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A fact from Esmond Venner Keogh appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 18 March 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Esmond Venner Keogh was awarded the Distinguished Conduct Medal in World War I and later protested against the Vietnam War?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Esmond Venner Keogh.

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I have no problem correcting obvious typos. However, there are a few items that seem wrong, but may be correct. They are listed below. Note that I have not yet read the Later life and subsequent sections. Djmaschek (talk) 22:10, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Early life, paragraph 1, last sentence: "nurses' employment agent" (agency?)

Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:17, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Early life, paragraph 2, first sentence: "a border at" (boarder?)

Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:17, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Between the wars, paragraph 2: "Keogh gradually gained a grip on his on course" (unclear)

I've re-worded this. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:17, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 15:42, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Esmond Venner Keogh

... that Esmond Venner Keogh (pictured) backed the winner of the 1936 Melbourne Cup at 100-1? Source: https://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/keogh-esmond-venner-bill-10724/text19003
- ALT1: ... that Esmond Venner Keogh (pictured) was awarded the Distinguished Conduct Medal in World War I and later protested against the Vietnam War? Source: https://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/keogh-esmond-venner-bill-10724/text19003
- ALT2: ... that Esmond Venner Keogh (pictured) was responsible for the production of penicillin and polio vaccine in Australia? Source: https://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/keogh-esmond-venner-bill-10724/text19003
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Electron backscatter diffraction

Created by Hawkeye7 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:58, 4 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Esmond Venner Keogh; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

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Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Hawkeye7: Good article. AGF on offline sources. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:37, 4 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]