffocating in guilt, denying pleasures in his own life as a form of self-flagellation—i can't put into words just how much he needed Jonah at this point in his life. thank goodness he’s happy now 😭
electric sparks fly the moment they get their hands on each other, but their relationship is far more than physical as is shown by the numerous ways they complement each other in a supremely sweet balance of personalities. my heart!
in terms of niggles, i'd have to point to the case side plot. i understand it mainly served as a setup for the next book, but the tepid sense of foreboding/high stakes that i thrived on in book 1 as well as some aspects of the resolution had me scratching my head. on the other hand, this could be the exact reason to recommend this installment to the portion of the audience who found book 1 to be too intense for their liking. in any case, there's bound to be a book in this series that will click with you based on the variety we've seen so far.
i have said this a bazillion times and i'll say it again: i absolutely adore Riley Nash's writing style—so many passages, sappy quotes, and wondrously banterific dialogue highlighted on my kindle—so i hope you give them a chance if you haven't already. may you enjoy their stories as much as, if not more, than me ✨
(sorry to Gloria for not spamming her like i promised... life has basically turned into the equivalent of the heat wave right now and needs to chill out already so i can go back to carefree reading *stares longingly at my tbr mountain* 😭)
Thank you to GRR and the publisher for providing an advanced copy as well as a complimentary audio copy of the book. This is my honest review :)
November 21, 2022
"You can't fly until you climb high enough to fall. It feels good. You should try it."
I loved Hold Me Under by the marvellous Riley Nash and was waiting desperately for the next instalment in her Water, Air, Earth, Fire series. Make Me Fall did not disappoint.
Jonah and Gray are a completely different dynamic from Victor and Ethan (as an aside, I loved the cameo appearances from them in this book❣️), and if you found Hold Me Under too angsty and gritty for your palate, you will definitely gravitate towards this one.
Gray is our older, grumpy, guilt and ansgt-ridden lawyer from Hold Me Under and Jonah is the oh so young, lovable and free ray of sunshine that pulls him out of the dark. But how can two people who are clearly so opposite in every single way ever make it together? Prepare to have your heart schmooshed and broken and repaired over and over in this little bit of heaven.
"On paper, none of this works - a boy and a man, the sun and the moon, things that aren't supposed to touch. Neither of us are ready. It feels like reversing the tide, the entire polarity of the earth."
Bring on Show Me Wonders!
4.5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I loved Hold Me Under by the marvellous Riley Nash and was waiting desperately for the next instalment in her Water, Air, Earth, Fire series. Make Me Fall did not disappoint.
Jonah and Gray are a completely different dynamic from Victor and Ethan (as an aside, I loved the cameo appearances from them in this book❣️), and if you found Hold Me Under too angsty and gritty for your palate, you will definitely gravitate towards this one.
Gray is our older, grumpy, guilt and ansgt-ridden lawyer from Hold Me Under and Jonah is the oh so young, lovable and free ray of sunshine that pulls him out of the dark. But how can two people who are clearly so opposite in every single way ever make it together? Prepare to have your heart schmooshed and broken and repaired over and over in this little bit of heaven.
"On paper, none of this works - a boy and a man, the sun and the moon, things that aren't supposed to touch. Neither of us are ready. It feels like reversing the tide, the entire polarity of the earth."
Bring on Show Me Wonders!
4.5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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November 30, 2022
"On paper, none of this works — a boy and a man, the sun and the moon, things that aren't supposed to touch."
Make Me Fall was so different from Hold Me Under but just as wonderful. I could not put it down until the last page.
We have Gray, who has been shaken to the core after learning the horrific abuse suffered by a person dear to him and covered up by his boss, all right under him. He also has little trust in others from being betrayed by his ex-husband in the past. He is guarded with walls as high as the sky. However, when sweet Jonah crosses his path, soon, those walls start to crack.
"You're the sun through the trees after a storm."
Jonah is a bright, sweet innocent soul. However, he also carries heavy burdens. Yet he is so bright, so hopeful and caring towards others. He has faced so much from others due to his physical and learning disability. People often underestimate him or think he is stupid. He also struggles with his sexuality as he comes to terms with his bi-sexuality. He fears that he will disappoint his parents.
I love how they were so perfect for one another. Grumpy/Sunshine personified. Their chemistry was instant from the first moment they met on the flight. You honestly can help but cheer them on. They are very much different but fit together like perfect pieces of a puzzle!
The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts.
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He's six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
I also love how sensual, dirty and hot the sex scenes were. Like goodness, it was 5/5 spicy. I loved the piercings as well, it seems so out of character at first, but it is so Jonah. I love first-time and baby gay (bi-sexual) stories, and this was so perfect. Thank you, Riley.
Seeing Gray heal and trust again and Jonah gain self-confidence as he finds what he wants to do in life was endearing to see. The character development was subtle and so natural. I also loved how they quietly observed one another, picking up on each other ques and needs.
The writing.
I said this in my review of Hold Me Under, but Riley Nash has such a poetic and lyrical quality to their writing. It is smooth as water and is able to evoke so much emotion out of you. It is easy to read and be pulled in. I am still sitting amazed that this is only their second book!?
I also loved seeing Victor and Ethan again!
Overall. I can not recommend this series enough. Wonderful characters, wonderful story, wonderful writing. If you love sunshine/grumpy pairing, age gap, sexual awakening, and an emotional love story - this is it.
I can not wait to read And All Their Stars and Show Me Wonders next!
Make Me Fall was so different from Hold Me Under but just as wonderful. I could not put it down until the last page.
We have Gray, who has been shaken to the core after learning the horrific abuse suffered by a person dear to him and covered up by his boss, all right under him. He also has little trust in others from being betrayed by his ex-husband in the past. He is guarded with walls as high as the sky. However, when sweet Jonah crosses his path, soon, those walls start to crack.
"You're the sun through the trees after a storm."
Jonah is a bright, sweet innocent soul. However, he also carries heavy burdens. Yet he is so bright, so hopeful and caring towards others. He has faced so much from others due to his physical and learning disability. People often underestimate him or think he is stupid. He also struggles with his sexuality as he comes to terms with his bi-sexuality. He fears that he will disappoint his parents.
I love how they were so perfect for one another. Grumpy/Sunshine personified. Their chemistry was instant from the first moment they met on the flight. You honestly can help but cheer them on. They are very much different but fit together like perfect pieces of a puzzle!
The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts.
"I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He's six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin."
I also love how sensual, dirty and hot the sex scenes were. Like goodness, it was 5/5 spicy. I loved the piercings as well, it seems so out of character at first, but it is so Jonah. I love first-time and baby gay (bi-sexual) stories, and this was so perfect. Thank you, Riley.
Seeing Gray heal and trust again and Jonah gain self-confidence as he finds what he wants to do in life was endearing to see. The character development was subtle and so natural. I also loved how they quietly observed one another, picking up on each other ques and needs.
The writing.
I said this in my review of Hold Me Under, but Riley Nash has such a poetic and lyrical quality to their writing. It is smooth as water and is able to evoke so much emotion out of you. It is easy to read and be pulled in. I am still sitting amazed that this is only their second book!?
I also loved seeing Victor and Ethan again!
Overall. I can not recommend this series enough. Wonderful characters, wonderful story, wonderful writing. If you love sunshine/grumpy pairing, age gap, sexual awakening, and an emotional love story - this is it.
I can not wait to read And All Their Stars and Show Me Wonders next!
June 4, 2024
5/5⭐ 3/5🌶️ 3/5😱
What a banger
One of my best reads of 2024
Riley can write a romance, and the way he wrote Jonah was just... so endearing, uninhibited, not weighed down by his learning nor physical disabilities. Free, basically. We could all benefit from being a little bit like Jonah. Gray is maybe the absolute polar opposite, and the way i pictured him, he was written based on Harvey Specter (Suits, yum). This story is about Jonah, an aspiring law student in NY, and Gray, a successful lawyer, who we have met in the first book (he handles Victor's process in the end).
Jonah and Gray have a mile-high-club meet-cute on a plane, don't exchange names, but do exchange some hot moments in the airplane lavatory, which is a huge epiphany for Jonah, who struggles with his bi-sexuality. This book has so many moments, from the first encounter, that made me squeal. Like, Gray gives up resistance first (this is when they meet again, by chance, 6 months after their airplane moment):
[...] I pull in a shaky breath as we stare at each other. And then I fucking give up because this is too much and I'm not that good of a person. "Show me."
He takes Jonah on a journey of self discovery of his sexuality, and it's hot but also so funny and relatable and real:
[...] I probably can't suck a dick and have a panic attack at the same time, so I take that giant fucking mess and set it aside for later.
Jonah is cute and so real, he tries to get to know Gray through tangible things, so while in his house, he finds a picture of Gray with his ex, the one who hurt him so bad he is now an emotionless robot (he really isn't but it's a whole thing) so he keeps the picture. I mean, i have known to have psycho moments like that in the past, and i relate so hard.
[...] And then maybe I fold it so the other dude is on the back and put it in my wallet, like an absolute fucking freak. - melt.
By the way, Jonah is missing his lower arm from below elbow down, and his whole thing is how people are very awkward around him missing that limb, like "it's contagious", and Gray, from the very beginning, just sees Jonah as he is, missing that part of himself, and that breaks your heart and also simultaneously puts it back together.
[...] I can't come back from this. Even if we break up, even if I never see him again, some part of me will forever be stuck on the moment where Gray Freeman remembered my hand.
Anyway, this is a top read, highly recommended is you like relatively high angst spicy m/m romance that includes:
⚖️Age gap (I believe Jonah is 23/24 and Gray is 36)
⚖️hard earned HEA
⚖️Bi-awakening vs some light internalized homophobia rep
⚖️Disability rep (physical, missing a limb, and learning, dyslexia)
⚖️Mutual pining
Also, on the disability, i usually steer clear of romance reads where one of the characters is disfigured. Probably on the shallow side, i feel like i want them all hot and perfectly complete in the physical sense, so imagine my surprise when all i felt was the desire to read more about it,
and fascination with the way Gray dealt with it. It was everything. Also, the way Gray 'tamed' the wild and free Jonah, without attempting to do just that was so beautiful. I don't even know what Riley puts in his writing, is it drugs? I think it might be.
All my Water, Air, Earth & Fire reviews:
Hold Me Under - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Make Me Fall - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Show Me Wonders - TBR
Teach Me To Sin - TBR
What a banger
One of my best reads of 2024
Riley can write a romance, and the way he wrote Jonah was just... so endearing, uninhibited, not weighed down by his learning nor physical disabilities. Free, basically. We could all benefit from being a little bit like Jonah. Gray is maybe the absolute polar opposite, and the way i pictured him, he was written based on Harvey Specter (Suits, yum). This story is about Jonah, an aspiring law student in NY, and Gray, a successful lawyer, who we have met in the first book (he handles Victor's process in the end).
Jonah and Gray have a mile-high-club meet-cute on a plane, don't exchange names, but do exchange some hot moments in the airplane lavatory, which is a huge epiphany for Jonah, who struggles with his bi-sexuality. This book has so many moments, from the first encounter, that made me squeal. Like, Gray gives up resistance first (this is when they meet again, by chance, 6 months after their airplane moment):
[...] I pull in a shaky breath as we stare at each other. And then I fucking give up because this is too much and I'm not that good of a person. "Show me."
He takes Jonah on a journey of self discovery of his sexuality, and it's hot but also so funny and relatable and real:
[...] I probably can't suck a dick and have a panic attack at the same time, so I take that giant fucking mess and set it aside for later.
Jonah is cute and so real, he tries to get to know Gray through tangible things, so while in his house, he finds a picture of Gray with his ex, the one who hurt him so bad he is now an emotionless robot (he really isn't but it's a whole thing) so he keeps the picture. I mean, i have known to have psycho moments like that in the past, and i relate so hard.
[...] And then maybe I fold it so the other dude is on the back and put it in my wallet, like an absolute fucking freak. - melt.
By the way, Jonah is missing his lower arm from below elbow down, and his whole thing is how people are very awkward around him missing that limb, like "it's contagious", and Gray, from the very beginning, just sees Jonah as he is, missing that part of himself, and that breaks your heart and also simultaneously puts it back together.
[...] I can't come back from this. Even if we break up, even if I never see him again, some part of me will forever be stuck on the moment where Gray Freeman remembered my hand.
Anyway, this is a top read, highly recommended is you like relatively high angst spicy m/m romance that includes:
⚖️Age gap (I believe Jonah is 23/24 and Gray is 36)
⚖️hard earned HEA
⚖️Bi-awakening vs some light internalized homophobia rep
⚖️Disability rep (physical, missing a limb, and learning, dyslexia)
⚖️Mutual pining
Also, on the disability, i usually steer clear of romance reads where one of the characters is disfigured. Probably on the shallow side, i feel like i want them all hot and perfectly complete in the physical sense, so imagine my surprise when all i felt was the desire to read more about it,
and fascination with the way Gray dealt with it. It was everything. Also, the way Gray 'tamed' the wild and free Jonah, without attempting to do just that was so beautiful. I don't even know what Riley puts in his writing, is it drugs? I think it might be.
All my Water, Air, Earth & Fire reviews:
Hold Me Under - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Make Me Fall - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Show Me Wonders - TBR
Teach Me To Sin - TBR
January 17, 2023
4.5/5 stars
Thank to GRR for the audiobook arc ❤️
Firstly I need to say how amazing the narrators were. I’ve read the ebook to this previously, and the voices matched each character so well. Even when one narrator was voicing the character of the other, they did such a good job and I just loved listening to this so much.
I honestly don’t know where to start with explaining how much I love Gray and Jonah. I’m not sure if it was due to the amazing narrators or what, but I loved this so much more than my first read.
Gray and Jonah are the ultimate sunshine x grumpy trope. Gray loves his routine and rules, he just wants to bury himself in his work because he feels like it’ll atone him for his sins. Jonah is the actual sun personified, has boundless energy, but also thinks he’s “dumb” and is destined to settle in life without ever exploring his bi side.
These two compliment each other so much it honestly makes me want to cry. Jonah was the light that Gray needed in his world since he holds all this unnecessary guilt (from the events in book one) and refused to let himself be happy. Gray was the support and guide Jonah needed in his life to help him figure out the path that he wanted to be on. They both showed each other the exact time of love that they needed.
Riley Nash has this wonderful style of writing and it’s just as evident here as it was in book one. I’m constantly amazed with his writing and how easy it is to fall in love with the characters he writes. Nash just knows how to write people you want to protect from all the bad things in the world.
Thank to GRR for the audiobook arc ❤️
Firstly I need to say how amazing the narrators were. I’ve read the ebook to this previously, and the voices matched each character so well. Even when one narrator was voicing the character of the other, they did such a good job and I just loved listening to this so much.
I honestly don’t know where to start with explaining how much I love Gray and Jonah. I’m not sure if it was due to the amazing narrators or what, but I loved this so much more than my first read.
Gray and Jonah are the ultimate sunshine x grumpy trope. Gray loves his routine and rules, he just wants to bury himself in his work because he feels like it’ll atone him for his sins. Jonah is the actual sun personified, has boundless energy, but also thinks he’s “dumb” and is destined to settle in life without ever exploring his bi side.
These two compliment each other so much it honestly makes me want to cry. Jonah was the light that Gray needed in his world since he holds all this unnecessary guilt (from the events in book one) and refused to let himself be happy. Gray was the support and guide Jonah needed in his life to help him figure out the path that he wanted to be on. They both showed each other the exact time of love that they needed.
Riley Nash has this wonderful style of writing and it’s just as evident here as it was in book one. I’m constantly amazed with his writing and how easy it is to fall in love with the characters he writes. Nash just knows how to write people you want to protect from all the bad things in the world.
January 16, 2024
MM Romance
Hurt/Comfort Age Gap
5 Stars ⭐️
🎵Audiobook Narrated By: Michael Gallagher and Theo Sinclair🎵 Both these narrators are new to me but I’d listen to them again. They made this story come alive.
I just want to kick my own ass for waiting so long to read this book. Listen to it in this case, but I digress. I’m my own worst enemy sometimes because I absolutely adored this book. Everyone who told me it was nothing like book one was right and I’m sorry I didn’t believe you! I’m such a clown sometimes 🤡 I am excited to read the rest of the series and I’m even considering rereading the first one via audiobook despite not liking it the first time. I was in such a bad slump when I read that book and I just wonder if it was my mood and not the book that sucked. 🤷🏻♀️
I loved Jonah and Gray so much. I want to do a proper review but I want to read their novella more so this will be quick. Characters like Jonah usually bug the hell out of me but I absolutely loved him and felt he was the perfect match for Gray. They were complete opposites but made sense together and their love story was beautiful.
💗”The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts.”💗
I’m really excited for the next book. I know it has mixed reviews but right person, wrong time is one of my very favorite tropes especially when the people are tied together due to a life changing event. The angst it’s sure to bring will delight me. 😋 Definitely glad I gave this series another go.
Hurt/Comfort Age Gap
5 Stars ⭐️
🎵Audiobook Narrated By: Michael Gallagher and Theo Sinclair🎵 Both these narrators are new to me but I’d listen to them again. They made this story come alive.
I just want to kick my own ass for waiting so long to read this book. Listen to it in this case, but I digress. I’m my own worst enemy sometimes because I absolutely adored this book. Everyone who told me it was nothing like book one was right and I’m sorry I didn’t believe you! I’m such a clown sometimes 🤡 I am excited to read the rest of the series and I’m even considering rereading the first one via audiobook despite not liking it the first time. I was in such a bad slump when I read that book and I just wonder if it was my mood and not the book that sucked. 🤷🏻♀️
I loved Jonah and Gray so much. I want to do a proper review but I want to read their novella more so this will be quick. Characters like Jonah usually bug the hell out of me but I absolutely loved him and felt he was the perfect match for Gray. They were complete opposites but made sense together and their love story was beautiful.
💗”The two halves of a whole don’t have to look anything alike; they just have to fit together into something better than the sum of its parts.”💗
I’m really excited for the next book. I know it has mixed reviews but right person, wrong time is one of my very favorite tropes especially when the people are tied together due to a life changing event. The angst it’s sure to bring will delight me. 😋 Definitely glad I gave this series another go.
July 28, 2022
I absolutely fucking loved this. From the first page onward I just couldn't put this down. I finished it within a day, I just didn't want to stop reading it.
We met Gray in the first book as Victor's rich family lawyer, who was the only real friend Victor had, and the only one he trusted until Ethan came along.
In this, it start a year and a half after the events of the first book, with Gray having gone through and finished Victor's case, and now that that's done, he's moving from LA to NYC to start new, because Gray is still heavily affected by what happened with Victor, the fact that he didn't see what had happened, and he places a lot of guilt on himself, feeling like he should have seen it in someway, somehow, and like he's somehow failed as a lawyer and a friend.
We also meet Jonah, who is going off to NYC to start law school, and is 23 while Gray is 36. They meet on the plane from LA to New York, and end up talking, Jonah letting out the secret to him that he thinks he's bisexual, but he's never been with a man to confirm. Gray offers to be that man.
After a steamy encounter where they enter the mile high club, they're supposed to never see each other after they land, but six months later, when Jonah's law professor - who is friend with Gray - has the class go on a sort of retreat in the woods, he asks Gray to come along as a special guest to help with mock interviews.
They meet again there, and the attraction and connection is still very much there. Jonah is coming to terms with his sexuality while also having to come to terms that being a lawyer isn't truly what he wants. Before that, though, Gray sees something special in him and wants to help him, and thinks being a lawyer is what Jonah really wants, and so tells him he can be his intern and get extra help.
Jonah, hoping this internship will somehow finally spark a love for lawyering, agrees.
Gray is a very stoic man, who lives with walls built up all around him. Mainly because 9 years prior, his husband left him without a word, with just a note that ended with "you should get tested" which means the asshole was cheating on him.
Gray thinks being alone is better, but then Jonah comes along, with all his hyper energy, his sweetness and kindness and it's hard for Gray to resist.
I adored these two together. The chemistry was there from page one and they balanced each other out so well. Jonah was trying to figure out what he could do with his life, as he lost his arm when he was only 2 years old and so had to figure out what he could do with one arm. Although he wants to be a mechanic and wants to prove himself to his parents, to himself, to everyone, that he could do it, work with vehicles even with one arm.
Gray has been a little lost since the thing with Victor, and he's been trying to prove himself with new cases he takes on, like the one with Oliver and Jackson, who got trapped underground in rubble because of faulty business practices by the company they worked for or who owned the underground...thing they were in, I forget the details, sorry haha. (But these two are obviously the MC's for the next book :D, which I can't wait for)
(Also, side note, I love how the author is truly including the themes of Water, Air, Earth and Fire in these novels. Like Victor and Ethan met with water involved, these two met in the Air in a plane, and Oliver and Jackson met in the underground in part of the earth. Such great connections. And the theme runs throughout the rest of the books too.)
Anyway, Gray is trying to find his own place, really, and as these two fall in love, they come into themselves and slowly find what they truly want out of life.
Their ending was just perfect and so sweet and the right ending for them. These two had some angst, for sure, but it did feel like a little less than Victor and Ethan, which was a nice change of pace - especially because it seems like Oliver and Jackson will ramp up the angst again in their book - and I just loved how sweet and wonderful these two were together.
Their "I love you's" were absolutely earned and felt right, and their HEA was 100% earned and I was so happy with their story.
Definitely two big thumbs up from me, and I HIGHLY recommend this wonderful installment in this great series by this great author who I can't wait for more from 😍
My Ratings for the Water, Air, Earth, Fire Series:
🔆 Hold Me Under: 5 stars (my review)
🔆 Make Me Fall: 5 stars
🔆 Show Me Wonders: TBR
We met Gray in the first book as Victor's rich family lawyer, who was the only real friend Victor had, and the only one he trusted until Ethan came along.
In this, it start a year and a half after the events of the first book, with Gray having gone through and finished Victor's case, and now that that's done, he's moving from LA to NYC to start new, because Gray is still heavily affected by what happened with Victor, the fact that he didn't see what had happened, and he places a lot of guilt on himself, feeling like he should have seen it in someway, somehow, and like he's somehow failed as a lawyer and a friend.
We also meet Jonah, who is going off to NYC to start law school, and is 23 while Gray is 36. They meet on the plane from LA to New York, and end up talking, Jonah letting out the secret to him that he thinks he's bisexual, but he's never been with a man to confirm. Gray offers to be that man.
After a steamy encounter where they enter the mile high club, they're supposed to never see each other after they land, but six months later, when Jonah's law professor - who is friend with Gray - has the class go on a sort of retreat in the woods, he asks Gray to come along as a special guest to help with mock interviews.
They meet again there, and the attraction and connection is still very much there. Jonah is coming to terms with his sexuality while also having to come to terms that being a lawyer isn't truly what he wants. Before that, though, Gray sees something special in him and wants to help him, and thinks being a lawyer is what Jonah really wants, and so tells him he can be his intern and get extra help.
Jonah, hoping this internship will somehow finally spark a love for lawyering, agrees.
Gray is a very stoic man, who lives with walls built up all around him. Mainly because 9 years prior, his husband left him without a word, with just a note that ended with "you should get tested" which means the asshole was cheating on him.
Gray thinks being alone is better, but then Jonah comes along, with all his hyper energy, his sweetness and kindness and it's hard for Gray to resist.
I adored these two together. The chemistry was there from page one and they balanced each other out so well. Jonah was trying to figure out what he could do with his life, as he lost his arm when he was only 2 years old and so had to figure out what he could do with one arm. Although he wants to be a mechanic and wants to prove himself to his parents, to himself, to everyone, that he could do it, work with vehicles even with one arm.
Gray has been a little lost since the thing with Victor, and he's been trying to prove himself with new cases he takes on, like the one with Oliver and Jackson, who got trapped underground in rubble because of faulty business practices by the company they worked for or who owned the underground...thing they were in, I forget the details, sorry haha. (But these two are obviously the MC's for the next book :D, which I can't wait for)
(Also, side note, I love how the author is truly including the themes of Water, Air, Earth and Fire in these novels. Like Victor and Ethan met with water involved, these two met in the Air in a plane, and Oliver and Jackson met in the underground in part of the earth. Such great connections. And the theme runs throughout the rest of the books too.)
Anyway, Gray is trying to find his own place, really, and as these two fall in love, they come into themselves and slowly find what they truly want out of life.
Their ending was just perfect and so sweet and the right ending for them. These two had some angst, for sure, but it did feel like a little less than Victor and Ethan, which was a nice change of pace - especially because it seems like Oliver and Jackson will ramp up the angst again in their book - and I just loved how sweet and wonderful these two were together.
Their "I love you's" were absolutely earned and felt right, and their HEA was 100% earned and I was so happy with their story.
Definitely two big thumbs up from me, and I HIGHLY recommend this wonderful installment in this great series by this great author who I can't wait for more from 😍
My Ratings for the Water, Air, Earth, Fire Series:
🔆 Hold Me Under: 5 stars (my review)
🔆 Make Me Fall: 5 stars
🔆 Show Me Wonders: TBR
September 12, 2023
Reread/Relisten #1: September 2023
Jonah 🥰 ugh that adorable himbo! I love him haha and Gray so serious but lights up around Jonah!
This was just as good the second time as the first time!
4.5-5 stars: January 2023
Jonah and Gray🥰🥰 now added to one of my all time favorite couples!
I love them both so much, I enjoyed their story a little more than Victor and Ethan. I felt the connection with the characters and I just LOVED Jonah so much! Ugh! Haha I am going to miss these two!
I am going to wait for the other books to go on audio! Can’t wait to see who Riley Nash chooses for the narrators! Both book one and two have stellar narrators!
Jonah 🥰 ugh that adorable himbo! I love him haha and Gray so serious but lights up around Jonah!
This was just as good the second time as the first time!
4.5-5 stars: January 2023
Jonah and Gray🥰🥰 now added to one of my all time favorite couples!
I love them both so much, I enjoyed their story a little more than Victor and Ethan. I felt the connection with the characters and I just LOVED Jonah so much! Ugh! Haha I am going to miss these two!
I am going to wait for the other books to go on audio! Can’t wait to see who Riley Nash chooses for the narrators! Both book one and two have stellar narrators!
February 19, 2023
*** 3.5 stars ***
Make Me Fall started with a bang, I was so engrossed! However, as they started to get to know each other the good tension fizzled away. They gave me an impression of a couple who were together for over 20 years. 🤷♀️The relationship become boring and I struggled to keep going.
And FFS!!!!! Why did Gray have to lose Oliver's case to his loser ex???😤
Make Me Fall started with a bang, I was so engrossed! However, as they started to get to know each other the good tension fizzled away. They gave me an impression of a couple who were together for over 20 years. 🤷♀️The relationship become boring and I struggled to keep going.
And FFS!!!!! Why did Gray have to lose Oliver's case to his loser ex???😤
November 14, 2022
3 stars for the first half of this book
5 stars for the second half
I don't know what it was, I had such a had time getting into this book. The first half dragged for me and I had such a hard time getting into it. Felt like I kept reading and nothing was happening. I kept going because I knew there had to be a reason everyone loved this book so much.
The second half of this book was so good. I couldn't put it down. It felt like a different book than the first half and I was hooked.
Also - the set up for book three, oh my god I can't wait!
5 stars for the second half
I don't know what it was, I had such a had time getting into this book. The first half dragged for me and I had such a hard time getting into it. Felt like I kept reading and nothing was happening. I kept going because I knew there had to be a reason everyone loved this book so much.
The second half of this book was so good. I couldn't put it down. It felt like a different book than the first half and I was hooked.
Also - the set up for book three, oh my god I can't wait!
August 4, 2022
Absolutely beautiful grumpy/sunshine romance with too many beautiful moments to mention them all.
I jumped right into this one after finishing the first book, who ended up leaving me in a complete emotional mess. For those of you who don’t remember: it’s the book about Victor (the former swim champion) an Ethan, the fake boyfriend who ended up saving him in more than one way. There, we meet Gray, the lawyer who worked for Victor’s father first and then for Victor himself. This book takes place immediately after Gray won Victor’s case. Gray decides start over in New York. On the plane, he meets Jonah, who’s on his way to study law. Jonah, who grew up in Iowa on a farm, the sunshine to Gray’s grump, who lost his left hand when he was a child, and who never turned down a dare and ends up taking his first bi-steps with Gray in the airplane toilet (romantic, right? 😂). And who never expect to see each other again.
As these things tend to go, they do, actually, meet again, and they’re immediately drawn to each other.
I won’t go into details because there isn’t really much drama here- they meet, they’re both convinced that there’s no way for them to be together because they’re too different - yet in the end, ofc, they do. Because that’s why we read these books - we want a HEA, even under circumstances that aren’t ideal.
So I’ll leave you with some glimpses and words, because if there’s one thing I love about this author, it’s the way she writes and makes me swoon and laugh and cry at the same time, without being cliché.
“I want to ride in your car. It’s probably still warm enough to have the windows down, right?” God help me, I’ve adopted a dog.
….
If I could write a perfect moment, piece it together from all the dreams and regrets and unshed tears and quiet breaths of my life, it wouldn’t have come close to this feeling.
…
(Maybe one of the most beautiful ways to say I love You without actually saying it)
“Don’t go on the date.” “What?” “Please don’t.” I curl up into a ball against the warm hum of the vending machine and rest my forehead on my knees. “I didn’t. I canceled.”
🥰
I jumped right into this one after finishing the first book, who ended up leaving me in a complete emotional mess. For those of you who don’t remember: it’s the book about Victor (the former swim champion) an Ethan, the fake boyfriend who ended up saving him in more than one way. There, we meet Gray, the lawyer who worked for Victor’s father first and then for Victor himself. This book takes place immediately after Gray won Victor’s case. Gray decides start over in New York. On the plane, he meets Jonah, who’s on his way to study law. Jonah, who grew up in Iowa on a farm, the sunshine to Gray’s grump, who lost his left hand when he was a child, and who never turned down a dare and ends up taking his first bi-steps with Gray in the airplane toilet (romantic, right? 😂). And who never expect to see each other again.
As these things tend to go, they do, actually, meet again, and they’re immediately drawn to each other.
I won’t go into details because there isn’t really much drama here- they meet, they’re both convinced that there’s no way for them to be together because they’re too different - yet in the end, ofc, they do. Because that’s why we read these books - we want a HEA, even under circumstances that aren’t ideal.
So I’ll leave you with some glimpses and words, because if there’s one thing I love about this author, it’s the way she writes and makes me swoon and laugh and cry at the same time, without being cliché.
“I want to ride in your car. It’s probably still warm enough to have the windows down, right?” God help me, I’ve adopted a dog.
….
If I could write a perfect moment, piece it together from all the dreams and regrets and unshed tears and quiet breaths of my life, it wouldn’t have come close to this feeling.
…
(Maybe one of the most beautiful ways to say I love You without actually saying it)
“Don’t go on the date.” “What?” “Please don’t.” I curl up into a ball against the warm hum of the vending machine and rest my forehead on my knees. “I didn’t. I canceled.”
🥰
January 6, 2023
I LOVED this, I have literally nothing else to say!
June 20, 2022
Y’all!!!!!!! Riley has done it ~again~. Lightning does in fact strike twice!!! And this time it knocked me over a cliff, falling to the depths of Jonah and Grey’s love story 🥹🥹🥹🥹 But don’t worry, if hold me under was too much angst and pain for y’a, make me fall will hit *just right*.
Would highly recommend if you like
🌞 🌧-Grump/ sunshine
😞 ♥️- Hurt/comfort
🔥 🐢-Slow burn
🪢❤️🔥-BDSM-lite
Gah! I could gush about this for hours, but I like to keep it succinct. Go read this. Riley, can’t wait for book 3 🤌🏻😁
I got an ARC for free from the author to beta read—these are my honest thoughts, feelings and reactions.
Would highly recommend if you like
🌞 🌧-Grump/ sunshine
😞 ♥️- Hurt/comfort
🔥 🐢-Slow burn
🪢❤️🔥-BDSM-lite
Gah! I could gush about this for hours, but I like to keep it succinct. Go read this. Riley, can’t wait for book 3 🤌🏻😁
I got an ARC for free from the author to beta read—these are my honest thoughts, feelings and reactions.
January 21, 2023
“You’re a force of nature,” he says, very seriously. “Nothing can break you.”
Where does he come up with this shit, always telling me what I am with such beautiful words, as if he knows me at all? I’ve lived with myself for twenty-four years and I have no idea what I am.”
I absolutely adored Jonah!!! What a gutsy and endearing character. He’s a law student who doesn’t let his disability hold him back. He manages to thaw out Gray, a starchy, perfectionist uber lawyer who just needed someone to look after to give him a sense of purpose. By the way, I hope I wasn’t the only one who kept reading Gray as Gary? This story has just the right amount of angst, plenty of feels and gorgeous writing.
—grumpy/sunshine
— age gap
— boss/intern
— bi-awakening
— hurt/comfort
— disability
— forced proximity
Where does he come up with this shit, always telling me what I am with such beautiful words, as if he knows me at all? I’ve lived with myself for twenty-four years and I have no idea what I am.”
I absolutely adored Jonah!!! What a gutsy and endearing character. He’s a law student who doesn’t let his disability hold him back. He manages to thaw out Gray, a starchy, perfectionist uber lawyer who just needed someone to look after to give him a sense of purpose. By the way, I hope I wasn’t the only one who kept reading Gray as Gary? This story has just the right amount of angst, plenty of feels and gorgeous writing.
—grumpy/sunshine
— age gap
— boss/intern
— bi-awakening
— hurt/comfort
— disability
— forced proximity
September 25, 2022
Color me surpised
After DNFing book 1, I read this with no expectations. I read it becaise I liked Gray in book 1 and he intrigued me. Add an age gap and I'm a sucker for it.
And then I met Jonah.... and everything changed. What a beautiful book filled with two beautiful characters and a beautiful events.
Gray besotted with Jonah was "chef's kiss "
Jonah finding his purpose in life and finding himself in the process is just heartwarming.
LOVED this book. I'm so glad I read it.
"But maybe in the end they were always just dreams about someone who loved me. Someone who waited so long to be loved. Until we found each other at last, like the bright edge of sunrise before the darkness disappears."
After DNFing book 1, I read this with no expectations. I read it becaise I liked Gray in book 1 and he intrigued me. Add an age gap and I'm a sucker for it.
And then I met Jonah.... and everything changed. What a beautiful book filled with two beautiful characters and a beautiful events.
Gray besotted with Jonah was "chef's kiss "
Jonah finding his purpose in life and finding himself in the process is just heartwarming.
LOVED this book. I'm so glad I read it.
"But maybe in the end they were always just dreams about someone who loved me. Someone who waited so long to be loved. Until we found each other at last, like the bright edge of sunrise before the darkness disappears."
August 3, 2022
I will do an actual review for this book soon but while I find the book to describe how much I loved this book, just know that this book is easily going on my all time favourites list.
I received an arc of this book and this is my honest opinion
I received an arc of this book and this is my honest opinion
November 8, 2023
Book safety, content warnings, and tropes down below.
(If it isn’t obvious, I couldn’t really pick three quotes lol).
“I’m scared I might be bi. Sexual,” he clarifies, like someone might assume he meant bilingual.
I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin.
I’ve read the ebook once and listened to the audiobook twice by now, and it really is a story I don’t think I’ll get tired of. I love it just as much every reread, and it makes me just as emotional every time as well, even when I know it’s coming. I think that’s a good indicator for some truly amazing writing. If you’ve read anything by Riley, you know he can write his socks off. This was also the first book I ever read by the author, and it’s still my favorite. It’s hard to review it without just saying ‘I love it’ ten different ways.
I’ve been called a lot of words. Funny. Cute. Stupid. Annoying. Hopeless. He keeps giving me new ones I’ve never had before. Bi. Good. I can’t stop playing them over and over in my head. I know deep in my chest that they don’t belong to me. I won’t get to keep them once I walk out of this bathroom door. But I’ll remember them for as long as I remember him.
The characters and their journeys/development is freaking beautiful in this book. Gray especially. That man is just hurting and very alone. Jonah showing up doesn’t automatically fix that, but he slowly but surely learns that there’s more to life than guilt and work. Jonah is a fucking ray of sunshine that is impossible to resist, and everyone is drawn to his light. It can be difficult to see how (seemingly) happy and sunshine-y people can be hurting too, but Jonah is carrying a massive weight on his shoulders, trying to make his parents proud, prove himself capable as a disabled man, *and* find his way through a sexual awakening (he is extremely capable btw, but tries twice as hard to prove it). To say their journeys aren’t easy is probably an understatement, but man it’s such a beautiful story. I haven’t read Teach Me to Sin yet, but I imagine this book will stay my favorite in the series. There’s just something incredibly special about these characters to me.
“The socially acceptable answer is three children. The honest one is five, but that’s when you scare guys off.” He expects me to be surprised that the man who knows the whole My Little Pony theme song by heart wants to be a dad. He really can be clueless sometimes.
⬇️ Blanket spoiler warning ⬇️
⚠️ Tropes & tags ⚠️
🍆 piercings
Age gap
Bisexual awakening
Disability rep
Dimples
Grumpy/sunshine
Forced proximity ish
Size difference
Praise
Dyslexic MC
Amputated arm
⚠️⚠️ Content warning ⚠️⚠️
Injury
Ableism
Disability
Explicit sexual content
Mentions of homophobia
Brief mentions of injury and amputation
⚠️⚠️⚠️ Book safety ⚠️⚠️⚠️
Cheating: No
OM/OW drama: Jonah is nearly dating a girl the second time the MCs meet (does not sleep with her). Jonah *nearly* goes on a date with someone after the MCs have hooked up. They’re not in a relationship yet (no drama).
Third-act breakup: Yes
POV: 1st person, dual POV
Genre: Contemporary romance, M/M
Strict roles or versatile: Versatile
MCs age: 24 and 36
“You’d tell me, right,” Elliot says uncertainly, “if you were worried about something?” Turning around, I flash him a smile. “You know me, man. Head empty always.” He chuckles. “You should see someone about that.” “I don’t think they’ve found a cure for stupid.” “Jonah,” he scolds automatically, but he can’t seem to find anything else to say. No one ever can.
He may be short, but he’s no twink, and that is not a twink ass. That ass lifts.
“I don’t want to wreck your car.” “Then don’t wreck it. I believe in you.” His eyes widen at those four simple words, a thoughtless joke, like they mean everything.
If I could write a perfect moment, piece it together from all the dreams and regrets and unshed tears and quiet breaths of my life, it wouldn’t have come close to this feeling.
(If it isn’t obvious, I couldn’t really pick three quotes lol).
“I’m scared I might be bi. Sexual,” he clarifies, like someone might assume he meant bilingual.
I think I finally found my princess, Mom. He’s six and a half feet tall, grumpy as hell, and talks dirty as sin.
I’ve read the ebook once and listened to the audiobook twice by now, and it really is a story I don’t think I’ll get tired of. I love it just as much every reread, and it makes me just as emotional every time as well, even when I know it’s coming. I think that’s a good indicator for some truly amazing writing. If you’ve read anything by Riley, you know he can write his socks off. This was also the first book I ever read by the author, and it’s still my favorite. It’s hard to review it without just saying ‘I love it’ ten different ways.
I’ve been called a lot of words. Funny. Cute. Stupid. Annoying. Hopeless. He keeps giving me new ones I’ve never had before. Bi. Good. I can’t stop playing them over and over in my head. I know deep in my chest that they don’t belong to me. I won’t get to keep them once I walk out of this bathroom door. But I’ll remember them for as long as I remember him.
The characters and their journeys/development is freaking beautiful in this book. Gray especially. That man is just hurting and very alone. Jonah showing up doesn’t automatically fix that, but he slowly but surely learns that there’s more to life than guilt and work. Jonah is a fucking ray of sunshine that is impossible to resist, and everyone is drawn to his light. It can be difficult to see how (seemingly) happy and sunshine-y people can be hurting too, but Jonah is carrying a massive weight on his shoulders, trying to make his parents proud, prove himself capable as a disabled man, *and* find his way through a sexual awakening (he is extremely capable btw, but tries twice as hard to prove it). To say their journeys aren’t easy is probably an understatement, but man it’s such a beautiful story. I haven’t read Teach Me to Sin yet, but I imagine this book will stay my favorite in the series. There’s just something incredibly special about these characters to me.
“The socially acceptable answer is three children. The honest one is five, but that’s when you scare guys off.” He expects me to be surprised that the man who knows the whole My Little Pony theme song by heart wants to be a dad. He really can be clueless sometimes.
⬇️ Blanket spoiler warning ⬇️
⚠️ Tropes & tags ⚠️
🍆 piercings
Age gap
Bisexual awakening
Disability rep
Dimples
Grumpy/sunshine
Forced proximity ish
Size difference
Praise
Dyslexic MC
Amputated arm
⚠️⚠️ Content warning ⚠️⚠️
Injury
Ableism
Disability
Explicit sexual content
Mentions of homophobia
Brief mentions of injury and amputation
⚠️⚠️⚠️ Book safety ⚠️⚠️⚠️
Cheating: No
OM/OW drama: Jonah is nearly dating a girl the second time the MCs meet (does not sleep with her). Jonah *nearly* goes on a date with someone after the MCs have hooked up. They’re not in a relationship yet (no drama).
Third-act breakup: Yes
POV: 1st person, dual POV
Genre: Contemporary romance, M/M
Strict roles or versatile: Versatile
MCs age: 24 and 36
“You’d tell me, right,” Elliot says uncertainly, “if you were worried about something?” Turning around, I flash him a smile. “You know me, man. Head empty always.” He chuckles. “You should see someone about that.” “I don’t think they’ve found a cure for stupid.” “Jonah,” he scolds automatically, but he can’t seem to find anything else to say. No one ever can.
He may be short, but he’s no twink, and that is not a twink ass. That ass lifts.
“I don’t want to wreck your car.” “Then don’t wreck it. I believe in you.” His eyes widen at those four simple words, a thoughtless joke, like they mean everything.
If I could write a perfect moment, piece it together from all the dreams and regrets and unshed tears and quiet breaths of my life, it wouldn’t have come close to this feeling.
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